Kiye haiN aaNdhiyoN /किये हैं आँधियों

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Kiye haiN  aaNdhiyoN  ne jo ishaare aa gaye  ham  tak.
Lagaayee aag jisne  bhee  sharaare  aa  gaye  ham tak.

Sulah ke vaaste  bheje the jo  dushman ko  khat hamne.
Ki vaapas laut kar vo khat hamaare aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Badaa chaalaaq hai dushman hame  bhejaa hai nazraanaa.
Bhare  baarood  se  uske  pitaare  aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Kahin par bam dhamaakeN to kahiN par train  takraayee.
Bazariye  doordarshan  sab  nazaare  aa gaye  ham tak.

Faqat paighaam hamne to mohabbat  kaa  hee bheja thaa.
Liye vo  haath  meN  patthar karaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Hamaare  sabr  ko mat dekhiye ye jab  bhee tootaa hai.
Khisak kar  khud samander ke kinaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Huyee aamad jo unke saath sab sakhiyaaN chalee aayeeN.
Hame  aisaa  lagaa  re  chaand  taare aa gaye ham tak.

                                                                                                      Dr. Surendra Saini


किये हैं आँधियों ने जो  इशारे  आ गए हम  तक |

लगाई आग जिसने भी  शरारे आ गए  हम  तक ||


सुलह के वास्ते भेजे थे जो  दुश्मन को  ख़त हमने |

की वापस लौट कर वो ख़त हमारे आ गए हम तक ||


बड़ा  चालाक़  है  दुश्मन   हमें  भेजा  है नज़राना |

भरे  बारूद  से  उसके पिटारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


कहीं  पर  बम  धमाकें  तो  कहीं पर  ट्रेन टकराई |

बज़रिये  दूरदर्शन  सब नज़ारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


फ़क़त पैग़ाम हमने  तो  मोहब्बत  का  ही भेजा था |

लिए वो  हाथ में पत्थर करारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


हमारे  सब्र  को  मत  देखिये  ये  जब भी  टूटा है |

खिसक कर खुद समंदर के किनारे आ गए  हम तक ||


हुई आमद जो  उनके साथ सब  सखियाँ  चली आयीं |

हमें  ऐसा  लगा  रे चाँद तारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2011, 05:01:02 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah janab badi khoob kalaam pesh ki hai aapne..
Behad khoob ashaar kahe hai janab...

Aapke khayaaloN ki gehrai bahut achchi hai.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye...

         




Kiye haiN  aaNdhiyoN  ne jo ishaare aa gaye  ham  tak.
Lagaayee aag jisne  bhee  sharaare  aa  gaye  ham tak.

Achcha Matla hai... daad Sani misre meiN "jisne" ki bajaay "UNHONE " bhi kahne se misre meiN kuch aur rangat aa sakti hai...         

Sulah ke vaaste  bheje the jo  dushman ko  khat hamne.
Ki vaapas laut kar vo khat hamaare aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Kia kahne janab waah bahut khoob umdaa Usual Smile
daad daad daad           


Badaa chaalaaq hai dushman hame  bhejaa hai nazraanaa.
Bhare  baarood  se  uske  pitaare  aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob.. Usual Smile         

Kahin par bam dhamaakeN to kahiN par train  takraayee.
Bazariye  doordarshan  sab  nazaare  aa gaye  ham tak.

Achchi bayaani hai janab daad Usual Smile         

Faqat paighaam hamne to mohabbat  kaa  hee bheja thaa.
Liye vo  haath  meN  patthar karaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Kia kahne janab waah bahut khoob, Kafi
achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile         


Hamaare  sabr  ko mat dekhiye ye jab  bhee tootaa hai.
Khisak kar  khud samander ke kinaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Waah waah kia kahne Janab bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Huyee aamad jo unke saath sab sakhiyaaN chalee aayeeN.
Hame  aisaa  lagaa  re  chaand  taare aa gaye ham tak.

Waah bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa daad Usual Smile         


Behad khoob Gazal kahi hai Saini sahaab... Usual Smile
Humari fir se daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2011, 06:41:03 AM »
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Parwaaz ji
 aapke dwaaraa meri lagbhag sabhi ghazlen saraahi jaati hain.such kahoon such kahoon to meri har ghzzal aapki daad kaa intizaar kartee hai.jin ghazlon ne aapse response nahin paayaa zaroor unme kuchh kami rahi hogee. aapkaa suggestion manzoor hai janaab. agar unhone (222) kaa wazn dede to bhee ko hataa doogaan.
aur misraa aise hojaayegaa lagaayee aag unhone sharaare aagaye ham tak. shukriyaa.
plz mujhe reply kare aapke reply ke mutabik main dono version ko modify kar doogaan.aage bhi isi ptarah mujhe raah dikhaate rahiyega bahut achha lagta hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2011, 09:09:50 AM »
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Khan humne kha tha "Tanha" or wo khan chle aaye...........
Nfrt main bdl gye mohbt k thai jo saaye,

khuda hoga ya ho bhgwan gwara kisko hai ye aalm.............
Jb jinda bolte hnste achank insaan lashon main bdl jaaye,

