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« Reply #15 on: November 30, 2006, 09:39:31 AM »

bahoot hi acha likha hai shikha... mai kai baar pada aor her baar kuch dil mai attak kar rah gaya aor ankh bhar aai.... bahoot hi dil se bahoot hi gahra likha hai....

kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu.....

Babul ke naam se hi ankhein bhar aaye
Na jaane kaya kaya pal yaad karaye
Jab bhi kabhi koi ardchan man mai aye
Ek najar dekha babul ko, aor sab door ho jaaye

Bachpan ka dular, her pal yaad aye
Badati umar ke sath gahra wo payar ab hai rulaye
Kabhi mana kabhi zid ki, her baat babul se kaise manwaye
Beet chukka hai jo waqat, babul bata kaise wo wapis laaye

Dil teri ki tu hi jaane, Ma ban kar bhi samjh na ayya
Baap beti ka hai jo Rishta, wo sirf babul hi samjh paya
Chup tu dekhain, chup main dekhu, bin kahe sab samjh teri ayya
Parda hua yah kaise hum main, Ma bin baat ajj kayun na tu kar paya

Ankhein bole, hath sir per hai dole, juban se na kuch kah paya
Teri beti hu jaan gai sab, jo ajj na mujse tu kah paya
Jis ki mitti se bani main, jis per kheili din raat
Ajj bas uska kanpta hath ka hi rah gaya mere sung saya……..


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« Reply #16 on: November 30, 2006, 10:14:06 AM »

PK...

Kya hua... sad5

Talat... : I am still waiting your reply... Good Poets could never lost the knack of writing... Thanks once again.. But I m really embarassed now.. I m not so good...

Rajbir Ji... : Ek baar phir se shukriya... I will try my best to fulfill the expectations... and I dont think this is a Masterpiece...

Anjani... : You have written lovely... Bahut achha laga tumhara likha hua padh kar... Thanks a lot for so much appreciation...

Ranju di... : Bahut wait karwaai aapne... aur abhi aur karne ko keh kar Gayab ho gaye... But, desperately waiting your post here... Thanks a lot di...

Pooja di... : Aapne bhi bahut wait karwaai... But... Really... You are too good as always... Bahut pyaara likha hai aapne bhi... Thanks a lot di....

Thanks once again... All... For all the Appreciation and Encouragement...

Will try to Post something in this thread very soon...


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« Reply #17 on: November 30, 2006, 11:29:21 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

[you]Baabul Ek baar Phir Sey....[/you]

Chhalke hai aankhein, Tarse hai mann yeh,
Ruki hui hai dhadkan, Ruki Ruki saansein…
Dagmagaa rahii hoon main phir chalte chalte,
Mujhe thaamaa tha mere bachpan mey jaisey,
Gudiaa ko apni apna haath phir thamaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh aangan ka jhoola kya ab bhi pada hai,
Woh Tulsii ka paudha kya ab bhi khada hai…
Woh satrangii chhatrii, woh baarish ka mausam,
Kaagaz ki kashtii phir mere liye ek bana dey...
Ek baar mujhko phir sey woh bachpan lauta dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh gudiya ki kangghee, woh khel khiloney,
Woh mera takiyaa aur woh mere bichhoney…
Meri kuch kitaabein thii, kuch adhoore sapne,
Sapne woh mujhko ek baar phir sey lauta dey…
Yaa saamaan mera Ganga mey bahaa dey...
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Kaise jigar ke tukde ko kar diya tuney paraaya,
Doli ke waqt tuney jab kalejey se lagayaa,
Maine sunaa thaa baabul tera dil ro raha tha,
Kaise rotey dil ko tuney phir thaa manaayaa…
Baabul waise he dil ko ek baar phir tu mana ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Lagi thhartharaane jab lau zindagi ki,
Maine lakh tujhko diye thhe ishaare,
Maa ko bheji thi khat mey ek kali murjhaayi,
Bheji naa raakhi, chodh di bhai ki sooni kalaai…
Magar betii tumhari ho chuki thii parayii,
Shayad naseeb apna samjhaa naa paayii,
Aakhiri baar meri aaj tum phir kar do vidaaii…
Lekin vidaaii se pehle apni nazar mey basaa ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Mujhey khaakh kar ney ko chala thaa jab zamaana…
Kyon roye thhe tum bhi, mujhey yeh bataana,
Aankhon mey ab naa aansoo phir sey laanaa…
Bhatakti hai ruuh meri, tere pyaar ko phir sey...
Maathhey pey haat rakh kar issey ab sulaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Marvalous Shikha.....Its Just amazing....and Anjani or Pooja ji u both Just did a Blast......!!!!!!

