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Roja
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« on: March 08, 2008, 08:54:12 PM »


She sits alone in her lonely dwelling,
Dwelling upon her bygone days
In somber solitude quietly musing
A wan smile lingering over her face

Reminiscing fondly she looks all around
For some remnant of her glorious past
Ah! A tiny colourful ball on the ground
Lying snug, her little son had playfully cast

She peers over the photographs early
Nostalgic reminders wet her carving
Each moment etched in her mind fully
Fills her with an intense longing

Reigning supreme for thirty long years
With tender care, did she her children tend
And to assuage, day-to-day unfounded fears
Ever beside her, a supportive, doting husband

Her home vibrated once with the constant chatter
Of little ones and their lively mischievous gaiety
Or like monkeys, their excited innocent jabber
Their voices still echo, her nest dreadfully empty

Parted ways, one by one, all she held so dear
Remembering them, she weeps, in acute agony
A family of ten did she so lovingly rear
Bereft of family, in twilight years, a bitter irony  sad10
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« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2008, 07:33:22 AM »

Wow lovely poem Roja..Usual Smile... Applause
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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they
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« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2008, 07:39:04 AM »

Bahot acha likha roja di...
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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2008, 07:40:58 AM »

GREAT JOB icon_salut
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« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2008, 08:05:58 AM »

Very Good Work Roja Applause
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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2008, 08:15:29 AM »

Very Good Work Roja Applause

Thanks Talat sis. Yeh mere Grandmaa k upper hai
maine kayi raat unko rote dekha hai. Mere papa
ke liye bahut baar raaton ko roya karti thi.
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« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2008, 10:59:59 AM »

 icon_salut wah kya baat hai roja ji  Applause



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Mujhe pad.ne walo mujhe yaad bhi rakhna,
Tut jaaye kalam cha.he lakin,
Dil main jageh kam na karna.......
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« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2008, 11:08:31 PM »

Simply beautiful....things expressed so simply....impressive..........
Roja...I am here after a long time to share my thoughts ....Poetry is my life though......Each time we pen our thoughts our heart and mind is on display.....May my deep love for language be evident and satisfying or may be your mind to reject the sentiments generated....your captioned poem is the zist of your heart.. a lovely bunch of words... Excellent, I really enjoyed this ....a  presentation of your mind about the subject......through your pen which is enormously bleeding blew......
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« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2008, 02:54:15 AM »

great one roja..really too good.. Applause
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Bahut Pehle Se Unn Kadmon
Ki Aahat Jaan Lete Hai..

Tujhe Eh Zindagi,
Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....
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« Reply #9 on: March 14, 2008, 10:08:28 AM »

Good job dear!!!
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« Reply #10 on: March 15, 2008, 12:30:44 PM »

Thank you very much Honey, Punam, Jatti ji, Baadal ji, Shrimaan Harash ji
Khwaish ji and pooja di..... Thank you very much for the appreciation.
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« Reply #11 on: May 01, 2008, 04:03:02 AM »

Brilliant work,really excellent
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we often wonder of how many
moments there are in life;
should we rather not wonder
about how much life
there is in every moment
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