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« on: February 05, 2008, 11:02:47 AM »



My Dream Ends in the Field
Covered With Fallen Leaves
Bodies of Dead Dreams
Lying Here and There
Some are Wrapped with Coloured Paper
Some With Blood Stain
Ends Of All Dreams Are Not glamourous
Still if Only Dreams are Lost
Only Painful Silence is Left
In the Depth Of Heart....
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« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2008, 11:13:13 AM »

nice roja

dream may die for a while
it will take its rebirth
just wait for another morning
leaves turn green oneday
unwrap the gift paper
new life is waitng......
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« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2008, 09:40:50 PM »

nice roja

dream may die for a while
it will take its rebirth
just wait for another morning
leaves turn green oneday
unwrap the gift paper
new life is waitng......

You are right Mehekkk
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« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2008, 12:27:42 AM »

Very nice poem Roja.. Usual Smile


When the night fades and invite shades..
As we await the dream of touch..
Like a crystal shining star..
Above us to shine our dreams..
We spread our hands and look apon.
Like a missing shore from the sea..
And when our heart touch our dreams for real
And finally see our dreams fade through our eyes..
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« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2008, 04:06:59 AM »

roja,this one has left me speechless....
ok i lie but,i cant be speechless,but like ahard punch to the
stomach its taken all my wind out,i read it once,twice,thrice
and it disseminate's my composure,why,you may ask,because the words etch you to go deeper then the surface,like the cosmetic,hypocrytical motions of our daily existence,the theatrical farce
we call life.There is so much more,"some wrappped in coloured paper"in contrast to"some with bloodstain"makes you think,makes you wonder,where would you live,a life filled with dreams,or dreams brought to life?and if you say dreams brought to life then,what about you nightmares,wont they to come to life.
I found this very profound on so many levels,it was actually scary.
Loved it really
Mehhekkk,honey nice additions,must Honey you really coming alongand your is trully surprising
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we often wonder of how many
moments there are in life;
should we rather not wonder
about how much life
there is in every moment
(NOT MINE)
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« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2008, 08:46:14 PM »

roja,this one has left me speechless....
ok i lie but,i cant be speechless,but like ahard punch to the
stomach its taken all my wind out,i read it once,twice,thrice
and it disseminate's my composure,why,you may ask,because the words etch you to go deeper then the surface,like the cosmetic,hypocrytical motions of our daily existence,the theatrical farce
we call life.There is so much more,"some wrappped in coloured paper"in contrast to"some with bloodstain"makes you think,makes you wonder,where would you live,a life filled with dreams,or dreams brought to life?and if you say dreams brought to life then,what about you nightmares,wont they to come to life.
I found this very profound on so many levels,it was actually scary.
Loved it really
Mehhekkk,honey nice additions,must Honey you really coming alongand your is trully surprising

I really appreciate that u deeply think the way i think and
I always noted that you always understand message which i want to convey. Thank you very much stranger. Keep coming.

Thanks Honey dear and nice sharing



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« Reply #6 on: February 25, 2008, 09:59:06 PM »

nice wording .keep on writing.
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« Reply #7 on: July 15, 2008, 03:44:07 PM »

i am a big fan of english poetry n i rite too but more i love readin and ur poem has given me a deep feeling....excellent superb amazing awesome touchin magnificent lovely........
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