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« Reply #825 on: June 01, 2008, 06:43:52 AM »
how unimpressive ... !! ladki zooth bolti hai .... bhai logo ... point note ker lo ... yeh upper wali ladki bahut jooth bolti hai!!
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« Reply #826 on: June 01, 2008, 11:30:09 AM »
Bhai upar waala to Ladka hai, yeh upar waali to mujhse upar hai...
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« Reply #827 on: June 02, 2008, 04:37:07 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 30, 2008, 06:55:26 PM
1) Aryan Mantri--The quality of poems he has posted in khumar-e-Ishq and Shayri-e-dard are just mindblowing. Agar gunguna ke padhi jaaye to anand ke charam ki anubhuti.

2) Pooja ji-----The un-interupted dedication and her 'haazirjawabi'has let her win everbody's heart and she rules.There is one more important reason of my inclination is irrespective of any persson writing on her posts or not -she tries to read everybody and tries to comment on every page.This adds a lot to her personality.

3) Syeednaami ji----I am really impressed by him for his 'so much caring attitude' for all.He tries to help everybody to his best ability even the reciprocation from the other side is slow or negligible.There are few people like him in this world.

4) Deepak Tripathi---He is my current favourite. Agar kisi ko napi-tuli kavita karte dekha hein then its him. Jahan jin shabdon se behtar koi shabd nahi ho sakta woh hi milta hein.bahut kum mein bahut kuch kehne ki ada he sahi maayane mein kavita kehlaati hain.aur ek kavita jo kayi drishtikon jhalkaye woh sarvshreshth hain meri nazar se.

5) Khwaish ji----gehri soch aur vinamrata ke pratik.jitna bhee main inhe pudh paaya hu,mujhe sada aisa he mehsoos hua ki kabhi kabhi jo mein keval soch paaya aur likh nahi paaya-mujhe woh haasil hua he.

6) celmira ji--I have read her few times and her optimism makes me learn.

7)Mahiya ji---This is because of her boldness to stand our for the right.And I have had a chance of reading her few lines in some of the threads, the quality is intersting.

The above are based on what I feel after reading their posts,there must be many many more names which I have not been able to notice,this is my inefficiency.

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Prateek ji,

mai jayadatar jo khud se mehsoos karti hu wo hi likhati hu. magar apki kavitao ne mujhe kuch naya likhne ke liye protsahit kiya hai. Apki kavitao ka intzar rahta hai ki apko prad kar mai khud kuch naya likh saku!! Meri kavitao ko ek nai disha dene ke liye mai dil se apki shukargujar hu!!

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« Reply #828 on: June 05, 2008, 09:56:07 PM »
Pooja Di......

    Shes soooooooooooooooooooo sweettttt......nd is reli carring....shes sooo hardworking nd always thinking of her family first.....she doesn't kno it but shes been so comforting..... all i want to do is put my head in her lap nd cry myself to sleep in her comforting nd motherly arms.....

     LUV U POOJA DI!!!!!!!!!!!!........
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« Reply #829 on: June 09, 2008, 12:28:25 PM »
wowowow!! ajj ka din lagta hai mere emotions se khail raha hai.. Pahle bekarar ji ki kavita ne Rulaya Bekarar ji, phir Prateek ji ki kavita ne hansaya Prateek ji aor ab yah itna emotional, touching msg....

So sweet Palkhi... Apko to pahle he kaha hai.. kabhi bhi mere pass akar raho app!! Khoob masati karege.. kyun ki mere ghar main koi Rules nahi hai.. App nahi janti apki yah pyar bhari baatein her roj ki meri zindagi main mujhe kitna sukh deti hai!!

Thanks for giving me this happy moment, yahi yaadein ban jaati hai... aor aise yaadein jab bhi yaad ayye khushi hi deti hai!!
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« Reply #830 on: June 09, 2008, 02:07:57 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on June 09, 2008, 12:28:25 PM
wowowow!! ajj ka din lagta hai mere emotions se khail raha hai.. Pahle bekarar ji ki kavita ne Rulaya Bekarar ji, phir Prateek ji ki kavita ne hansaya Prateek ji aor ab yah itna emotional, touching msg....

So sweet Palkhi... Apko to pahle he kaha hai.. kabhi bhi mere pass akar raho app!! Khoob masati karege.. kyun ki mere ghar main koi Rules nahi hai.. App nahi janti apki yah pyar bhari baatein her roj ki meri zindagi main mujhe kitna sukh deti hai!!

