have it your way:English

no_good_stranger

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is there anything that i could say
any little word to make you stay
any action in any small way
to make you spend one more day

i was a fool to take your heart as a toy
every new excuse,was just another ploy
filling you with fake words of joy
so sweet you blushed,you were so coy

(she turns away,i star shouting)

hate the player,not the game!
so i broke your heart its a crying shame!
my wild ways you could never tame!
being a playboy is what brought me fame!

go on leave if u dare!
have it your way,see if i care!
there are many a partner my bed to share!
life was never meant to be fare!

(as she walks away,i whisper)

if only to myself i could be true
for this would mean a life anew
if only my bad habits were just a few
for now and for always my true love is you


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Tosha

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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2007, 02:26:13 PM »

nice ... i'll get reply when i get back home Usual Smile

well i just realized i'v read it somewhere else too .. did u post it somewhere else too.


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Roja

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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2007, 10:48:41 PM »

Good 1 Stranger...Those lines touched my heart. Very Good.


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2007, 06:22:20 AM »

rojaji thanks for the compliment,tosha i,ve posted it never before,and this is my work,its,if you have read my other work,similar in style,and also my topics are closely related,because i believe love hurts,people are not always honest about the way they feel,sometimes you loose people you love to circumstance and pride,trust in any relation is not a given,its has to be earned and once lost it can never be regained,


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Tosha

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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2007, 07:12:18 AM »

i kno wt It is to love someone … and wt it feels to be hurt. Love spares no one and all other emotions always surround love … for love to be strong .. to feel strong. HURT makes you realise where true love is.

I really like ur poem!


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2007, 07:28:38 AM »

True love,huh......,but thanks for the nice words


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Tosha

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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2007, 07:35:59 AM »

true love ... hmmm!! Very sarcastic!!


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2007, 07:45:08 AM »

i've alway's wondered what "love"means to a woman.if you brave enough i'll tell you a story


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Tosha

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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2007, 09:03:19 AM »

A story brave enough to be told must never remain unheard.


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2007, 09:19:49 AM »

and sometimes bad thing make BRAVE man cry,love makes a grown man crumble,grovle and generally look like an ass,and at times all in vain


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Talat

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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2007, 09:53:09 AM »

Very nice =D>


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2007, 09:55:38 AM »

thanks talat,your comments highly appreciated


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Tosha

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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2007, 05:29:27 PM »

no matter how deep the hurt or how dark the scars ... a good heart is never heavy!!


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no_good_stranger

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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2007, 08:10:18 AM »

tosha the eternal optimist,just for the record i define pasimism,i look both way's when crossing a one-way,and the glass is always half empty


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Tosha

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«Reply #14 on: October 20, 2007, 11:05:05 AM »

then we may not live our lives as every one will one day surly die.


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