*Gazal* -Panna 2:Ghazals

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*Gazal*

« Reply #15 on: November 03, 2007, 07:51:55 AM »

bohut khoob likha he rooja ji , mubarak ho


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« Reply #16 on: November 14, 2007, 06:07:43 PM »

Bahut bahut Thanks to Jaanasheen ji, Pooja di, Khwaish ji, and Raj ji.


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« Reply #17 on: November 14, 2007, 06:11:10 PM »

Tokkar khaker sambal na paya
Khud ko apne badal na paya

Dekh haal woh kaise rota hai
Pattar tha jo pigal na paya

Fisal gaya jajbaat main yu hi
Dil toh dil hai sambal na paya

Beech raah main chod gaya woh
Saath do kadam chal na paya

Kaash..!! kahi ab jal jaye
Woh chiraag jo jal na paya[/color][/size]


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« Reply #18 on: November 25, 2007, 04:06:24 AM »

Toofan main kashti ko kabhi kinara na mila
Aadmi ko aadmi ka sahara na mila

Kaisa ye naya daur aagaya hai ki jisme
Mohabbat - bara koyi ishara na mila

Maa-baap ki kidmat ab kwaab bann gayi
Srawan-sa koyi aankh ka tara na mila

Her taraf dukh hai, takqlif hai, mayusi hai
Khushiyon bara kyu koyi nazara na mila

Wo dikhe to dunia ke liye khushi mai mangu
Aasma.n se koyi toota sitara na mila

Apni-apni akad main her koyi hai dekho
Sab vijaita kehte hai... koyi haara na mila

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« Reply #19 on: November 29, 2007, 12:29:16 AM »

Good One..

Ques..


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #20 on: November 29, 2007, 01:34:38 AM »

Very Nice Thread Roja...
All Gazals are Too Good...


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #21 on: December 02, 2007, 04:18:32 AM »

Good Job Roja Ji Lage Raho.........


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #22 on: December 18, 2007, 09:48:59 PM »

Thank you very much Qutub ji, Shikha di, and Majid ji... Plz keep coming ...


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« Reply #23 on: December 18, 2007, 10:30:26 PM »

Friends... mujhe aaj pata nahi kyu darr sa lag raha hai k meri hindi
kamjor hai aur yeh gazal pe kahi hindi wordings galati ki hu. Kahi galati
nazar aaya to kehna... plz.
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शब्द झूठे है सभी सत्या कथाओं की तरह
वक़्त बेशर्म है वेश्या की अदाओं की तरह

जाने वो किसका था साया की जिसे छूने को,
हम भटकते रहे आवारा हवाओं की तरह

प्यार के वास्ते प्यासा है ये दिल सदियों से
अब तो बरसो कोई सावन की घटाओ की तरह

हर अंधेरे से सुबह बन के गुज़र ज़ाऊगी
तेरा हाथ जो रहे सर पर दुआओं की तरह

आज पलकों में मुझे ख्वाब बनाकर रख लो सनम
कल मै खो जौंगी, गुमनाम गुफ़ाओं की तरह

मुझको सुलझाने में तुम ख़ुद ही उलझ जाओगे
ज़िंदगी है मेरी साधु की जाताओं की तरह

जी हां .. "रोज़ा" में बहुत दोष है लेकिन फिर भी
माफ़ कर दो उसे बच्चों की खताओं की तरह[/size]

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Waqt beshrm hai veshya ki adawon ki tarah

Jane wo kiska tha saya ki jise chune ko,
Hum bhatakte rahe aawara hawawon ki tarah

Pyar ke wasthe pyasa hai yeh dil sadiyon se
Ab to barso koyi sawan ki ghatao ki tarah

Her andhere se subah ban ke guzar JaaU.gii
Tera haat jo rahe ser per duawon ki tarah

Aaj palkon mein mujhe khwaab banakar rakh lo sanam
Kal mai kho jaungi, gumnam gufawon ki tarah

Mujhko suljane mein tum khud hi ulajh jaoge
Zindagi hai meri sadhu ki jatawon ki tarah

Ji haan "Roja" main bahut dosh hai lekin fir bi
Maaf kar do use bachchon ki khatawon ki tarah


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #24 on: January 20, 2008, 09:41:53 AM »

kY BAAT H AP KI.BOHT HI KHUBSURT LIKHA H

BEDARD H LOG DARD KONH SAMJHTAY
JO ANKHAY KAHTI HE WOH BAT NH SAMJHTY
MA POCHTI HO ZABAN SY KAHNA ZARORI H
KU LOG MARAY ASHARAY NH SAMJHTAY


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #25 on: January 20, 2008, 10:00:28 AM »

Bahut bahut shukhriya Farah ji


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #26 on: January 20, 2008, 10:05:26 AM »

bahoot khoob roja ji

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« Reply #27 on: January 20, 2008, 11:37:30 AM »

Thanks baadal ji


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #28 on: January 20, 2008, 11:41:41 AM »

Sabab rootne ka bata kar to jate
Hame bhi zara aajmakar to jate

Fazaon ne poocha kayi bar tum ko
Jalak bas zara si dikha kar to jate

Muskura rahi thi chaman main bahare
Mohabbat ke nagme sunakar to jaate

Diya dard-dil koyi shikwa nahi hai
Pata charagar ka bata kar to jate

Agar besabab thi hamari shikayat
Zara aankh hum se mila kar to jate

Zara aur rukte to hoti enayat
Janaja hamara uta kar to jate

Mita hi diya jab "Roja" ko tumne
To uski chita bhyi jala kar to jate

(sabab : Karan, Faza : Watavaran, besabab = bina karan
Inayat = krupa)


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Re: *Gazal*

« Reply #29 on: January 24, 2008, 12:26:36 PM »

wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob roja... kamal ka likha hai....

yah lines to dil ko chu gai

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