Thanks for giving me this happy moment, yahi yaadein ban jaati hai... aor aise yaadein jab bhi yaad ayye khushi hi deti hai!!

      LUV U SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!......just wrote whats in my heart............       

Thanks Di............im waiting till i turn 18......then i'll b sure to cum nd visit.....thanks!!...........
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« Reply #831 on: June 11, 2008, 08:58:24 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 30, 2008, 06:55:26 PM
7)Mahiya ji---This is because of her boldness to stand out for the right. And I have had a chance of reading her few lines in some of the threads, the quality is intersting.

Regards
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Shukriya Prateek Ji...
Hum bhi aapki Shudh Hindi aur 'ek alag se andaaz waali' lekhni se bahut impressed hai..  notworthy
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« Reply #832 on: July 30, 2008, 01:58:31 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on June 09, 2008, 12:28:25 PM
wowowow!! ajj ka din lagta hai mere emotions se khail raha hai.. Pahle bekarar ji ki kavita ne Rulaya Bekarar ji, phir Prateek ji ki kavita ne hansaya Prateek ji aor ab yah itna emotional, touching msg....

So sweet Palkhi... Apko to pahle he kaha hai.. kabhi bhi mere pass akar raho app!! Khoob masati karege.. kyun ki mere ghar main koi Rules nahi hai.. App nahi janti apki yah pyar bhari baatein her roj ki meri zindagi main mujhe kitna sukh deti hai!!

Thanks for giving me this happy moment, yahi yaadein ban jaati hai... aor aise yaadein jab bhi yaad ayye khushi hi deti hai!!

are ye to aaj hi padha maine....
to iska matlab ye ki maine aapko rula kar impress kiya...
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« Reply #833 on: July 30, 2008, 02:55:33 AM »
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« Reply #834 on: July 30, 2008, 12:48:47 PM »
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« Reply #835 on: July 30, 2008, 04:43:58 PM »
Hmmmm,,, aap bhi...
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« Reply #836 on: July 30, 2008, 11:38:05 PM »
Thanx honey you are really a sweet one at this Forum.....Tumne hameshaan hameiN  yaad rakha hai....Aap jaise log iss forum ki rounaq hain..God bless you always....

Quote from: honeyrose on May 30, 2008, 12:41:31 PM
Roja dear,,,Punam dear,,,
Celmira sis,,Pooja sis,,Mahiya sis,,Roshu,,,Palki,,,
diya,,muskaan,,Angel,,Sanya sis

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Azeem bro,,,Shihab,,,baadal ji,,,Sunnybro aaj kal aap nahi dikh rahe
Prince litt bro,,,Harash ji aaj kal aap bhi nahi dikh rahe hai

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Syed,,Punam dear,,Roja dear,,Celmira sis===aap ki dosti aur support se
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« Reply #837 on: July 31, 2008, 12:43:45 AM »
Dosto aaj ye thread maine pada kaafi door tak jana pada....achha laga kis tarah puraane logoN ne apne thoughts ko share kiya kisi ne dil main rakh-ke kisi ne khul-e-aam....ek achha achha darbaar saja hi yahaaN......muhe toh shayad yaad bhi nahin maiN kis taraH yahaaN aya....kutchh kuchh Dhundalii yaddoN ke shaaare maiN ye threadd par apni kalam chalan ka iraada kiya......jab main yahaan aya  toh jo log yahaaN tthe...woh shayad kain nazer hi nahin aate.......us waqt yahaaN  Sonu hua kerti thi kaafi chancal our hansmukh sawbhaav tha unka.....Wahid bhi undinoN kaafi joro-shoron se chalan main they.....HUm-tum....
Talat jo aajkal roop badal kar Celmira ke naam se Viraajmaan haiN.....
Waise main yaahN likh dena chahta hooN....ki talat Ek Achhi shayrana pasandd hain....inke likha naye thoughts ko janamm deta hai......Pooja toh Yoindia yahaaN ki raani hai hi....woh tab bhi isi tarah chhhayii hui thi...our ab bhi....kab kahaan prakat ho jaaye kutchh pata nahiN...our kab kahaaN kis thread se gayab ho jaaye iska bhi pata nain chalta.....baherhaal isey main toh chulbuli Pooja ka hi naam de sakta hoon......our jab aage chale toh kaafi arse tak hum khud hi nadarad rahe apne iss Forum se......na jaane woh log kahaan gaye......our jab dubara kadam rakha toh naye logoN ke chahre saamne aaye.....jinme.....bekraar ji....Honeyrose....Raajbir ji ( meri doosri site ke hum kalam) Roja....Sonia....punam....Mahiya..halaanki mahiya se meri kabhi personaly baat nain hui...lekin inke comments achhe hi rahe....baadal ji....syednaami ,Khwaish ji our kutchh naam aise haiN jo Demaag ki Dictionary main jagah nahiN bana pa raheiN hain......main un sab ka bhi bada abhari hu....
Our impress kerna ya karana hum kisi ke bas ki baat nahin hai...kon si baat kisko choo jaaye pata nahi chalta.....ya kon si baat kis ko hurt ker jaaye ye bhi kisi ko pata nahin chalta.....Khuda kare koi b baat kisi ko hurt na kare.....

