Tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota [Example Thread]

[Pooja]

Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
ek bar palake utha kar jo hume dekha hota!!

jahar  sara teri zindagi ka pi jaty hansty hansty
Nigah utha kar, jo ek bar "han" kaha hota!!!

Tujh bin un banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!

[Ricky]

It reminds me of my junior classes when I had to give explanation of poems by famous poets . That was for course and had to do even if I don't want to d o it but here at Yoindia.com we all do it daily , the only difference is that today we have specifically a forum to do it and I m actually going to post for Pooja's poem instead of just keeping it in my mind.

The First Impression:
It appears that poetess is trying to show lots of affection for his dear one but the only thing she find bad is that he  failed to understand her feelings. She is now showing her level of affection while comparing them with various stuff.

The Poem:

Tumhara haal e dil aankhon se bhi padh lete hum,
ek bar palake utha kar jo hume dekha hota!!

Here poetess say : " If her dear one had ever once considered her as his love then she would have given lots of importance to that love" or
if my love wld ever had been reciprocated.....i wld have really loved yaa more/or i wld have given  more  of love to yaa"

zehar sara teri zindagi ka pi jaty hansty hansty
Nigah utha kar, jo ek bar "han" kaha hota!!!

Here poetress   is saying that if her dear one ever accepted her love then she would have taken out difficulties and problem from his life to her life.

Tujh bin yun banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!

Well.. I don't get this one .. I got that.. ke this life would never been so lonely if would have seen u with full of JOY.

Critcs:
None so far.. just find last stanza little unclear... rather out of theme.

[Pooja]

Tujh bin yun banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!

Well.. I don't get this one .. I got that.. ke this life would never been so lonely if would have seen you with full of JOY.[/quote]

Here is meaning of last one:

Tumhare bina rah kar bhi mai khushi se zindagi beeta leti, agar tum apni zindagi khushi se bitaty. Mujse alag rah kar bhi agar tum dukhi ho, to isse acha to hum sath sath yah taklif uthaty aor kam se kam ek doosre ke sath rahne ki khushi mahsoos karty..........

[Ricky]

Tujh bin yun banjar na banati zindagi meri
kam se kam tumko jo baharo mai dekha hota!!!!

Well.. I don't get this one .. I got that.. ke this life would never been so lonely if would have seen you with full of JOY.

Here is meaning of last one:

Tumhare bina rah kar bhi mai khushi se zindagi beeta leti, agar tum apni zindagi khushi se bitaty. Mujse alag rah kar bhi agar tum dukhi ho, to isse acha to hum sath sath yah taklif uthaty aor kam se kam ek doosre ke sath rahne ki khushi mahsoos karty..........

Well, I think I got it right at that time also. Anyways .. do you have any comments about my review ?

[Pooja]

apne kafi gahraai se meri poem ko jaana hai...thanks!!! kuch aor bhi post ki hai....agar time mille to wahan bhi likhiyega!!!

[Tosha]

well .. i might nt follow the exact rule rt here rt now ... as the poem has already been explained in the best form ....

my general comments are that ...

The poetess is still in love with the same person and though she dosent have her dream man in her life she still wishes the best for her.

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