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Author Topic: ~~*Baabul... A last (lost) dream of a Girl*~~  (Read 2081 times)
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« Reply #75 on: March 27, 2008, 02:32:29 AM »
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Mera baabul toh bhola hai, Amma isko samjha dena,
Mera Desh Parayaa hai… Mera Need Parayaa hai…

Kahaani jaise ek poorani si, Mujhey bhool jaana Baba,
Yeh paani main he hoon, Jo Aankhon sey bahaaya hai…[/b]

Bhaiya mera haath pakad, Mera paanv naa jaaye phisal…
Mere kadam kadam ney dekho, Aaj Dhartii ko rulaaya hai…[/b]

Mujhe de diya desh paraye, Tera Mann kyon ghabraaye…
Har haal mey khush rehnaa, Tuney mujhko sikhaaya hai…

Teri yaadein saath mey hai, Teri baatein saath mey hai…
Meri saans saans mey baabul, Tera Pyaar samaaya hai…

How lovely you chalked out love in a different way Shikha.....This is a beautiful and emotional take on the prompt. ....Thanks for enlarging your subject and best wishes kuthch ahsaas jab jaagte haiN toh apne aap mala ban kagaz per utar jaate haiN merii jaanib se sirf dilii-mubaarak-baad haazir haiN....hamarii janib se daad qubool farmaayeiN...aour hameiN yakiin hai ki aise hi pasandiidaah tehreereiN  our  aise hi khoob-soorat iNtekhaab ko aap aaiNda bhii hamaare saath shirkat kartii raheiN gii.. ...khush raheiN....Harash
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« Reply #76 on: March 27, 2008, 07:41:12 AM »
I am really honored..  notworthy

Thanks a lot HoneyRose and Harsh... Your compliments are a source of great Motivation for me...  wave 

Thankyou ! so much...
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« Reply #77 on: March 28, 2008, 11:52:23 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 21, 2006, 02:15:47 AM
Another Try from my side... :[/b]



Mera baabul toh bhola hai, Amma isko samjha dena,
Mera Desh Parayaa hai… Mera Need Parayaa hai…

Kahaani jaise ek poorani si, Mujhey bhool jaana Baba,
Yeh paani main he hoon, Jo Aankhon sey bahaaya hai…[/b]

Bhaiya mera haath pakad, Mera paanv naa jaaye phisal…
Mere kadam kadam ney dekho, Aaj Dhartii ko rulaaya hai…[/b]

Mujhe de diya desh paraye, Tera Mann kyon ghabraaye…
Har haal mey khush rehnaa, Tuney mujhko sikhaaya hai…

Teri yaadein saath mey hai, Teri baatein saath mey hai…
Meri saans saans mey baabul, Tera Pyaar samaaya hai…
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It is really very good to read shikha di...
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« Reply #78 on: May 10, 2008, 12:59:28 AM »
ab kya kahoon mai ye sab padane ke baad mai ladka hone ke bawzood apane aansu nahi rok paya.......
really great work SHIKHA ji...........
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« Reply #79 on: May 10, 2008, 01:17:02 AM »
Quote from: Roja on March 28, 2008, 11:52:23 AM
It is really very good to read shikha di...


Thanks Roja...
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« Reply #80 on: May 10, 2008, 01:18:49 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on May 10, 2008, 12:59:28 AM
ab kya kahoon mai ye sab padane ke baad mai ladka hone ke bawzood apane aansu nahi rok paya.......
really great work SHIKHA ji...........

Aaj mujhe bhi rona aaya...

Neways... Thanks "Bekarar Ji" for reading and appreciating my work..
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