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myheart_ursonly

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I wish, I could.

« on: March 19, 2005, 01:14:38 PM »

I wish, I Could - Amit

I knew that you were made for me,
right from the first day I met you.
I promise, my love will never fade,
my love for you will always be true.

Every time you think of something,
I hope you can feel my love there.
coz' in all the things that I do,
I've exactly the same feeling here.

I wish I could show you how it feels,
I long every second to be with you.
I feel so lonely during the nights,
It's so hard to live without you.

I wish for the day you'll be mine,
when no one can take you way.
My lips worship the God above,
and my hands are joined in his pray.

I wish I could fly to your place,
even if I could see you for just an hour.
I wish I could hold you in my arms,
If somehow, God grants me that power.

Critique type comments are also welcome.


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nikki

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« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2005, 01:26:29 PM »

waoooooo.....hearty...fantastic..


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sanya310

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« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2005, 01:41:46 PM »

a very sweet wish...and a loving dedication...
bas title mein ki spelling theek kar do..from cound to could Usual Smile

touching poem..good work once again


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myheart_ursonly

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« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2005, 05:10:24 PM »

Thanks Nikki, Sanya.


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« Reply #4 on: March 20, 2005, 12:37:52 AM »

nice amit


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« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2005, 01:20:08 AM »

Thanks Nishita.


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« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2005, 08:04:25 PM »

BUhat niceee HEart!~


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