Is that OK ?

by Ricky on July 30, 2004, 07:11:59 PM
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Hi guys..

I am glad that all people are enjoying here..

What I want to discuss it that if some one have created a poetry then posted on Yoindia .. people see that , reply it, and give him / her appreciation. That is good. But I never found anyone telling that it should be like that and like this.. ie.. shortcoming of his creation.

I want to suggest that people should also quote shortcomings so that he can learn but it should be in polite and clear word not like showing superiority of one on other. Usual Smile Usual Smile

It will help new to learn and to create quality poetry ..

Am I wrong !! would like to know other's opinion. !!

Ricky !!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2004, 12:08:09 AM »
No one is interested to comment ?
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2004, 04:33:29 PM »
I feel ur absolutely rite ricky!
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2004, 08:19:54 PM »
But seems to  be here that no one else is even interested to give their comments !!
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2004, 11:06:44 AM »
woo... it can be a gr8 help... !
absolutely.

but a creation is a creation good or poor... yeh even gr8 poets go for corrections, but the idea is in the mind of one who writes S/he may or may not be able to bring it out exactily.... others dont have the original idea, so i think it'd be difficult to correct.

but yeah!
suggestions are worth...
we get +ve responce

we may even let -ve responces... i mean....one like ' i feel u cud rethink on wt u've written n may be so n so word would prove better...'

u c wt i mean is to make it more communicative.

so may i kno if i'm rt or wrong...?  :D
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2004, 03:02:57 PM »
hmm.. but have you ever seen any -ve answer here from anyone at yoindia ?
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2004, 02:13:55 PM »
no never,-ve dt r -ve in a sense of correction or taunt...!
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2004, 02:50:12 PM »
http://www.yoindia.com/forums/ftopic1097.html

i found a kinda cool responce fm u...!
such responces must be given n we can actually discuss them:)
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2005, 04:50:53 PM »
Yo Shayers.... post some real shayari...
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2005, 05:56:39 PM »
well suggesion dena is fine and gud sometimes but like for me im not gud at urdu words and there r many ppl who know really diff words as an replacement par har bar yeh sunna ke aisa likhti acha hota ya waisa likhti acha lagta itsnt gud also.
sab ka apna apna level hai likhne ka! if ppl ask for comments then its fine!

dont know what others think abt it  Puzzled !
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2005, 06:20:18 PM »
shayad housla affzai ker liye log wah wah karte hain par shayad aap ka kahna theek hai ki IMPROVEMENT ke liye SUGGESTION dela our lena is good.

this will help in improving the quality and also will make this site as more interactive.  But only shortcomming which I feel will/may all might not like a improvement suggestions. So it should be given only on specific request of the writer.

Is my opinon correct?  But suggestion is worth trying.
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2005, 07:35:43 PM »
Yes you are right..
Quote from: "vikas"
So it should be given only on specific request of the writer.


It is good, I think every one should request then !
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2005, 10:50:57 PM »
hmmm.......right.
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