Pooja
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« on: August 31, 2007, 03:44:25 PM » |
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kai dino se yah Gazal sun rahi hu.. kabhi sakoon deti hai to kabhi rula deti hai... iski her ek line, ek ek shabd dil ko chu raha hai... socha app sabke sath yaha share kar lu:
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aadami aadamii ko kyaa degaa
jo bhi degaa vahi Khudaa degaa
meraa qaatil hi meraa munsib hai
kyaa mere haq men faisalaa degaa
zindagi ko karib se dekho
isakaa cheharaa tumhen rulaa degaa
hamse puchho dostii kaa silaa
dushmanon kaa bhi dil hilaa degaa
ishq kaa zahar pi liyaa 'Faakir'
ab masihaa bhi kyaa davaa degaa
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« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2007, 08:21:35 AM » |
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pooja g ap ki pasend bohat achi ha......aadmi aadmi ko kya dy ga...ye heading per ker laga k ap ny kuch likha ha.. lakin ap ki favrioute gazel nikli  khair koi baat nahi .. abi meri 1 fermaish ha ap sy k ap is line per kuch likhiye" aadmi aadmi ko kya dy ga" zindagi ko kareeb sy dakho is ka chehra tumhain rula dy ga=D> ap ki tara ap ki pasend b bohat achi ha aadmi aadmi ko kya dy ga bus gum ya koi saza dy ga aadmi aami ko kya dy ga ye perh ker yahi zahen main aata ha lakin ap is ine sy kuch likhiye ga zaror.. mjhy intezar rahy ga |
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« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2007, 09:09:33 AM » |
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yes..
sahi kaha aankhain G ne
achi pasand hai
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« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2007, 03:54:45 PM » |
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Nice sharing pooja.
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Pooja
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« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2007, 04:13:12 PM » |
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pooja g ap ki pasend bohat achi ha......aadmi aadmi ko kya dy ga...ye heading per ker laga k ap ny kuch likha ha.. lakin ap ki favrioute gazel nikli khair koi baat nahi .. abi meri 1 fermaish ha ap sy k ap is line per kuch likhiye" aadmi aadmi ko kya dy ga" Maafi chahti hu ki apka yah msg itne dino baad ajj dekha. Aankhain ji poori koshish karugi ki apki farmaish poori kar saku.. na jaane kyun kalam aor shabd sab chup-chup se hai... jaise ki maine dard-e-shayri main likh "shabd kho gaye" jaise hi kalam wapis mili aor shbdo ne sath diya, main yahi per akar jarur kuch likhugi.... Thanks apko meri pasand , pasand aai... Thanks Sahiba and Rajani.... |
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« Reply #5 on: September 13, 2007, 05:02:58 PM » |
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Koshish ki hai magar wo baat nahi bani... phir bhi yaha likh rahi hu...
Adami adami ko kaya dega
Jo bhi dega wo khuda dega
Mare marne pe, wo ajj jo muskuraya hai
Ek din apni muskurahat per, khud hi ro dega
Usse puchega jab koi haal mera
Wo khud hi apna sir jhuka dega
Le kar dekh le aor bhi imteehan mere
Sabar mera tujhe hilla dega
Dil toota hai jee bhar ke ro le pooja
Jisne dard diya, wo hi ek din dawa dega
Adami adami ko kaya dega
Jo bhi dega wo khuda dega
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« Reply #6 on: September 16, 2007, 08:26:13 AM » |
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bahut acha pooja ji very nice sharing, daad dete hain aapki choice ki
bahut khoob aur bahut acha likha hai aapne
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« Reply #7 on: September 16, 2007, 11:06:43 AM » |
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wonderfull..awesum Pooja sis..baat kyun nahi bani..baat to superhit bani hai..Bahut hi acha likha hai sis..aate hi aapki shayari padhne ko mili woww
I just love this gazal n the other one too..
koi yeh kaise bataye ke woh tanha kyun hai
woh jo apna hua karta tha woh aaj aur kissi ka kyun hai
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« Reply #8 on: September 17, 2007, 06:34:54 AM » |
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Really gud ghazals u write. I thout dat there is no future of urdu poetry, but after reading dese ghazalz, i've changed my mind....
Thanx God future of my loving language is safe. :D
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khwaish
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« Reply #9 on: October 02, 2007, 12:30:07 PM » |
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NICE GHAZAL..NICE SHARING..POOJA
AAP NE JO LIKHA HAI USSI THEME PE KAABIL-E-TAARIF HAI
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Pooja
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« Reply #10 on: October 03, 2007, 12:32:20 PM » |
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Zulmonan and Khwaish ji!!!!
nikki apke comments dekh kar dil ko bahoot acha laga.. ek do line app bhi likh jaati... apko pade kafi waqat ho gaya!!!! Missing old day... with you and Meena!!!!
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« Reply #11 on: October 05, 2007, 01:05:42 AM » |
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Bahut hi auchi ghazal hai. Is ko padne k baad aisa laga jaise kisi ki khoi hui yaad aa gayi.
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« Reply #12 on: January 28, 2008, 10:35:03 AM » |
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Thanks Rahul Ji!!
Admi admi ko kaya dega
jo bhi dega wo khuda dega
ansuo ki keemat laga le ajj tu bhi
ek din yah sari keemat, khud hi chuka dega
wafa ke naam per dete rahe jo umarbhar dhoka
ek din tujhko wafa ka matlab wo samjha dega
zindagi rahi sari teri fareb ki sathi
khud ka yah fareb ek din tujhe hilla dega
admi admi ko kaya dega
jo bhi dega wo khuda dega
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khwaish
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« Reply #13 on: January 28, 2008, 12:27:51 PM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB POOJA...EK KOSHISH
AADMI AADMI KO KYA DEGA
JO BHI DEGA WOH KHUDA DEGA
KYON JALATA HAI TU UMEED KA CHIRAG
JISSE EK DIN TU KHUD HI BHUJA DEGA
AADMI AADMI KO KYA DEKHA
NA KAHO KE WOH KHUDA HAI MOHABBAT MEIN
INSAAN PAR KYA BHAROSA,INSAAN KABHI BHI DAGA DEGA
KHUSHIYON UNHI LOGON SE KHUD SE MILTI HAI
JO GHAM KO APNE MUSKURAKAR
APNE ZINDAGI KO SAJA DEGA
AADMI AADMI KO KYA DEKHA
JO BHI DEGA
WOH KHUDA DEGA
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« Reply #14 on: January 28, 2008, 12:28:50 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai khwaish... tooo good!! bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!
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