Now in this i m trying to express a Father's feeling......!!!!!!!

Door khada tha main.....
Jab tu le rahi thi Vidai......

Sisak raha tha Dil mera......
Kyu yeh Judai ki Ghadi aayi......

Hum sab hai sirf Naseeb ke Khilone.....
Aa lag jaa tu seene se mujhe aur na de tu rone......

Bachpan me tha jise maine Gauod me khilaya.....
Phir Beech raah me kisi Ajnabi ko uska haath thamaya......

Kaise bataon tujhe Kaleje ka tukda kabhi hota nahi Paraya......
Maine toh bas Naseeb ka Samaan hai use lautaya......

Aaonga mein phir ek Din tujhe Khone......
Kush rahe tu aur pighalti rahein tere aangan me woh Oos ki boonde.........!!!!!!!!!!!!


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« Reply #18 on: November 30, 2006, 12:40:35 PM »

Gaurav

Kya kya emotions tum log express kar jaate ho :cry: :cry: :cry:

Yahan par har ek ne bahut he dil se likha hai....

God bless you all !

Rajbir


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« Reply #19 on: November 30, 2006, 06:58:36 PM »

haath pakar kar chalna sikhaya tha
aaj zindagi mein chalna sikha dey

khilone se tujhne ne hai mera maan behlaya
aaj khilona banke naseeb se ladhna sikha dey

lori sunakar tumne sulaya tha
aaj woh chann ki neend lauta dey

padh likha ke jo mujhe apne pairon pe khara kiya
aaj usse jazbe se maan mera beh la dey

khilaya karte the jo pyar se nawala
aaj pyar ki bhokh tu mitha dey

dil ki dhadkhan jisse kaha karte the
aaj usse dhakhan ko khud mein basa ley

eeh baabul sunle aaj pukar meri....
aur mujhe apne paas bhula ley!!!!!!!!

pooja didi and BS too gooooodddd!!!!!!!!!!!
and thnk u everyone 4 appreciating :D


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« Reply #20 on: December 01, 2006, 01:12:09 AM »

wah wah ,,bahut khoob gauarv and anjani ........too nice

babul tere agane ki main hoon sonchiriya
chehek lehek ke tere angan mein chehchaati hoon

mehekte hui hoon koi phoolo ki daal main babaul
tere angana mein khushboo bikher jaati hoon

hai mere dam se tere ghar mein ujiyara
yun sitaaro si mein jagmagaati hoon

maine dekhi hai teri aankho mein apne liye ek chamak
tere dil mein teri hi dharakn ban ke samaati hoon

fir kaahe diyo mujhe babul tu desh paraaye
kyu tere liye main is qader begaani si ho jaati hoon

mujhe bhi rakho babul sang apne jaise bhaiya
kyu main teri ho ke bhi dhan paryaa kehlaati hoon !!


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« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2006, 05:52:21 AM »

Gaurav, Pooja, Anjaani and Ranju.....bohot khoob !!!


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« Reply #22 on: December 02, 2006, 12:24:36 AM »

Mujhe her khusi ka intzaar tab hota hai ...............
Jab kabhi mera babul mujh se door hota hai .................
jab bhi so jati hoon main aksar main din main ...........
Na jane kyon babul ka chehra samne hota hai .............

