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jatti_80

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His Kiss

« on: March 08, 2008, 04:01:28 AM »

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Reason: Explicit and vulgar.

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Re: His Kiss

« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2008, 04:17:56 AM »

Very nice lines jatti.. Usual Smile


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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

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Re: His Kiss

« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2008, 09:54:59 PM »

Mr Jatti,
Sorry to say..

I think you eloborate sensitive love in all your poems, which i felt vulgar while reading.


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Re: His Kiss

« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2008, 05:42:43 PM »

Well im sorry if u didnt like it but i jus wrote wat i felt n i really dont think there was anything in this poem by which any1 should be offended!!!!but its ur opinion n then at da same time no1s that innocent that would feel offened by it!!!!!!!!


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