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« on: June 20, 2008, 10:42:42 AM »

I took her hand!

She gave,
But hesitatingly!
 
It moistened:
Moistened fast lately!
 
I heard her panting heart in me!

She kept on looking: at her feet!
I’m proud:
I have some-one, so sweet!

I may not sleep tonight, it seems!

Oh Love!
 Are you, all waking dreams?

She’s far away!
She’s far away!!
She loves me:
For, she loves none-else!
Her lovely eyes: are full of love!
Her hands: are silky-soft!
She’s a dove!

She says:
‘Beauties must have tough cores:
Fortunes are safe, in locked-up doors!’

Now, know: what I’m feeling, for long;
That hums in me, like drones, in song!

‘I have discovered you, in me!
 
Now,
 Let me watch your eyes!
They’re deep!

I long,
To find, in them,
My dear!
At what great depth,
Now, I belong!’

   â€¢â€¢â€¢â€¢
       G.R.Prakash
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« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 02:10:16 PM »

Very Good Mr Prakash
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« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 04:50:32 PM »

bahoot khoob Prakash jee!!
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« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 05:46:26 PM »

Excellent work Prakash saahib,,, Truly remarkable...
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.

(Faiz Ahmed Faiz)
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« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 12:47:36 AM »

Prakash Babu very nice dear great creation yaar
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« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 08:14:15 AM »

Sonia01 ji / Pooja ji / syednaami ji / prmchawlaji,
 'I'm happy that my poem has delighted,
  Peoples of your stature and your fame!
  I'm old but not a 'zayif', as my young heart,
  Likes to dwell with young persons of some NAME!
              Thanks for all your sweet words!
                      - G.R.Prakash/abd bundeli
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« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 12:07:50 PM »

I am very glad that you made me so honored here...
You are a great person...
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.

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« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2008, 07:53:36 AM »

Your poem made me too delighted Mr Prakash... Good work  Applause
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« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2008, 09:31:57 AM »

Roja ji,
How should I thank you, my dear! I know not!
Its your sweet mind and heart that discovers much;
In simple and sweet words that speak so lot:
One poet, well, knows another poet fast;
This's all what I can say in this sweet moment!
Read a few more poems, and discover me more!

                   Thanks a lot once again!
                           G.R.Prakash / abdbundeli
 
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