samnoj
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sabhi modraters se meri guzaarish haike meri is problam ko solve kare
main ne ek shayeri banayi hai magar samajh nahi aata kaha post karu
main ne usko dekha
dekh kar dekhte rah gaya
dekhte dekhte aankho me dard ho gaya
phir main uske peeche gaya
chalte chalte chalta gaya
chal chal ke pairo me dard ho gaya
main uske ghar pahuncha
pahunch ke use pukara
pukarte hi gale me dard ho gaya
meri awaz sun ke uska bhai aaya
aate hi usne mujhe peeta
pitte hi mere peeth me drad ho gaya
phir main docter ke paas gaya
doctor ne mujhe injection lagaya
lagate hi mere haath me dard ho gaya
phir main ne ye shayeri likhi
likh kar ise padha
padhte hi mere sir me dard ho gaya
ab aap hi batao modraters is shayeri me itna dard hai kya main ise dard ke section me post karu
jaldi batana
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nishita
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2004, 03:47:21 PM » |
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tune ye likha ...maine isse padha padhte hai mere bhi sir me dard ho gaya... lol sam..isse yehi rehen de....  mera yeh kehna hai..ab baaki mods dekh kya kehte hai ... |
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samnoj
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Mashhur Shayar
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2004, 03:51:19 PM » |
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lekin isme itna dard hai
aankho ka dard pairo ka dard etc etc
to kya ise dard ke section me nahi hona chahiye
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2004, 03:54:14 PM » |
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lekin ye dard hua bhi to kinne funny tareeke se sam ab tu mera dost hai to teri baat taal nahi sakti  isliye ot kaha baaki mods se puch le ..unka opinion kya hai.. |
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samnoj
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Mashhur Shayar
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2004, 03:57:30 PM » |
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theek hai
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2004, 06:57:24 PM » |
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samnoj bhai mujhe lagta aap dard bhare nagmein hain...... isliye aap isse yahin rehne dijiye......kyon aap jahan jaayenge wahan dard hi dard hoga....isliye apne dard ek hi jagah rahne den :lol:
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«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2004, 04:01:52 AM » |
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maine yah shayari dekhi
dekhaty hi parna shuru kiya
paraty party, mere pat mai,
hans hans kar dard ho gaya!!!!!!
yah hai hansi ke dard ka bhandar
rahane de isse Funny shayari mai hi MAHARAJ!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2004, 12:22:07 PM » |
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lolllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bahut achi shayari hai samnoj ji gr8 .....but iss main dard se zyada funny lag rahi hai so..yahan pe hi rehne dein ....:lol:
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2004, 04:27:41 PM » |
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hayee re logo ....mere dost ko inna dard hua.. aur tum log isse funny keh rahe ho :cry: na sam na ... main samajh sakti hu tera dard...
kinne papad belne padte hai ek ladki ko patane
ye pooja, salma aur nishita kya jaane.. !! :lol:
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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2004, 06:19:22 PM » |
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mere dost ko itna maara nisihta aur talat ne aur yeh dekho kitna nakhda kar rahi uske har lafz mein dard bhar dee ho tum logon ne.... :cry: koi baat nahin mere dost sab theek ho jaayega :lol:
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sufyan
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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2004, 07:51:27 PM » |
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chote nawaab is dard ke section ko iodex section mein post karde
IODEX MALIYE KAAM PE CHALIYE
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2004, 07:56:17 PM » |
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Sam itna dukhi ho gaya :cry:
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2004, 09:29:17 PM » |
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peetne ke baad ro rahi ho........ kitna nakhra aata hai ladkiyon ko......bechare naak kaan aankh sabse dhuan nikal raha hai...mere dost ko itna maara in jaalim ladkiyon ne :cry:
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: November 12, 2004, 10:38:54 PM » |
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Wo dukhi ho gaya hai
tumhari commentary se :-(
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«Reply #14 on: November 13, 2004, 12:12:15 PM » |
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commentry nahi hai yye to XPLAIN kar riya hey
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