पुतले सजेगे गलियो में बाज़ार न बिकेगा

by anil kumar aksh on February 08, 2010, 12:27:23 PM
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पुतले सजेगे गलियो में बाज़ार न बिकेगा ।
सिक्को के लिए अपना एतबार न बिकेगा ॥
तुम कुछ भी कहो दोस्तों की बात भी सुनो ।
इस दोस्ती के बदले वो प्यार न बिकेगा ॥
हमको है अपना ये घर दोनों जहाँ से प्यारा ।
पर घर के लिए उसका संसार न बिकेगा ॥
दिलवर रहो दिलो में वो ही जगह है अच्छी।
बिकने दो मुझे पर मेरा अधिकार न बिकेगा ॥
मतलब परस्त लोगों से हो दूर है अच्छा ।
कुरबानियो का कोई भी मजार न बिकेगा ॥
गर तुमने आज मुझको रुसवां किया यहाँ पर ।
फिर देखना अब कोई तलबगार न बिकेगा ॥
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2010, 02:51:08 PM »
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very nice anil ji.......
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 02:57:39 PM »
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Achhi kavita likhi hai Aksh Ji. Matraon ki wajah se padhne mein diqqat hui. Hindi Unicode mein maloom nahi kyon baad mein matra badal jaati hai. Baharhal kavita bahut achhi lagi.
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 04:01:51 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Anil Ji Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 10:05:38 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoobsurat creation hai Anil ji
keep Writing  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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