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« on: February 11, 2006, 12:27:31 AM »

Meri zindagi ke khawab, kahi to koi rah de
Jis se skoon ka ho ahsaas, aisa koi khawab de!!!

mai manjilo ke bich mai, raah gayi hu bhatak
manjile na sahi, kahi to sahi raah de!!!

mai apni talash mai kahi, khud gumshuda ho gai
jo chal sake tamam umar, aise ek talash de!!!!

na de sake jo humsafar, iska koi gilla nahi
de skoon jo umarbhar, aise ek yaad de!!!!

mere sabar ka tu, aor ab na imtihaan le
na de sake jo Zindagi, Mout ka pagam de!!!
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« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2006, 03:27:28 AM »

Pooja ... In my opinion, the girl in the poem is very restless and confused about life !! She does 'nt know what she has to do, where she has to go !!

"Main manzilon ke beech me reh gayi hoon bhatak"

This line shows particularly about her confusion !!!

She seems very pessimist and negative about life !!
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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2006, 09:38:26 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"
Meri zindagi ke khawab, kahi to koi rah de
Jis se skoon ka ho ahsaas, aisa koi khawab de!!!


mai apne khawabo se puch rahi hu ki muje koi rah de, kayun ki hum aksar khawabo ke pichy bhagty hui apna rasta bhool jaaty hai. Jis khawab ke pichy jakar sakoon ka ahsaas ho aise koi khawab de.

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mai manjilo ke bich mai, raah gayi hu bhatak
manjile na sahi, kahi to sahi raah de!!!

apne khawabo ke bich mai bhatak gai hu ki kon se khawab ke pichy jau, manjil na sahi magar manjil per jaane wali sahi rah de.

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mai apni talash mai kahi, khud gumshuda ho gai
jo chal sake tamam umar, aise ek talash de!!!!


apne khawabo mai rah kar, mai khud hi khud ko bhool gai hu...jis talash per mai apni saari zindagi laga saku, aise koi talash de.

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na de sake jo humsafar, iska koi gilla nahi
de skoon jo umarbhar, aise ek yaad de!!!!


yahan per ek larki ke dil ki baat hai, ki agar koi humsafar sath chalane ke liye nahi mil sakata kismat se to kam se kam kuch palo ke liye aisa sath de ki uski yaad mai umar beeta sake.

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mere sabar ka tu, aor ab na imtihaan le
na de sake jo Zindagi, Mout ka pagam de!!!


mai apne khawao ka picha karty hui itna thak gai hu ki ab agar sahi raah nahi de sakty to mout hi de do
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« Reply #3 on: February 21, 2006, 09:42:34 PM »

well u have already expalined it urself....to be like a state of dalima ... and as if the auther is demamding something out of life out of dreams itself ... and yet has to make sure wt is there infront that needs to be done.
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« Reply #4 on: November 01, 2006, 09:47:55 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"
Meri zindagi ke khawab, kahi to koi rah de
Jis se skoon ka ho ahsaas, aisa koi khawab de!!!


In this stanza,Poetess extremly harass from her life is questioning her fate ,what she had done that no is one taking care of her

Quote from: "Pooja"
mai manjilo ke bich mai, raah gayi hu bhatak
manjile na sahi, kahi to sahi raah de!!!


in these line,poetess shows her depression.... she is searching for the right way which lead her life to peaceful journey

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mai apni talash mai kahi, khud gumshuda ho gai
jo chal sake tamam umar, aise ek talash de!!!!


again she is trying to find one such reason that will end her aimless wandering in life.

Quote from: "Pooja"
na de sake jo humsafar, iska koi gilla nahi
de skoon jo umarbhar, aise ek yaad de!!!!


she is totally put down by his beloved one.still she had no complaint but she need some rest in her life,, one such memorable moment that will rest her agony against her disturbed mind

Quote from: "Pooja"
mere sabar ka tu, aor ab na imtihaan le
na de sake jo Zindagi, Mout ka pagam de!!!


she now doesnt want to live... as she is tottaly depressed n feels that she is totally defeated by life challenges...


Hope i  had done justice to poem
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