धूप छाँव*********************************ALFAAZ

by alfaaz on April 24, 2015, 09:25:56 AM
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फर्श पे जो पडा हैं तुकडो में
वो जाहिल जाने तो सही,
पत्थरों से टकराने का अंजाम
वो दिल जाने तो सही.

कायदे बदल चुके हैं जमाने के
वो तपदील जाने तो सही,
हत्यार नये आये हैं बाजार में
वो कातील जाने तो सही.

कौन कौन डुबा उन आंखों में
वो झील जाने तो सही
कितने आये किनारे तक
वो साहिल जाने तो सही.

उसके गालों पे जो छपा था
वो घायल जाने तो सही
धुप छाँव कर  गया हलाल
वो तील जाने तो सही
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2015, 07:29:13 PM »
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Alfaaz Sahaab Aadaab .. !

Waah janab waah bahut khoob badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Khoob ahsaas O khyaal aur umdaa Andaaz e bayaaN...

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhte rahiye.. Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2015, 07:33:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

waah waah wah waah kyaa kehne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2015, 09:09:21 PM »
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bahut sundar waahhhhhhhhhhh!
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2015, 10:07:14 AM »
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behad khubsurat waaaaaaaaahhhhhh
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