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« Reply #838 on: July 31, 2008, 07:15:13 AM »
Doston aaj samay aa gaya hai..ki mai is thread me kuch likhun…….ab pata nahi itna frequently yahan aana ho bhi payega ya nahi…..
Yun har ek bande ko uparwale ne unique banaya hai aur har ek ki khaas pahchan hai…fir bhi kabhi kabhi kisi ki baat se hum impress ho jaate hain..jaisa ki harsh ji ne likha hai….
Meri ye list ant-heen hogi…isme anant naam honge...pata nhai kab kiski baat impress kar jaye to jab tak mai jinda hun hamesha is list me naam add hote rahenge…..
Pooja:-
inki hazirzawabi, har ek ko likhne ke liye prerit karna, jyada se jyada poetry ko padh-kar jawab dena…inhe sach me ek alag si pah-chan deta hai….inka behad suljha aur santulit vyvhaar bhi inke prati ek ankahe samman ko janm de jaata hai…..
Han inse nok-jhonk karne me bhi bada maza aata hai…ye baat alag hai ki yondia me mai hi inse kuch mazak kar leta hun..warna baaqi sabko to ye dara kar rakhti hain tongue3 tongue3
Maine personally bhi inse baat ki hai….aur ek baat me nishchit tour par kah sakta hun ki ek sampoorn naari ka vyktitv samete hue hain apne aap me,..bachchon ki si nishchal, kabhi mamta se bhari hui to kabhi mazbooti se toofano ka samna karti hui…jitna inhe samjha tha usase adhik suljha hua paaya…mujhe bahoot khushi hai ki yo ke madhyam se main ek behtar dost bana paaya….

