ज़िन्दगी यूँ ही नहीं कटती बहुत कुछ सहना पड़ता है ..

by Bishwajeet Anand Bsu on February 25, 2013, 05:12:08 PM
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ज़िन्दगी यूँ ही नहीं कटती बहुत कुछ सहना पड़ता है ..
कभी कुछ सुनना पड़ता है कभी कुछ कहना पड़ता है ..
जानती है हर कली की खिले तो चूस लेगा ये भंवर ....
पर रस्म है जालिम तो उसको खिलना पड़ता है ...
होते परिंदे तो उड़कर काट लेते ज़िन्दगी अपनी ..
हुए हैं आदमी तो पावं जमीं पर रखना पड़ता है ....
ज़िन्दगी यूँ ही नहीं कटती बहुत कुछ सहना पड़ता है ..
कभी कुछ सुनना पड़ता है कभी कुछ कहना पड़ता है।।।।
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2013, 05:59:16 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai,Basu ji.Mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2013, 07:01:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2013, 07:46:09 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!! Welcome to yoindia!
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2013, 07:55:12 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2013, 08:23:16 PM »
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good one...
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2013, 11:10:54 PM »
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Hi Bishwajeet ji,

The post is very nice. Nicely written. But the section where you are posting is not the correct one.

Please do not post your own compositions under 'Famous Poets and their Poetry' section. It is meant for sharing poems from famous poets. Your self composed posts you need to submit under 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari' section.

When you click on submit poetry, you see a drop down where 'Dosti/ Friendship Area' is there by default. when you click on the drop down and move towards the bottom, you will get the section 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari'. Under that, there are many sub sections. You can post your poem in any of those sections as per the type of poem you are submitting.

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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2013, 12:31:36 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2013, 12:48:16 AM »
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ज़िन्दगी यूँ ही नहीं कटती बहुत कुछ सहना पड़ता है ..
कभी कुछ सुनना पड़ता है कभी कुछ कहना पड़ता है ..
जानती है हर कली की खिले तो चूस लेगा ये भंवर ....
पर रस्म है जालिम तो उसको खिलना पड़ता है ...
होते परिंदे तो उड़कर काट लेते ज़िन्दगी अपनी ..
हुए हैं आदमी तो पावं जमीं पर रखना पड़ता है ....
ज़िन्दगी यूँ ही नहीं कटती बहुत कुछ सहना पड़ता है ..
कभी कुछ सुनना पड़ता है कभी कुछ कहना पड़ता है।।।।

Wah bahut khoob
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