ranjana
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« on: June 10, 2006, 08:51:32 AM » |
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hi yeh meri koshish in punjabi poetry........Jeet ne ismein likhne mein bahut help kari .........shukriya Jeet........ :D
aaj chan ne suraj nu nyota dita ,apne ghar aan da
ek payala ishaqe da pita main sajna tere nam da
jiwe dekh suraj nu ,chann sharma gaya
unjh chardeya mainu khumar, tere deedar da
teri mojudgi vich main apna app sab bhul jawa
khayal nahi rehnda mainu pher kisse din-raat da
aa ke bhaar laye bahavan vich tu injh sohneya
pher rawe na hosh koi mainu iss sansaar da...!!!
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« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2006, 08:55:06 AM » |
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hi yeh meri koshish in punjabi poetry........Jeet ne ismein likhne mein bahut help kari .........shukriya Jeet........ :D
aaj chan ne suraj nu nyota dita ,apne ghar aan da
ek payala ishaqe da pita main sajna tere nam da
jiwe dekh suraj nu ,chann sharma gaya
unjh chardeya mainu khumar, tere deedar da
teri mojudgi vich main apna app sab bhul jawa
khayal nahi rehnda mainu pher kisse din-raat da
aa ke bhaar laye bahavan vich tu injh sohneya
pher rawe na hosh koi mainu iss sansaar da...!!! Aye Nyota Ranju kisde waste hai.....mere liye hai toh bata do.....asi te razi hai......buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaa |
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« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2006, 09:02:48 AM » |
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very nice ranjna ji................halaki sannu paunjabi nahi aandi aa...per aapne jo bhi likha bahut acha tha ..............khaaskar ''EK PYALA ISHAQE DA PITA MAIN,SAJNA TERE NAAM KA''
actually maine SAJNA ko SANJNA pada tha .............aapne aaj mujhe unhe yaad karne ka bahana diya iske liye thanx.........so much
AAJ UNKI YAAD DIL PER KUCH YU CHA RAHI HAI KALI GHATAYE JAISE SAWAN KO BULA RAHI HAI
PALKO PER AKS UNKA,SAJANE LAGE PHIR SAPNE AAJ PHIR AANKHEIN MERI ASHK BAHA RAHI HAI
............@fahi@................
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« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2006, 10:31:28 AM » |
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hi yeh meri koshish in punjabi poetry........Jeet ne ismein likhne mein bahut help kari .........shukriya Jeet........ :D
thanks for the honour Ranjana ji... but everybody here knows about you... :D Jiwe Digge hoye patteyan da koi vaasta nahi baharaan nal Unjh ek pani di boond da koi muQabla nahi kisse nadi nal |
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« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2006, 10:53:07 AM » |
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Aye Nyota Ranju kisde waste hai.....mere liye hai toh bata do.....asi te razi hai......buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaa
oye Gaurav,, kuch likh v de hun punjabi vich... sirf burraaaaaaa nal kam nahi chalna 
AAJ UNKI YAAD DIL PER KUCH YU CHA RAHI HAI KALI GHATAYE JAISE SAWAN KO BULA RAHI HAI
PALKO PER AKS UNKA,SAJANE LAGE PHIR SAPNE AAJ PHIR AANKHEIN MERI ASHK BAHA RAHI HAI
nice work buddy... but it will be appreciated.. if u post down ur writings in proper section... this section is for punjabi poetry ... hope u also dont want to disturb the theme of our lovely forum . Thanks |
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« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2006, 11:49:25 AM » |
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Aye Nyota Ranju kisde waste hai.....mere liye hai toh bata do.....asi te razi hai......buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaa
oye Gaurav,, kuch likh v de hun punjabi vich... sirf burraaaaaaa nal kam nahi chalna
AAJ UNKI YAAD DIL PER KUCH YU CHA RAHI HAI KALI GHATAYE JAISE SAWAN KO BULA RAHI HAI
PALKO PER AKS UNKA,SAJANE LAGE PHIR SAPNE AAJ PHIR AANKHEIN MERI ASHK BAHA RAHI HAI
nice work buddy... but it will be appreciated.. if you post down ur writings in proper section... this section is for punjabi poetry ... hope you also dont want to disturb the theme of our lovely forum . Thanks Oye jeet yaar tenu pata hai ki sanu panjabi nahi aundi...asi te hindi vich hee likh sakde hai..... Jab Jab dekha tenu..... Yeh Dil raaton nu taare ginte rehnda hai..... Ki likha ab iss IShq vich..... Harr Majnoo ab Wah Wah karda rehnda hai......!!!!!! Pata nahi kaisa hai......but hope u ppl like it  |
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« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2006, 12:02:55 PM » |
