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« on: April 14, 2008, 02:14:59 PM »
Is shab-e-firak main na hogi roshni
charag jalaao to kya, na jalaao to kya.
Kaun sunege veeraniyon main tumhe shayar
gazal gaao to kya, na gaao to kya.
tera hi naam lekar nikal gayi aakhri saans
ab aao to kya, na aao to kya.
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« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2008, 02:17:52 PM »
charu ji,

bohut khoobsurat likha he.keep writing!

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« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2008, 01:50:47 AM »
wah charu ji bohut khoob likha hai aapne


Is shab-e-firak main na hogi roshni
charag jalaao to kya, na jalaao to kya.

yu hi likhte rahiye
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« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2008, 09:00:52 AM »
Prateek ji,
Thnx for ur appreciation.
I read ur umda shayari...am no-where near to it....
but still..thnx 4 ur post.
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« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2008, 09:03:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya kaushik ji,
Dosto ka sath raha to....yunhi kuch kuch likhte rahenge...
insha-allah
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« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2008, 09:09:48 AM »
wah kaya baat hai:

tera hi naam lekar nikal gayi aakhri saans
ab aao to kya, na aao to kya.

bahoot khoob charu, apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!!
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« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2008, 09:14:04 AM »
Charu

Very nice Poem Applause

I also liked these lines very much

tera hi naam lekar nikal gayi aakhri saans
ab aao to kya, na aao to kya

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« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2008, 09:19:18 AM »
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya....pooja and rajbir
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« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2008, 10:29:22 AM »
Quote from: charu on April 18, 2008, 09:00:52 AM
Prateek ji,
Thnx for ur appreciation.
I read ur umda shayari...am no-where near to it....
but still..thnx 4 ur post.

charu ji,

aapki har pankti mein kamaal ki kashish he. And i agree to this that you are no where near ...you are far ahead and jokes apart.Keep posting such wonderful poems.

Prateek
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« Reply #9 on: April 20, 2008, 10:54:30 AM »
Prateekji,
aap to tareef bhi kis andaaz se karte hain....
Naye dosto ka aap khub istkbaal karte hain.
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« Reply #10 on: April 20, 2008, 11:12:52 AM »
bahut accha likha hai aapne charu jee

(but english section main kyu post ki hai?)
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« Reply #11 on: April 20, 2008, 01:14:36 PM »


Quote from: charu on April 14, 2008, 02:14:59 PM
Is shab-e-firak main na hogi roshni
charag jalaao to kya, na jalaao to kya.
Kaun sunege veeraniyon main tumhe shayar
gazal gaao to kya, na gaao to kya.
tera hi naam lekar nikal gayi aakhri saans
ab aao to kya, na aao to kya.

charu ji,

Aapki kavita kuch dino mein kayi baar gungunayi.kuch usi tarz par pesh he,shayad pasand aa jaye-

teri hur dava mere zakhmon pe ub hein be-asar
marham lagao to kya, na lagao to kya....
na aanso he koi na koi he khushi,kaisa yeh ehsaas-e-zehar
tum ub rulao to kya,aur hansaon to kya!
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« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2008, 02:22:28 AM »
Aapki kavita kuch dino mein kayi baar gungunayi.kuch usi tarz par pesh he,shayad pasand aa jaye-

teri hur dava mere zakhmon pe ub hein be-asar
marham lagao to kya, na lagao to kya....
na aanso he koi na koi he khushi,kaisa yeh ehsaas-e-zehar
tum ub rulao to kya,aur hansaon to kya!


Bahut khub prateek ji...meri nazm ko aapke in chand alvzo ne nai zindagi de di....
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« Reply #13 on: May 21, 2008, 04:30:24 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 20, 2008, 01:14:36 PM

charu ji,

Aapki kavita kuch dino mein kayi baar gungunayi.kuch usi tarz par pesh he,shayad pasand aa jaye-

teri hur dava mere zakhmon pe ub hein be-asar
marham lagao to kya, na lagao to kya....
na aanso he koi na koi he khushi,kaisa yeh ehsaas-e-zehar
tum ub rulao to kya,aur hansaon to kya!

bahoot achi lines likhi hai Prateek ji!!
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« Reply #14 on: May 21, 2008, 04:43:01 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 04:30:24 PM
bahoot achi lines likhi hai Prateek ji!!

aapka dil se shukriya pooja ji.
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