व्यंग्य - Hazal

by NakulG on October 30, 2014, 11:35:20 AM
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व्यंग्य  

Ek dus ka note de sasti Duka.n ke gate par,
Mil gaya mujhko bhi rashan BPL ke rate par||

Ab garibon ki suchi me wo bhi sabse shreshth hai,
Chaay kaa pyala tika sakta hai jab ki  pate par

Bach gaya signal ke sab shwetambari dooton se mai,
jab se chipkaya kamal kaa fool hai helmate par |

Jab se ghar banwa liya hai, iss bhari mehngaai main,
le nahi main jaa saka patni ko tab se date par |

Fool ab milte hain priyvar aasmani daam par,
janmdin shubhkaamna bheji hai internet par ||

Grh dashaa kaisi bhi ho, ghabraao mat yajmaan tum,
kuchh hare kaaghaz chadhaa do dakshina me plate par ||

Wo bhi kya din the haseen bachpan ke, jum hum the raees,
hum bana lete the Sone ke mehal bhi slate par ||



एक दस का नोट दे सस्ती दुकां के गेट पर,
मिल गया मुझको भी राशन BPLके रेट पर ||

अब गरीबों की सूचि में वो भी सबसे श्रेष्ठ है,
चाय का प्याला टिका सकता है जबकी पेट पर ||

बच गया सिग्नल के सब श्वेताम्बरी दूतों से मैं,
जब से चिपकाया कमल का फूल है हेलमेट पर |

जब से घर बनवा लिया है, इस भरी महंगाई में,
ले नहीं मैं जा सका पत्नी को तब से डेट पर |

फूल अब मिलते हैं प्रियवर आसमानी दाम पर,
जन्मदिन शुभकामना भेजी है इंटरनेट पर ||

ग्रह दशा कैसी भी हो, घबराओ मत यजमान तुम,
कुछ हरे काग़ज़ चढ़ा दो दक्षिणा में प्लेट पर ||

वो भी क्या दिन थे हसीं बचपन के, जम हम थे रईस,
हम बना लेते थे सोने के महल भी स्लेट पर ||
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2014, 11:39:00 AM »
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वो भी क्या दिन थे हसीं बचपन के, जम हम थे रईस,
हम बना लेते थे सोने के महल भी स्लेट पर ||[/b]
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2014, 12:01:27 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2014, 01:46:24 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2014, 07:10:35 PM »
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Bahut badhya nakul ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2014, 08:31:32 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2014, 06:05:39 AM »
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Shukriya Saini Sir


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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2014, 06:09:51 AM »
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shukriya Saru ji


वो भी क्या दिन थे हसीं बचपन के, जम हम थे रईस,
हम बना लेते थे सोने के महल भी स्लेट पर ||[/b]
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Rau due hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2014, 06:16:16 AM »
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Thanks Jeet Jainam Ji
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