Tbhayi sirf humari hi nhi isme tum bhi shamil ho.......
insan ki nzr se bch bhi jao to uski nzr se kon bch paaye,

                             Sonia "Tanha" Garg

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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2011, 09:12:35 AM »
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Bhuat Bhuat Khoob Dr. Sahib Bhuat Khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2011, 11:03:12 AM »
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thanks kaash ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2011, 11:06:25 AM »
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shukriyaa sonia ji jis dhang se daad dee hai meri qalam kaamyaab ho gayee

Dr. Surendra Saini
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2011, 11:27:25 AM »
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kya ghazal likhi saini saab.. Bahut hi badhiya.. Aise ashar to bas aapki hi rachna me dikhti hai.. Aise hi hame lajawab peshkash se gulzar karte rahiye..
Shukriya..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2011, 11:41:50 AM »
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Parwaaz ji
 aapke dwaaraa meri lagbhag sabhi ghazlen saraahi jaati hain.such kahoon such kahoon to meri har ghzzal aapki daad kaa intizaar kartee hai.jin ghazlon ne aapse response nahin paayaa zaroor unme kuchh kami rahi hogee. aapkaa suggestion manzoor hai janaab. agar unhone (222) kaa wazn dede to bhee ko hataa doogaan.
aur misraa aise hojaayegaa lagaayee aag unhone sharaare aagaye ham tak. shukriyaa.
plz mujhe reply kare aapke reply ke mutabik main dono version ko modify kar doogaan.aage bhi isi ptarah mujhe raah dikhaate rahiyega bahut achha lagta hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini

Saini Sahaab Aadaab!

Hum tahe dil se muafi chahte hai ke aapke kisi kalaam par
reply nahi de payeN hai to, waqt ki taNgi ki wajaaH se jyada
waqt nahi de pate hai... Usual Smile

Jee aapne durust farmaaya ke aap ko us misre meiN "unhone " kahne ke liye bhee ko nikaalna padeNga.. Par misre meiN kuch
aur raNgat badi huyi agar aapko lagti hai to aap jaise munaseeb
samjheN Usual Smile

Waise hume meter ka jyada ilm nahi hai, So humari aisi rai ko
jyada gehrai se naa lijiyeNga Usual Smile bus thoda bahut shabdoN ka wazan samjh lete hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
         

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Kiye haiN  aaNdhiyoN  ne jo ishaare aa gaye  ham  tak.
Lagaayee aag jisne  bhee  sharaare  aa  gaye  ham tak.

Sulah ke vaaste  bheje the jo  dushman ko  khat hamne.
Ki vaapas laut kar vo khat hamaare aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Badaa chaalaaq hai dushman hame  bhejaa hai nazraanaa.
Bhare  baarood  se  uske  pitaare  aa  gaye  ham  tak.

Kahin par bam dhamaakeN to kahiN par train  takraayee.
Bazariye  doordarshan  sab  nazaare  aa gaye  ham tak.

Faqat paighaam hamne to mohabbat  kaa  hee bheja thaa.
Liye vo  haath  meN  patthar karaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Hamaare  sabr  ko mat dekhiye ye jab  bhee tootaa hai.
Khisak kar  khud samander ke kinaare aa  gaye ham tak.

Huyee aamad jo unke saath sab sakhiyaaN chalee aayeeN.
Hame  aisaa  lagaa  re  chaand  taare aa gaye ham tak.

                                                                                                      Dr. Surendra Saini


किये हैं आँधियों ने जो  इशारे  आ गए हम  तक |

लगाई आग जिसने भी  शरारे आ गए  हम  तक ||


सुलह के वास्ते भेजे थे जो  दुश्मन को  ख़त हमने |

की वापस लौट कर वो ख़त हमारे आ गए हम तक ||


बड़ा  चालाक़  है  दुश्मन   हमें  भेजा  है नज़राना |

भरे  बारूद  से  उसके पिटारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


कहीं  पर  बम  धमाकें  तो  कहीं पर  ट्रेन टकराई |

बज़रिये  दूरदर्शन  सब नज़ारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


फ़क़त पैग़ाम हमने  तो  मोहब्बत  का  ही भेजा था |

लिए वो  हाथ में पत्थर करारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


हमारे  सब्र  को  मत  देखिये  ये  जब भी  टूटा है |

खिसक कर खुद समंदर के किनारे आ गए  हम तक ||


हुई आमद जो  उनके साथ सब  सखियाँ  चली आयीं |

हमें  ऐसा  लगा  रे चाँद तारे आ  गए  हम  तक ||


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