ज़िन्दगी सादा- सहज हो.....

by yati_om on December 28, 2009, 05:24:26 AM
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ज़िन्दगी सादा- सहज हो कुछ बनावट कम तो हो.
प्यार फैले, नफरतों का शोर कुछ मद्धम तो हो.

बात हम   अपने पड़ोसी  से    करें    कैसे    शुरू,
कुछ फ़ज़ा का रंग बदले कुछ नया मौसम तो हो.

सीख लेंगे लोग इक दूजे प देना जान भी,
रहनुमा के हाथ में ऐसा कोई परचम तो हो.

मुश्किलें दिखलाएंगी खुद मंजिलों का रास्ता,
हौसला तो हो दिलों में बाजुओं में दम तो हो.

तार दिल के जोड़कर रखना ज़माने से ज़रूर,
जब किसी के अश्क निकलें आँख तेरी नम तो हो.

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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2009, 05:26:41 AM »
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Waah Waa Kya baat hai Om Prakash ji.. Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Daad karbool kijiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2009, 06:33:39 AM »
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Kya hi khoob ghazal likhi hai Om Prakash Yati ji. Mazaa aa gaya. I congrat for creating such a nice ghazal.
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2009, 11:51:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Yati Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2009, 07:28:28 PM »
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Great creation OM ji,very beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2009, 07:42:51 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Rachana Likhi Hai Omparkash JI Aapne
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2009, 08:07:21 AM »
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Achhi kavita hai aapki OMji..... Applause Applause Applause
Aapke blog ka link dijiye.....koi prakaashan bhi hai aapka...


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ज़िन्दगी सादा- सहज हो कुछ बनावट कम तो हो.
प्यार फैले, नफरतों का शोर कुछ मद्धम तो हो.

बात हम   अपने पड़ोसी  से    करें    कैसे    शुरू,
कुछ फ़ज़ा का रंग बदले कुछ नया मौसम तो हो.

सीख लेंगे लोग इक दूजे प देना जान भी,
रहनुमा के हाथ में ऐसा कोई परचम तो हो.

मुश्किलें दिखलाएंगी खुद मंजिलों का रास्ता,
हौसला तो हो दिलों में बाजुओं में दम तो हो.

तार दिल के जोड़कर रखना ज़माने से ज़रूर,
जब किसी के अश्क निकलें आँख तेरी नम तो हो.

                - ओमप्रकाश यती
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