दुमदार दोहे/Dumdaar dohe.................................SAINI

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एक वक़्त था जब धर्मयुग और साप्ताहिक हिन्दुस्तान जैसे रिसालों में कविवर सबरस के दोहे छपते थे जिन्हें मैं शौक से  पढता  था |उन्ही से प्रभावित होकर मैंने कभी ये  दोहे कहे थे | इन में पहली दो लाइंस  तो आम दोहों की तरह ही होती हैं |पर बाद  में एक आधी लाइन होती है जिसमें इन दो लाइंस का निचोड़ होता है | इसे दुम कहा जाता है और इन दोहों को दुमदार दोहे |तो  लीजिये आज आपका मिजाज़ बदलने के लिए हाज़िर हैं |

 

सब समझाते रह गए पर नहीं मानी बात |

माँगी कार जहेज़ में लगी कमर में  लात |

              पडी जूतों की माला ||

 

किसी कंवारी ने करी नहीं आज तक हाँ |

आख़िर हमने ढूंढ ली छह बच्चों की माँ |

           चलो अब काम चलायें ||

 

कम उमरी के इश्क़ में क्या रक्खा है स्वाद |

इश्क़ हमेशा  कीजिये  साठ  साल के बाद |

                बुढापा ख़ूब कटेगा ||

 

या अल्लाह मेरे साथ में कैसा  हुआ मज़ाक |

अब चोथी पीढी में बेग़म मांगे खड़ी तिलाक़ |

             मैं किस जोहड़ में कूदूं ||

 

इश्क़ और क्रिकेट के गिरगिट जैसे रंग |

प्रेमिका से रूठ कर  वो  खेले  बेढंग |

            हुए ज़ीरो पर आउट ||

 

मुख  माही  न दांत हैं नहीं पेट में आंत |

उस खूसट का आपने लिया थाम क्यूं हाथ |

          हसीना हम क्या मर गए ||

 

शादी  एसी  कीजिये  जो   होवे बेजोड़ |

ससुर मिनिस्टर हो करे ख़र्चा कईं करोड़ |

             नहीं तो रहो कंवारे ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी
 

Ek vaqt thaa jab dharmyug aur saaptaahik hindustaan jaise risaalon men kavivar SABRAS ke dohe chhapte the jinhe main shauk se padhtaa thaa.Unhee se inspired hokar maine kabhee ye dohe kahe the. In men pahlee do lines to aam doho kee tarah hee hotee hain.Par baad men ek aadhee line hotee hai jismen in do lines kaa nichod hotaa hai. Ise dum kahaa jaataa hai aur in doho ko dumdaar dohe.To leejiye aaj aapkaa mijaaz badlne ke liye haazir hain.

Sab samjhaate rah gaye par naheeN maanee baat.
Maangee  kaar  jahez meN lagee kamar meN laat.
                      Padee jootoN kee maalaa.

Kisee kanwaaree ne karee naheeN  aaj tak haaN.
Aakhir hamne dhoondh lee chh bachhon kee maaN.
                      Chalo ab kaam chalaayeN.

Kam umree ke ishq meN kyaa rakkhaa hai swaad.
Ishq hameshaa  keejiye  saath  saal  ke baad.
                     Budhaapaa khoob kategaa.

Yaa  allaah  mere  saath  meN  kaisaa  huaa mazaak.
Ab chothee peedhee meN begham maange khadee tilaaq.
                        MaiN kis johad meN koodooN.

Ishq  aur  kriket ke girgit jaise rang.
Premikaa se rooth kar vo khele bedhang.
                     Hue zero par aaut.

Mukh maahee n daant haiN naheeN pet meN aant.
Us khoosat kaa aapne liyaa thaam kyooN haath.
                  Haseenaa ham kyaa mar gaye.

Shaadee   esee   keejiye   jo  hove    bejod.
Sasur minister ho kare kharchaa kayeeN karod.
                     NaheeN to raho kanwaare.

Dr.Surendra Saini

 
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2012, 01:52:28 AM »
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Padh kar mazaa aya!! pehli baar duum daar dohe padhe!!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2012, 02:10:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Laughing hard Laughing hard.....hahahahahahahaha.....awesome awesome sk ji....bahut bahut khoob.....Usual SmileUsual Smile...mast ekdam....Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2012, 02:17:00 AM »
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Bahut khoob Dohe hai Surendra Sir
Stock khatma ho chuka hai..nahi to..
DAAD, DAAD, DAAD, DAAD, DAAD, DAAD
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par badee serious baaten kahee hai aapne in doho.n me  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2012, 02:28:36 AM »
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kaafi dumdaar hain ye dohe
kaafi seekh bhari hain ye dohe
mast
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2012, 05:32:05 AM »
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dumdaar hi nahi , bade damdaa hain dohe.
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2012, 09:33:59 AM »
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Dohe Sainiji sach-mooch likhte haiN achche
soun kar Dohe ko dhun meiN gaane lage bachche
jai ho Saini ki jai ho
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2012, 12:46:52 PM »
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Saini Sahab,

Waah waah...bahut khoob

Dheron shubhkaamnaayen.

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Qateel saheb shukriya
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Ha! Ha! ha!... Bahut khoob! Sir.
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SArfira ji shukriya
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