my new friend

by no_good_stranger on September 27, 2007, 05:05:25 PM
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A dark thunderous sky
no lightning?i wonder why

through the darkness i feel his reach
the sound of tortured souls in the distance screach

IS IT THE ENDING?
IS MY DEATH PENDING?

all those years to your last you adhered
all those countless women,for your love they teared

so precise in you attack
laying down the charm,you never held back

so your bodies you could use
and there innocence did you abuse

with lavish gifts were you too kind
to your ulteria motives,were they so blind

yet you never took the time to repent
to late now the devils been sent

show some remorse,your soul he'll spare
your heart so cold,you just couldn't care

can you smell hells rotting flesh
hells serpernts will welcome something fresh

for eternity your bed a pyre
your damned soul,the devils offspring you'll sire

from religious fervour did you fend
so welcome the devil YOUR NEW FRIEND
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2007, 06:48:53 PM »
amazing ... !!

i really want u to read the poem ueself a few more time and u'll want to change a word here or there and make this poem even more beautiful.

believe me, its just the end
no matter how much u defend
welcome the devil your new friends
from religious fervour as u fend
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2007, 03:23:34 PM »
i made two typing errors's(last=lust)(so your bodies=so there bodies)i guess i never spend enough time proof reading,i love your addition maybe i shoul edit it in,and give you part credit.Thanks Alot for taking the time
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