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Author Topic: ~~*Baabul... A last (lost) dream of a Girl*~~  (Read 2129 times)
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« on: November 27, 2006, 03:22:53 AM »
Baabul Ek baar Phir Sey....

Chhalke hai aankhein, Tarse hai mann yeh,
Ruki hui hai dhadkan, Ruki Ruki saansein…
Dagmagaa rahii hoon main phir chalte chalte,
Mujhe thaamaa tha mere bachpan mey jaisey,
Gudiaa ko apni apna haath phir thamaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh  aangan ka jhoola kya ab bhi pada hai,
Woh Tulsii ka paudha kya ab bhi khada hai…
Woh satrangii chhatrii, woh baarish ka mausam,
Kaagaz ki kashtii phir mere liye ek bana dey...
Ek baar mujhko phir sey woh bachpan lauta dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh gudiya ki kangghee, woh khel khiloney,
Woh mera takiyaa aur woh mere bichhoney…
Meri kuch kitaabein thii, kuch adhoore sapne,
Sapne woh mujhko ek baar phir sey lauta dey…
Yaa saamaan mera Ganga mey bahaa dey...
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Kaise jigar ke tukde ko kar diya tuney paraaya,
Doli ke waqt tuney jab kalejey se lagayaa,
Maine sunaa thaa baabul tera dil ro raha tha,
Kaise rotey dil ko tuney phir thaa manaayaa…
Baabul waise he dil ko ek baar phir tu mana ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Lagi thhartharaane jab lau zindagi ki,
Maine lakh tujhko diye thhe ishaare,
Maa ko bheji thi khat mey ek kali murjhaayi,
Bheji naa raakhi, chodh di bhai ki sooni kalaai…
Magar betii tumhari ho chuki thii parayii,
Shayad naseeb apna samjhaa naa paayii,
Aakhiri baar meri aaj tum phir kar do vidaaii…
Lekin vidaaii se pehle apni nazar mey basaa ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Mujhey khaakh kar ney ko chala thaa jab zamaana…
Kyon roye thhe tum bhi, mujhey yeh bataana,
Aankhon mey ab naa aansoo phir sey laanaa…
Bhatakti hai ruuh meri, tere pyaar ko phir sey...
Maathhey pey haat rakh kar issey ab sulaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…[/b]
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« Reply #1 on: November 27, 2006, 04:27:47 AM »
Shikha

Aaj bahut arse ke baad kuch bahut emotional padhne ko mila  :cry:

One can feel the emotions of a daughter in each and every word.

Very well expressed !

Shabash =D>

Keep it up !

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« Reply #2 on: November 28, 2006, 01:34:01 PM »
Wakayi bahut khoob likha hai Shikha.... No words to praise....  Usual Smile
Abhi tak tumney jitna bhi likha hai.... Mujhey ye sabse achha laga..
Mujhey to tareef karna waisey bhi nahi aata.... but still it's one of the best poems I ever read on Yoindia.... Usual Smile
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« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2006, 07:23:28 AM »
I dont have words.....It just brought tears to my eyes !!
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« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2006, 08:31:18 AM »
bahut khoob aapne bahut hi achcha likha hai

bahut dino baad kuch is tarah ka padne ko mila jo kuch ehsas jagata hai .


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« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2006, 08:32:28 AM »
sikha kosis karoonga ki iska jawab de saku wese ladka hoon phir bhi ek ladki ke ehsas tak jane ki kosis karoonga
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« Reply #6 on: November 29, 2006, 09:38:09 AM »
Thanks a lot Rajbir ji, Jagdish, Talat, Mohsin ji.... for all the appreciation...


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sikha kosis karoonga ki iska jawab de saku wese ladka hoon phir bhi ek ladki ke ehsas tak jane ki kosis karoonga



Mohsin ji... Aapke kalaam ka intezaar rahega...

And Talat... I was expecting something from your side also...
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« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2006, 10:01:37 AM »
sad5  sad5
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ts Very Easy ta Bring Tears In some1s Eyes..........But its equally difficult to bring a SMILE on a sad face........!!!!!!

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« Reply #8 on: November 29, 2006, 10:31:22 AM »
Shikha, i ll write here soon !! sad5 Usual Smile
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« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2006, 11:53:17 AM »
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Shikha, i ll write here soon !! sad5 Usual Smile

 Puzzled ! Jaldi likhna...besabri se intezaar rahega  :evil:
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« Reply #10 on: November 29, 2006, 05:33:28 PM »
shikha didi i dont know what to say!!!!
appne kuch kehne ke liye chora he nahi
itssss flawlessssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

seriously this is propably the best piece of art that i have read............
too goodddddd
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« Reply #11 on: November 29, 2006, 05:46:03 PM »
sansein phirse aikh baar tham gayi
ankhoin mein ansu chalak gaye
maine socha tha doorh kabhi na jaonghi
rahoongi tere paas mein,,,,
kheloingi appke anghaan mein...
soya karoonghi appki jholi mein...
lauta de woh sapna mera babul
aikh baar phir se mujhe bhula le

lagha le apne seene se mujhe phir se
suna de woh lori aur sula de mujhe phir se
tarse hain yeh khaan teri pukar se...
hasa de mujhe aaj phir se
woh muskan lauta de mujhe babul
apna seene se lagha le mujhe appne paas bhula le

khila do woh nawala phir se appne haath se
keh do woh pyar ki do baatein mujhe se
pohnch do aaj yeh ansu meri ankhoin se
mujhe phir se apna bana lo babulll
mujhe apne paas bhula le!!!!!!!! :D
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« Reply #12 on: November 29, 2006, 08:12:49 PM »
Anjani meri behna

Bahut he pyara jawab diya hai tumne ! =D>

Shikha has definitely written a masterpiece !

The appreciation by various members will encourage her to write even more beautiful poems :D

I wish i could have also contributed something sad5
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« Reply #13 on: November 30, 2006, 04:54:52 AM »
bahut bahut accha likha hai..shikha tumne ..pad ke aankhe nam ho gayi

anjani too good....

jaldi hi main bhi milti hoon aapse yahi per  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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« Reply #14 on: November 30, 2006, 08:27:27 AM »
Very good Anjaani !!!

Shikha ne sach main itna achcha likha hai ki us ke jaisa likhne ke liye words hi nahin hain....Seems i have lost the knack of writing !! sad5
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