क्यूँ हर दिल आज पत्थर

by Akash Basudev on May 23, 2015, 01:15:50 AM
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पिछली बारिश में एक ग़रीब किसान का मकान ढ़ेह गया
अपना सब कुछ वो लूटा बैठा खाली ईमान रह गया

ख़ुदग़र्ज़ अमीरों ने छीन ली उसकी सूखी रोटी भी
मुस्कतकबिल उसका टूटे काँच सा,अनसुना हर एक पैगाम रह गया

सियासतदारों ने जमकर खेली उसकी मौत की राजनीति
उसकी मौत का तमाशा देखो, हर शहर में आम हो गया

अपने पीछे  छोड गया वो ,कुछ और ज़िंदा लाशों को भी
क्यूँ हर दिल आज पत्थर 'आकाश',इंसान फरेबी ,बेईमान हो गया
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 03:40:46 AM »
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उसकी मौत का तमाशा देखो, हर शहर में आम हो गया
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ye likhte ye likhte ho gaya ki jaan boozh ke likha gaya par mujhe is "AAM" Ka tanz bahut pasand aaya.
very good n keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2015, 05:39:48 AM »
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bahut sunder waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2015, 05:47:20 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 06:31:13 AM »
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bahut khub akashji....
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2015, 08:07:33 AM »
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पिछली बारिश में एक ग़रीब किसान का मकान ढ़ेह गया
अपना सब कुछ वो लूटा बैठा खाली ईमान रह गया

ख़ुदग़र्ज़ अमीरों ने छीन ली उसकी सूखी रोटी भी
मुस्कतकबिल उसका टूटे काँच सा,अनसुना हर एक पैगाम रह गया

सियासतदारों ने जमकर खेली उसकी मौत की राजनीति
उसकी मौत का तमाशा देखो, हर शहर में आम हो गया

अपने पीछे  छोड गया वो ,कुछ और ज़िंदा लाशों को भी
क्यूँ हर दिल आज पत्थर 'आकाश',इंसान फरेबी ,बेईमान हो गया


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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2015, 08:16:27 AM »
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bohat bohat umda peshkash akash bhai dherooooo daaaadddd
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2015, 09:22:05 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2015, 07:05:14 PM »
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waah waah waah Akash ji, bahut gehri baatein likh gaye hain aap, aur andaaz-e-bayaani bhi khoob rahi, padh ke bahut achchaa lagaa humein....ek RAU aapke naam.... !!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2015, 08:14:57 PM »
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waah waah waah Basudev Jee bahut hee umdah likhaa hai aapne, dheron daad.
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2015, 09:13:29 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya aap sabhi ka ......Thanks Hriday bhai for rau Usual Smile
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