Mahiya:-
ek behtreen shayra ke roop me mai inhe humesha yaad rakhunga, inki kuch kavitayen padhna mujhe behad pasand hai…antakshari me gar ye amne-samne (face to face) muqabala ho to mai inhe aasani se hara sakta hun……music ke mamle me humari pasand lagbhag ek si hai…khule man se yo ki charcha karne me bhi inka jawab nahi….itna kamal hai inki aawaz me aur vyvhaar me ki kabhi lagta hi nahi…ki abhi pah-chan hui hai…bilkul ek parivaarik mitra ki tarah..…shayriyon ko lekar inki samajh behad gahri hai aur kisi bhi achche kalam par inke comments mil hi jaate hain….mere kalamon ki baat aur hai mai to phone karke bhi comments maang leta hun… tongue3 tongue3.ab itne besharm aadmi ko koi khali haath thodi loutayega… Laughing hard…
Meri khushkismati hai ki aapne khud ko mere doston me shumaar karne ka mouka diya… Usual Smile
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Pahle yoindian jinse meri face to face mulakaat hui…..ek kavi hriday vyakti..bahoot gahri soch aur napi tuli sargarbhit baaten karne wale insaan hain…..apni ek vishisht shaily se likhnte hain, kisi aur ki kavita par inke utashvardhak jawab.inko bheed se alag khada kar dete hain…..inko padhne me bada anand aata hai..par agar ye mood me hon to inke saath likhne me paseena aa jata hai, “haathon me jam aaya” bhula nahi hun mai. Winking.aur zanab ab peena to door sunghta tak nahi….. tongue3 Laughing hard
Haan ek baat aur kisi get together me inse kavitaen sunna na bhulen…behad umda tareeke se sunate hain ye,
Ye thode vyast jaroor rahte hain par baaten hoti rahti hai….
aap jaisa dost kismat se hi milta hai Usual Smile
Punam:-
Wo mere bahoot bure waqt ki raaten thi aur ek nanha farishta kahin aasman se aake kahne laga bhaiya kya baat hai…kyun udaas ho ..mai hun na… tearyeyed bas wo inse meri pahli baar baat hui..mano mujhe ek choti bahan mil gai jise bhale mai apne gum na baant paanu par kuch der ke liye bhul to sakta hi hun….24 ghante kabhi bhi mai ise pareshaan kar leta hun…..aur apni betuki baton se hairaan karta rahta hun kuch kah to sakti nahi bada jo hun…… tongue3 tongue3..
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Ek behtreen shayar, itna jyada caring hai ki kabhi kabhi to ashchary hone lagta hai….yo par hamesha inka ek anushasit aur maryadit vyvhaar mujhe bahoot pasand hai…har baat me iska behad adab se pesh aana mujhe soch me daal deta hai…….ye mujh jaise vyakti ko bhaiya kyun kahta hai… icon_scratch inki urdu bhi kamal hai hindi bhi dhamal hai..aur angrezi se bhi malamaal hai….. Usual Smile
Mujhe bahoot khushi hai ki mere parivaar me tum jaisa chota bhai bhi hai.. Usual Smile
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Inse sirf  phone par hi baat ho paai hai..lekin baat karte samay humesha milne ke liye koshish karte rahna inke sachche utsaah ka saboot hota hai….in dino kuch pareshaniyon se do chaar hain isliye likhte kuch kam hain….yoindia me lagbhag sabhi inko pasand karte hain…… inki jo baat mujhe prabhavit karti hai wo hai humesha yo ko saath lekar chalne ka zazba….jab bhi mouka mile yoindian se milne ka time nikaal hi lenge.
Chalo is baar gar get together hogi to mulakaat to hogi hi par sabhi ko apni likhi kanvita bhi sunani padegi..samjhe…nattu
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Yo ke purane shayron me se ek…inhe janne ke baad maaloom hua ki vaigyanik bhi shayar..ho sakte hain wo bhi behtreen…… laughing4.behad komal dil aur saaf saaf shayri…inki pahchan hai..naye shayr hon ya purane sabhi ke kalam padhti hain aur jawab bhi deti hain par lagta hai abhi kuch busy hain……har mudde ko poori gmbheerta se sunna aur jo dil kahe wo jawab dena..inki ek aur visheshta hai….jyada baaten to nahi hui….. kuch pm se hi hui. Han ek baat aur…inhe apne desh se bahoot pyaar hai…poori tarah se parivarik charitr hai inka….
Ab naa jane kab time milega inhe.
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Quote from: bekarar on July 31, 2008, 07:15:13 AM
Doston aaj samay aa gaya hai..ki mai is thread me kuch likhun…….ab pata nahi itna frequently yahan aana ho bhi payega ya nahi…..
Yun har ek bande ko uparwale ne unique banaya hai aur har ek ki khaas pahchan hai…fir bhi kabhi kabhi kisi ki baat se hum impress ho jaate hain..jaisa ki harsh ji ne likha hai….
Meri ye list ant-heen hogi…isme anant naam honge...pata nhai kab kiski baat impress kar jaye to jab tak mai jinda hun hamesha is list me naam add hote rahenge…..
Pooja:-
inki hazirzawabi, har ek ko likhne ke liye prerit karna, jyada se jyada poetry ko padh-kar jawab dena…inhe sach me ek alag si pah-chan deta hai….inka behad suljha aur santulit vyvhaar bhi inke prati ek ankahe samman ko janm de jaata hai…..
Han inse nok-jhonk karne me bhi bada maza aata hai…ye baat alag hai ki yondia me mai hi inse kuch mazak kar leta hun..warna baaqi sabko to ye dara kar rakhti hain tongue3 tongue3
Maine personally bhi inse baat ki hai….aur ek baat me nishchit tour par kah sakta hun ki ek sampoorn naari ka vyktitv samete hue hain apne aap me,..bachchon ki si nishchal, kabhi mamta se bhari hui to kabhi mazbooti se toofano ka samna karti hui…jitna inhe samjha tha usase adhik suljha hua paaya…mujhe bahoot khushi hai ki yo ke madhyam se main ek behtar dost bana paaya….