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai unki wo chahat...........
mere muskurane per unke muskurane ki adat ..............
Wo lamhe jab unke khando main bethi thi main.........
khando pe bithaker thakne ki harkat ...........

Jab uthi meri doli to gale se lagaya...........
Dard to tha usko magar muskuraya...........
jab bhi main kahti thi na jaungi door tumse ........
to aksar mera sir unke kandhe per hota hai ..........
dil bada bechain hota hai ...............
jab babul humse door hota hai .............


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« Reply #23 on: December 02, 2006, 04:07:28 AM »

Mohsin bhai ne kuch din pehle kaha tha....

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sikha kosis karoonga ki iska jawab de saku wese ladka hoon phir bhi ek ladki ke ehsas tak jane ki kosis karoonga

Aur aaj unhone yeh kamaal kar dikhaya =D>
Bahut he achcha laga padh kar :cry:
Thanks for sharing your emotions with us !

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Pooja, Gaurav, Ranju, Anjani

You don't need to be told always that you are toooooooooo good :wink: :D


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« Reply #24 on: December 02, 2006, 07:32:15 AM »

Gaurav, Anjani, Ranju Di, Mohsin Ji.... Bahut achha laga aap sab ko padh kar...
Sab ek se badh kar ek...

Very nice all of You... =D> =D>
and Thanks a lot... I am really short of words now... sad5


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« Reply #25 on: December 04, 2006, 12:50:03 AM »

I dont know what to say about this thread.... in my dreams,there is a liitle princess whom i always wish to be my daughter.. i m still bachelor ,i dont know what feelings does a father have for his daughter... Shikha ji ,You had wriiten a masterpiece n rest of you yoindians, i really aapreciate your contributions,,,

This one is for my dream daughter.......

tere naanhe paeron ke nishan,
dil se aapne kaise main mitta du
khilaya hai tujhe aapne angaan mein
duniya dikhai hai aapne khandhon par
kaise main woh har pal bhula do.........
Meri gudiya kaise tujhe bhula do...........

Vidha kiya tha tujhe kaleje pathar rakh ke
Hath thamaya tera,dil ka apne khoon karke
chali thi jab doli teri,tere aapne Ghar se
roya tha main bahoot tujhse bichard ke
kaise main woh har pal bhula do.........
Meri gudiya kaise tujhe bhula do...........

Sukhi rahe tu aapne jeevan mein
Mann mein bas yehi ek chinta thi
Ujwal bhawishey ban jaye tera
Dil ki bas yehi akhri chah thi
kaise main yeh armaan bhula do..........
Meri gudiya kaise tujhe bhula do...........

yeh beReham sansar ki reet bani hai
har Babul ki Gudiya,Sasural hi chali hai
khud ko akela na samjhna tu wahan lekin
tera Babul ,har WaQt tere liye hi hai
kaise main tujhse hath chuda lu.........
Meri gudiya kaise tujhe bhula do...........


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« Reply #26 on: December 04, 2006, 03:48:50 AM »

Jeet

The feelings that you have expressed for your dream daughter are exactly the same for every father.

I feel exactly the same, the way you have expressed your feelings for your dream daughter....because I have a real one myself.

Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Trust me you will feel the same feelings when you will have your gudiya one day.

God bless !


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« Reply #27 on: December 04, 2006, 04:58:42 AM »

Thanks a Lot Jeet....

And a Marvellous Piece of work from your side...
Lovely feelings and very beautifully expressed.... =D> =D> =D>


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« Reply #28 on: December 04, 2006, 07:11:55 AM »

thanks so much rajbir brother n shikha ji


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« Reply #29 on: December 04, 2006, 09:14:33 AM »

Very Nice Mohsin...and Jeet...!! Good Work Indeed !!


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