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कभी रूठ जाते हैं तो कभी पल में मुस्कराते हैं,
कैसे महबूब हैं पल पल में रंग दिखाते हैं.


जब से गए हैं वो दुश्मन की गली में,
हर किसी को रोककर मेरे घर का पता बताते हैं.

उनका मिजाज है बदलते मौसमों की तरह,
कभी बहुत ठन्डे तो कभी बहुत गर्म नज़र आते हैं..

उनके बदलते तेबर हैं मौसमी बरसात की तरह,
पल में कभी तोला तो कभी माशा नज़र आते हैं.

ये उसकी नाराज़गी से तू इतना दुखी क्यूं है " बेताब".
वो तो पल में हंसाते हैं और पल में रुला जाते हैं.


          Composed by " D K Saxena " BetaaB".
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2013, 04:38:14 PM »
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 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
wah,wah,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah saxena ji,bahut khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2013, 05:05:18 PM »
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bohut khub janab  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2013, 05:09:12 PM »
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कभी रूठ जाते हैं तो कभी पल में मुस्कराते हैं,
कैसे महबूब हैं पल पल में रंग दिखाते हैं.


जब से गए हैं वो दुश्मन की गली में,
हर किसी को रोककर मेरे घर का पता बताते हैं.

उनका मिजाज है बदलते मौसमों की तरह,
कभी बहुत ठन्डे तो कभी बहुत गर्म नज़र आते हैं..

उनके बदलते तेबर हैं मौसमी बरसात की तरह,
पल में कभी तोला तो कभी माशा नज़र आते हैं.

ये उसकी नाराज़गी से तू इतना दुखी क्यूं है " बेताब".
वो तो पल में हंसाते हैं और पल में रुला जाते हैं.


          Composed by " D K Saxena " BetaaB".

वाह-वाह,बहुत खूब जनाब
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2013, 07:37:53 PM »
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कभी रूठ जाते हैं तो कभी पल में मुस्कराते हैं,
कैसे महबूब हैं पल पल में रंग दिखाते हैं.


जब से गए हैं वो दुश्मन की गली में,
हर किसी को रोककर मेरे घर का पता बताते हैं.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
उनका मिजाज है बदलते मौसमों की तरह,
कभी बहुत ठन्डे तो कभी बहुत गर्म नज़र आते हैं..
 Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
उनके बदलते तेबर हैं मौसमी बरसात की तरह,
पल में कभी तोला तो कभी माशा नज़र आते हैं.

ये उसकी नाराज़गी से तू इतना दुखी क्यूं है " बेताब".
वो तो पल में हंसाते हैं और पल में रुला जाते हैं.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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very nice composition..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2013, 08:18:09 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob saxenaji. dheron daad.
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waah waah...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2013, 12:16:56 AM »
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 nice, saxena ji.
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hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
wah,wah,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah saxena ji,bahut khoob.
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bohut khub janab  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Bohat Khoob. . .happy9  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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वाह-वाह,बहुत खूब जनाब
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very nice composition..happy9
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