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« on: May 27, 2007, 12:38:16 PM »

@ Aj hass le sadia ronia te, kal tu vi vekh pachtavega,
jehra hun tu saanu thukrauna e, kal bavaan khol bulaavega,

aj karda e tu saade haasia te vaar, kal jaano vadh tu saanu chaavega,
hun labb le tu koi humdard sajna ,kal tu apna dukhda kis nu sunaavega?

dass kehde mode da aasraa laban tu IS CHANDRI DUNIA vich jaavega?
fir dekhage asi v bete ki tu kinjh sanu rooh to vakh kar paavega?


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« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2007, 07:48:16 AM »

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