Mahiya:-
ek behtreen shayra ke roop me mai inhe humesha yaad rakhunga, inki kuch kavitayen padhna mujhe behad pasand hai…antakshari me gar ye amne-samne (face to face) muqabala ho to mai inhe aasani se hara sakta hun……music ke mamle me humari pasand lagbhag ek si hai…khule man se yo ki charcha karne me bhi inka jawab nahi….itna kamal hai inki aawaz me aur vyvhaar me ki kabhi lagta hi nahi…ki abhi pah-chan hui hai…bilkul ek parivaarik mitra ki tarah..…shayriyon ko lekar inki samajh behad gahri hai aur kisi bhi achche kalam par inke comments mil hi jaate hain….mere kalamon ki baat aur hai mai to phone karke bhi comments maang leta hun… tongue3 tongue3.ab itne besharm aadmi ko koi khali haath thodi loutayega… Laughing hard…
Meri khushkismati hai ki aapne khud ko mere doston me shumaar karne ka mouka diya… Usual Smile
Prateek mardia:-
Pahle yoindian jinse meri face to face mulakaat hui…..ek kavi hriday vyakti..bahoot gahri soch aur napi tuli sargarbhit baaten karne wale insaan hain…..apni ek vishisht shaily se likhnte hain, kisi aur ki kavita par inke utashvardhak jawab.inko bheed se alag khada kar dete hain…..inko padhne me bada anand aata hai..par agar ye mood me hon to inke saath likhne me paseena aa jata hai, “haathon me jam aaya” bhula nahi hun mai. Winking.aur zanab ab peena to door sunghta tak nahi….. tongue3 Laughing hard
Haan ek baat aur kisi get together me inse kavitaen sunna na bhulen…behad umda tareeke se sunate hain ye,
Ye thode vyast jaroor rahte hain par baaten hoti rahti hai….
aap jaisa dost kismat se hi milta hai Usual Smile
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Wo mere bahoot bure waqt ki raaten thi aur ek nanha farishta kahin aasman se aake kahne laga bhaiya kya baat hai…kyun udaas ho ..mai hun na… tearyeyed bas wo inse meri pahli baar baat hui..mano mujhe ek choti bahan mil gai jise bhale mai apne gum na baant paanu par kuch der ke liye bhul to sakta hi hun….24 ghante kabhi bhi mai ise pareshaan kar leta hun…..aur apni betuki baton se hairaan karta rahta hun kuch kah to sakti nahi bada jo hun…… tongue3 tongue3..
Syednaami:-
Ek behtreen shayar, itna jyada caring hai ki kabhi kabhi to ashchary hone lagta hai….yo par hamesha inka ek anushasit aur maryadit vyvhaar mujhe bahoot pasand hai…har baat me iska behad adab se pesh aana mujhe soch me daal deta hai…….ye mujh jaise vyakti ko bhaiya kyun kahta hai… icon_scratch inki urdu bhi kamal hai hindi bhi dhamal hai..aur angrezi se bhi malamaal hai….. Usual Smile
Mujhe bahoot khushi hai ki mere parivaar me tum jaisa chota bhai bhi hai.. Usual Smile
Natural:-
Inse sirf  phone par hi baat ho paai hai..lekin baat karte samay humesha milne ke liye koshish karte rahna inke sachche utsaah ka saboot hota hai….in dino kuch pareshaniyon se do chaar hain isliye likhte kuch kam hain….yoindia me lagbhag sabhi inko pasand karte hain…… inki jo baat mujhe prabhavit karti hai wo hai humesha yo ko saath lekar chalne ka zazba….jab bhi mouka mile yoindian se milne ka time nikaal hi lenge.
Chalo is baar gar get together hogi to mulakaat to hogi hi par sabhi ko apni likhi kanvita bhi sunani padegi..samjhe…nattu
Talat:-
Yo ke purane shayron me se ek…inhe janne ke baad maaloom hua ki vaigyanik bhi shayar..ho sakte hain wo bhi behtreen…… laughing4.behad komal dil aur saaf saaf shayri…inki pahchan hai..naye shayr hon ya purane sabhi ke kalam padhti hain aur jawab bhi deti hain par lagta hai abhi kuch busy hain……har mudde ko poori gmbheerta se sunna aur jo dil kahe wo jawab dena..inki ek aur visheshta hai….jyada baaten to nahi hui….. kuch pm se hi hui. Han ek baat aur…inhe apne desh se bahoot pyaar hai…poori tarah se parivarik charitr hai inka….
Ab naa jane kab time milega inhe.
to be continue
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