जितनी आँखें उतनी सवाल उठते हैं ...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 11, 2013, 03:02:15 PM
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हम आपका कितना ख्याल रखते हैं ...
जो हाल आपका वही अपना हाल रखते हैं ...

इस से पहले भी कितने भँवरे आये ...
मेरे आने पे ही क्यूँ बवाल उठते हैं ...

हाथ में हाथ ले के क्या निकले ...
जितनी आँखें उतनी सवाल उठते हैं ...

मैं तो बस दिल कि बात करता हूँ ...
आप कहते है साहब कमाल करते हैं ...

ये इशारा है कल कहीं पे मिलने का ...
वो समझते हैं यूँ ही रुमाल गिरते हैं ...

कोई तो आएगी मेरे भी हिस्से में ...
प्यार के सागर में रोज़ जाल रखते हैं ...
 
आना उनको मेरे ही पास था लेकिन ...
तिरछी तिरछी वो चाल चलते हैं ...

लब खामोश है पर चाहते हैं कहना कुछ ...
ये बयां उनके गुलाबी से गाल करते हैं ...

"मुसाहिब" को आपके बिन अब तो ...
एक पल भी हज़ार साल लगते हैं ...


Hum Aapka KitNaa Khyaal Rakhte HaiN...
Jo Haal Aapka Wahi Apnaa Haal Rakhte HaiN...

Is Se Pahle Bhi Kitnee Bhanwre Aaye...
Mere Aane Pe HI KyuN Bawaal Uthte HaiN...

Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

Main To bas Dil Kii Baat Karta HuN...
Aap Kahte HaiN Sahab Kamaal Karte HaiN...

Ye Ishara Hai Kal Kahin Pe Milne Kaa..
Wo Samajhte Hain Yu Hi Rumaal Girte HaiN...

Koii To Aayegi Mere Bhi Hisse Mein...
Pyaar Ke Sagar Mein Roz Jaal Rakhte HaiN...

Aana Unko Mere Hi Paas Tha Lekin...
Tirchi Tirchi Wo Chaal Chalte HaiN...

Lab Khamosh HaiN par Chahte Hain Kahna Kuch...
Ye Bayan Unke Gulaabii Se Gaal Karte HaiN...

"Musaahib" Ko Aapke Bin Ab To...
Ek Pal Bhi Hazaar Saal Lagte HaiN...
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2013, 03:22:22 PM »
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Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

Main To bas Dil Kii Baat Karta HuN...
Aap Kahte HaiN Sahab Kamaal Karte HaiN...

waah waah musahib ji kamaal ka likha hai ,,

bas iska radeef badalta gaya hai to thoda ajeeb laga

warna bohut hi khoob khayaal bandha hai apne
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2013, 03:39:40 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 11, 2013, 03:22:22 PM
Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

Main To bas Dil Kii Baat Karta HuN...
Aap Kahte HaiN Sahab Kamaal Karte HaiN...

waah waah musahib ji kamaal ka likha hai ,,

bas iska radeef badalta gaya hai to thoda ajeeb laga

warna bohut hi khoob khayaal bandha hai apne
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

bahut bahut shukriyaa Sahal Sahab aapki hauslaafazai ka or salah ka..
Janab Ye maine Ghazal ki doosri kism use ki hai jise "Azaad Ghazal" kahte hain or isme radeef or qafiyaa nahin hota, janab aap bakhoobi jaan rahe honge bas mai apni nazar pesh kar rha hun...or aisi Ghazlon me janab Farhat abbas Shah ka naam bakhoobi or badi adab se liya jata rha hai..
Ek baar fir se shukriyaa Sahab..
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2013, 04:02:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sahal Sahab aapki hauslaafazai ka or salah ka..
Janab Ye maine Ghazal ki doosri kism use ki hai jise "Azaad Ghazal" kahte hain or isme radeef or qafiyaa nahin hota, janab aap bakhoobi jaan rahe honge bas mai apni nazar pesh kar rha hun...or aisi Ghazlon me janab Farhat abbas Shah ka naam bakhoobi or badi adab se liya jata rha hai..
Ek baar fir se shukriyaa Sahab..
bohut shukriya janab musahib apka
mujhe bhi is baat se agaahai dene ka
main bhi yaad rakhunga ,,,
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2013, 04:13:35 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2013, 04:37:01 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 11, 2013, 03:02:15 PM
हम आपका कितना ख्याल रखते हैं ...
जो हाल आपका वही अपना हाल रखते हैं ...

इस से पहले भी कितने भँवरे आये ...
मेरे आने पे ही क्यूँ बवाल उठते हैं ...

हाथ में हाथ ले के क्या निकले ...
जितनी आँखें उतनी सवाल उठते हैं ...

मैं तो बस दिल कि बात करता हूँ ...
आप कहते है साहब कमाल करते हैं ...

ये इशारा है कल कहीं पे मिलने का ...
वो समझते हैं यूँ ही रुमाल गिरते हैं ...

कोई तो आएगी मेरे भी हिस्से में ...
प्यार के सागर में रोज़ जाल रखते हैं ...
 
आना उनको मेरे ही पास था लेकिन ...
तिरछी तिरछी वो चाल चलते हैं ...

लब खामोश है पर चाहते हैं कहना कुछ ...
ये बयां उनके गुलाबी से गाल करते हैं ...

"मुसाहिब" को आपके बिन अब तो ...
एक पल भी हज़ार साल लगते हैं ...


Hum Aapka KitNaa Khyaal Rakhte HaiN...
Jo Haal Aapka Wahi Apnaa Haal Rakhte HaiN...

Is Se Pahle Bhi Kitnee Bhanwre Aaye...
Mere Aane Pe HI KyuN Bawaal Uthte HaiN...

Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

Main To bas Dil Kii Baat Karta HuN...
Aap Kahte HaiN Sahab Kamaal Karte HaiN...

Ye Ishara Hai Kal Kahin Pe Milne Kaa..
Wo Samajhte Hain Yu Hi Rumaal Girte HaiN...

Koii To Aayegi Mere Bhi Hisse Mein...
Pyaar Ke Sagar Mein Roz Jaal Rakhte HaiN...

Aana Unko Mere Hi Paas Tha Lekin...
Tirchi Tirchi Wo Chaal Chalte HaiN...

Lab Khamosh HaiN par Chahte Hain Kahna Kuch...
Ye Bayan Unke Gulaabii Se Gaal Karte HaiN...

"Musaahib" Ko Aapke Bin Ab To...
Ek Pal Bhi Hazaar Saal Lagte HaiN...


with rau,sir
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bahot khoobsurat peshkash...
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2013, 05:32:27 PM »
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bahot khooob, dheron daaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

DherooN daad qubool kijie.. awesome..
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 11, 2013, 04:13:35 PM
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 11, 2013, 04:37:01 PM

with rau,sir
Thanks MB Ji..
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 11, 2013, 05:04:42 PM
bahot khoobsurat peshkash...
Thanks Sidra Ji..
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 11, 2013, 05:32:27 PM
bahot khooob, dheron daaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyaa Iqtedar Sahab..
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 11, 2013, 05:44:48 PM
Hath Mein Hath Le ke Kya Nikle ...
Jitni Aankhein Utnii Sawaal Uthte HaiN...

DherooN daad qubool kijie.. awesome..
Thanks Saman Ji...
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2013, 06:21:52 PM »
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मैं तो बस दिल कि बात करता हूँ ...
आप कहते है साहब कमाल करते हैं ...

Bahut Khub Sahab Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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