तन्हाई....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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तन्हाई का ये कैसा आलम है छाया
सामने रहे तुम फिर भी न देख पाया ||

तेरे घर में तो रही हर वक़्त हलचल
मेरी गली में तो कभी कोई न आया ||

वक़्त-ए-रुखसत एक झलक दिखा दो
वरना ता-उम्र रहेगा मायूसी का साया ||

मोहल्ले में बच्चियां जवान हो रही हैं
चौखट पर रहती है नज़र कौन आया ||

ये दुनिया और इस दुनिया के झंझट
दूर हो जा इनसे ये तो हैं मोह माया ||

क्यूँ जोड़ना सात पुश्तों की खातिर
छूट जायेगा “मीत” साथ क्या था लाया ||  
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2013, 02:47:17 PM »
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is khoobsoorat ghazal ke saath waapsee bahut bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2013, 02:59:56 PM »
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very nice creation... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2013, 03:00:18 PM »
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तन्हाई का ये कैसा आलम है छाया
सामने रहे तुम फिर भी न देख पाया ||

तेरे घर में तो रही हर वक़्त हलचल
मेरी गली में तो कभी कोई न आया ||

वक़्त-ए-रुखसत एक झलक दिखा दो
वरना ता-उम्र रहेगा मायूसी का साया ||

मोहल्ले में बच्चियां जवान हो रही हैं
चौखट पर रहती है नज़र कौन आया ||

ये दुनिया और इस दुनिया के झंझट
दूर हो जा इनसे ये तो हैं मोह माया ||

क्यूँ जोड़ना सात पुश्तों की खातिर
छूट जायेगा “मीत” साथ क्या था लाया ||  


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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2013, 04:58:53 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2013, 06:19:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Amit ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2013, 07:24:18 PM »
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bahut khub meet ji, bahut achhi ghazal hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2013, 08:03:10 PM »
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waah waah bahut hi khoob meet jee, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye.
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2013, 10:39:28 PM »
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umda likha hai!
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2013, 07:01:42 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2013, 08:28:24 AM »
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is khoobsoorat ghazal ke saath waapsee bahut bahut mubarak ho
बहुत बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सैनी जी, आपका ये प्यार ही है जो लोगों को यहाँ खींच कर ले आता है
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2013, 09:18:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah amitji... bhaut pyaari peshkash rahi.. is khoob kalam par dil se hazaron daad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2013, 12:16:08 PM »
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very nice creation... Applause Applause Applause Applause
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया निशी जी
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2013, 01:31:34 PM »
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good one,sir
शुक्रिया मरहूम जी
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«Reply #14 on: August 02, 2013, 01:49:54 PM »
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया मिराज जी
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