dead heart

by dead heart on November 06, 2008, 02:56:03 PM
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to a betrayer i laid my heart,
to a heart picher i sacrificed my soul,
i stand here in between the noise of society,
with no one i can call mine...

i bow down to salute the betrayer; her,
i respect the clever player of hearts; her,
who clinched an arrow of hatred in my heart,
and sweetly left scars of my cursed love...

the tears of a buried heart pinch through the words i write,
the stones of hatred tear his thirsty soul,
the darkness of joy teases his worthless body,
the rays of sorrow pentrate through his tear filled eyes...

she never understood the words he said in silence,
she never accepted the hugs he wanted to give her,
she rejected his love filled heart,
all she gave him in return was a dark burnt DEAD HEART...
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2008, 11:39:04 AM »
 Applause Applause

Very nice DHeart...
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2008, 12:10:48 PM »
Nice presentation Deadheart Ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2008, 12:33:25 PM »
Nice expression...well written Heart Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 03:46:22 PM »
Shukriya Sabhi ka..
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 04:40:19 PM »
Wah bahut khoob Rahim bhai.heart touching creation and lovely creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2010, 05:43:56 AM »
Shukriya Madhu di..
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