~~*Baabul... A last (lost) dream of a Girl*~~ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on November 27, 2006, 01:52:53 PM
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«Reply #60 on: December 21, 2006, 12:45:47 PM »
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Another Try from my side... :[/b]


मेरा बाबुल तो भोला है, अम्मा इसको समझा देना,
मेरा देश पराया है… मेरा नीड पराया है…

कहानी जैसे एक पुरानी सी, मुझे भूल जाना बाबा,
यह पानी मैं ही हूँ, जो आँखों से बहाया है…

भैया मेरा हाथ पकड़, मेरा पाँव ना जाए फिसल…
मेरे कदम कदम ने देखो, आज धरती को रुलाया है…

मुझे दे दिया देश पराए, तेरा मन क्यों घबराए…
हर हाल मे खुश रहना, तूने मुझको सिखाया है…

तेरी यादें साथ मे है, तेरी बातें साथ मे है…
मेरी साँस साँस मे बाबुल, तेरा प्यार समाया है…

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Mera baabul toh bhola hai, Amma isko samjha dena,
Mera Desh Parayaa hai… Mera Need Parayaa hai…

Kahaani jaise ek poorani si, Mujhey bhool jaana Baba,
Yeh paani main he hoon, Jo Aankhon se bahaaya hai…

Bhaiya mera haath pakad, Mera paanv naa jaaye phisal…
Mere kadam kadam ney dekho, Aaj Dhartii ko rulaaya hai…

Mujhe de diya desh paraye, Tera Mann kyon ghabraaye…
Har haal mey khush rehnaa, Tuney mujhko sikhaaya hai…

Teri yaadein saath mey hai, Teri baatein saath mey hai…
Meri saans saans mey baabul, Tera Pyaar samaaya hai…
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Tosha
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«Reply #61 on: December 21, 2006, 03:19:26 PM »
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wah bahut khoob likha hai sabhi ne
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Shikha12
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«Reply #62 on: December 21, 2006, 07:14:16 PM »
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Thanks again Tosha...
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dolly
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«Reply #63 on: March 31, 2007, 06:45:11 PM »
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NIICE SHAYARI DIIII..................i havnt read...much of urs................badiya hai...k pehle hi inni gud gud shayari padne ko mil gayi
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«Reply #64 on: April 02, 2007, 02:10:16 PM »
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Wow. Maan Gaye Sweetheart .. appne jaisa kaha tha.. yea bikul Waisa hai... Mindblowing.... Kafi emotional hai.....
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«Reply #65 on: April 02, 2007, 11:21:53 PM »
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Thanks a lot Dolly and Divya... for liking it... and so nice words... Usual Smile
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«Reply #66 on: March 08, 2008, 02:49:59 AM »
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bahut khooob shikhaji...bahut kam poetries aise hote hai jo dil mein utar aate hai..yeh poetry unme se ek hai...sach mein one of the most beautiful poetry.. Applause

pooja and anjani si aap dono ne bhi bahut khooob likha..har ek shabd dil se likha gaya hai aap sabse.. Applause
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«Reply #67 on: March 08, 2008, 03:06:49 AM »
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shukaria khwaish ji!! wah kaya post nikal kar laaye hai app!!! apki kavita ka intzaar rahega!!
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«Reply #68 on: March 08, 2008, 03:08:24 AM »
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Quote from: Shikha12 on December 21, 2006, 12:45:47 PM
Another Try from my side... :[/b]



Mera baabul toh bhola hai, Amma isko samjha dena,
Mera Desh Parayaa hai… Mera Need Parayaa hai…

Kahaani jaise ek poorani si, Mujhey bhool jaana Baba,
Yeh paani main he hoon, Jo Aankhon sey bahaaya hai…[/b]

Bhaiya mera haath pakad, Mera paanv naa jaaye phisal…
Mere kadam kadam ney dekho, Aaj Dhartii ko rulaaya hai…[/b]

Mujhe de diya desh paraye, Tera Mann kyon ghabraaye…
Har haal mey khush rehnaa, Tuney mujhko sikhaaya hai…

Teri yaadein saath mey hai, Teri baatein saath mey hai…
Meri saans saans mey baabul, Tera Pyaar samaaya hai…
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How did i miss it !!

Each word is a perfection in itself.....its really beautiful...beyond praise Applause
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«Reply #69 on: March 08, 2008, 03:12:59 AM »
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Read all other 4 pages too Talat... yah sari thread mai ek se bad kar ek posts likhi hui hai Usual Smile Khwaish ji bahoot hi achi post ko laker ayye hai!!!
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«Reply #70 on: March 08, 2008, 03:15:16 AM »
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Bilkul Sach Pooja...maine pehle ki saari parhi hain..parh ke aankhain bheeg jaati hain. Is thread main aur posts ka intezar rahega (I ll also try).
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«Reply #71 on: March 08, 2008, 04:27:41 PM »
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Thanks Khwaish for bringing this dying post back to life...
This thread really holds a special place in my heart...

Thanks Pooja di and Talat... I m really speachless.. yeah, I was actually missing my own shayari post here since long time..
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«Reply #72 on: March 09, 2008, 07:34:29 AM »
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Quote from: Shikha12 on December 21, 2006, 12:45:47 PM
Another Try from my side... :[/b]



Mera baabul toh bhola hai, Amma isko samjha dena,
Mera Desh Parayaa hai… Mera Need Parayaa hai…

Kahaani jaise ek poorani si, Mujhey bhool jaana Baba,
Yeh paani main he hoon, Jo Aankhon sey bahaaya hai…[/b]

Bhaiya mera haath pakad, Mera paanv naa jaaye phisal…
Mere kadam kadam ney dekho, Aaj Dhartii ko rulaaya hai…[/b]

Mujhe de diya desh paraye, Tera Mann kyon ghabraaye…
Har haal mey khush rehnaa, Tuney mujhko sikhaaya hai…

Teri yaadein saath mey hai, Teri baatein saath mey hai…
Meri saans saans mey baabul, Tera Pyaar samaaya hai…
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wow superb didi... bahut umda likha hai aapne
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«Reply #73 on: March 12, 2008, 10:28:29 AM »
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Thanks a lot Roja... icon_smile
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«Reply #74 on: March 12, 2008, 11:08:59 AM »
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Really nice shikha..Usual Smile
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