गंजे का दर्द (घनाक्षरी छंद )

by ramspathak on June 16, 2013, 12:36:12 PM
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बाल सभी झड़ गये,बुढ्ढा अब  दिखता हूँ !
हमउम्र औरतें भी,चाचा कह देती हैं !!
पत्नी भी मारे है ताना,भाग्य मेरे फूट गये !
कभी कभी वो भी मुझे,बुढ्ढा कह देती है !!

अपने ही जब कभी,अपना मज़ाक ले लें  !
किससे कहूँ कितनी,पीड़ा मुझे होती है
छुपते छुपाते कभी,दर्पण में देखूं जब !
पत्नी देख मुझे फिर,हा हा हँस देती है !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2013, 01:01:02 PM »
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Bhai Bahut Khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2013, 01:03:53 PM »
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hardik aabhar bhai **************
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2013, 01:25:18 PM »
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Ha ha ... Kya baat hai !!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2013, 01:26:18 PM »
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hardik aabhar zaara ji///saadar
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2013, 02:43:18 PM »
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ha ha ha..dil ka dard bakhoobi shabdo me utara hai.. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

bahut khoob..daad daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2013, 03:31:10 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2013, 05:18:17 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2013, 10:43:32 PM »
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 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Giggle Giggle Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2013, 04:26:58 PM »
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