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Oye jeet yaar tenu pata hai ki sanu panjabi nahi aundi...asi te hindi vich hee likh sakde hai..... Jab Jab dekha tenu..... Yeh Dil raaton nu taare ginte rehnda hai..... Ki likha ab iss IShq vich..... Harr Majnoo ab Wah Wah karda rehnda hai......!!!!!! Pata nahi kaisa hai......but hope you ppl like it oye main haiga na... tension nahi .. tenu punjabi main sikha dewanga :D Jad vi dekhan tenu sohniye eh dil raatan nu taare ginda rehnda hai ki likhan main hun IshQ da sataya har Majnu mainu pard ke Wah Wah kar janda hai...!!! :wink: |
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« Reply #7 on: June 10, 2006, 12:03:32 PM » |
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shukriya Gaurav ................ bahut hi wadiya koshish hai tawadi.............. |
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ranjana
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« Reply #8 on: June 10, 2006, 12:06:24 PM » |
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shukriya PJAG.......... aapko yahan pad ke kisi ki yaad aayi toh chalo accha hi hua ....aapne apni unko yaad toh kiya......... |
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« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2006, 12:15:58 PM » |
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hi yeh meri koshish in punjabi poetry........Jeet ne ismein likhne mein bahut help kari .........shukriya Jeet........ :D
thanks for the honour Ranjana ji... but everybody here knows about you... :D Jiwe Digge hoye patteyan da koi vaasta nahi baharaan nal Unjh ek pani di boond da koi muQabla nahi kisse nadi nal shukriya Jeet............kuch jayda nahi keh dita tusi mere lai...... nadi di rawani booda naal hi puri hondi hai inha lafja di jubani mil ke hi puri hondi hai jado mil jande ne lafjaa.n nal lafaj tado hi shayari di kahani sohni hondi hai menu sahi tareeke nal likhna nahi aanda.....plz koi bhul chuk hoye te maaf karna........... |
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« Reply #10 on: June 11, 2006, 01:40:29 AM » |
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Oye jeet yaar tenu pata hai ki sanu panjabi nahi aundi...asi te hindi vich hee likh sakde hai..... Jab Jab dekha tenu..... Yeh Dil raaton nu taare ginte rehnda hai..... Ki likha ab iss IShq vich..... Harr Majnoo ab Wah Wah karda rehnda hai......!!!!!! Pata nahi kaisa hai......but hope you ppl like it oye main haiga na... tension nahi .. tenu punjabi main sikha dewanga :D Jad vi dekhan tenu sohniye eh dil raatan nu taare ginda rehnda hai ki likhan main hun IshQ da sataya har Majnu mainu pard ke Wah Wah kar janda hai...!!! :wink: :evil: :evil: Itna accha likha tha maine.... :evil: :evil: Thnx Jeet....ab main jald hee seekh jaonga Punjabi |
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« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2006, 01:53:59 AM » |
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:evil: :evil: Itna accha likha tha maine.... :evil: :evil:
Thnx Jeet....ab main jald hee seekh jaonga Punjabi
kisne kaha bura likha tunne :evil: maine sirf hindi wale word punjabi mein kiye,sorry bina permissin k kiya ..but i can do .. u r my brother .. lekin agge se nahi karunga,,, tujhe burra lagga toh ... |
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« Reply #12 on: June 11, 2006, 01:56:47 AM » |
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:evil: :evil: Itna accha likha tha maine.... :evil: :evil:
Thnx Jeet....ab main jald hee seekh jaonga Punjabi
kisne kaha bura likha tunne :evil: maine sirf hindi wale word punjabi mein kiye,sorry bina permissin k kiya ..but i can do .. you r my brother .. lekin agge se nahi karunga,,, tujhe burra lagga toh ... Abe bhai Bura nahi laga....main toh mazaak kar raha tha..tu serious ho gaya  |
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« Reply #13 on: June 11, 2006, 03:23:56 AM » |
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sry jeet ..........i m sry 4 tht..........kya karu dil ke haathi majboor ho gaya tha ........next time i'll try ki forum ke rules follow karu...........
SRY TO EVERY1
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« Reply #14 on: June 11, 2006, 03:39:15 AM » |
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sry jeet ..........i m sry 4 tht..........kya karu dil ke haathi majboor ho gaya tha ........next time i'll try ki forum ke rules follow karu...........
SRY TO EVERY1 thanks dost.. tumhari iss majburi mein kuch likhne ki koshish karta hoon.. hope u like it
tere toh sohniye main door han
tere pyaar vich chakna-choor han
na de mainu tu salah koi
main Ishq de hathon majboor han ...!!! |
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