~~*Baabul... A last (lost) dream of a Girl*~~ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on November 27, 2006, 01:52:53 PM
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«Reply #45 on: December 16, 2006, 10:00:33 PM »
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Yaad hai mujhey ab bhi, Raat woh kayamat waali,
Bhojhil mann sey tuney, mujhey itnaa batayaa tha…
Paraya tera baabul hua… Paraya yeh aangan hua,
Rotti apni aankhon ko, Mujhsey lakh chuppaya tha…

Maine dekha tha Baabul, woh bheega mann tera…
Gumsum apni ladlii ko, jab doli mey bithaaya tha…
Mere sang sang chala thaa tu, bahut door galiyare tak,
Haule sey phir mujhsey apnaa haath chhudaya tha…

Naa jaane kyon ab bhi terii galiyaan yaad aati hai,
Jaane kyon har dhadkan meri tujhko he bulaati hai…
Kaise karun khaamosh khud apni dhadkan ko batao,
Mujhko bulaa lo apne paas, yaa mujhse milne tum aao…

Main jeeti hoon yaadon mey teri par ek baat rulaati hai, sad5
Reh reh kar mujhko duniyaa ki bus yeh reet sataatii hai..
Duniya aisa kehti hai kyon, Kyon sabko aisa sikhaati hai…
Beti doli mey nikle ghar sey, Toh wapas arthii pe aati hai… sad5 sad5
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Wow.... It's so touching.... Just Superb.... Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #46 on: December 16, 2006, 11:09:54 PM »
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Awww thats lovely too......... sad5 .
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«Reply #47 on: December 16, 2006, 11:23:27 PM »
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wow ya ... agar ristrictions na hoti to choose only poems form love section ... i would have sellected thins very opem of yours.!!
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«Reply #48 on: December 16, 2006, 11:52:59 PM »
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shikha didi just marvelous.......!!!!!
vry vry niceeee
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Tosha
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«Reply #49 on: December 17, 2006, 12:01:07 AM »
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u'v written good too ... amazing keep it up ok chuttki!!
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anjani_si
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«Reply #50 on: December 17, 2006, 12:03:36 AM »
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maine yahan kahan likha?Huh?
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«Reply #51 on: December 17, 2006, 12:09:57 AM »
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sansein phirse aikh baar tham gayi
ankhoin mein ansu chalak gaye
maine socha tha doorh kabhi na jaonghi
rahoongi tere paas mein,,,,
kheloingi appke anghaan mein...
soya karoonghi appki jholi mein...
lauta de woh sapna mera babul
aikh baar phir se mujhe bhula le

lagha le apne seene se mujhe phir se
suna de woh lori aur sula de mujhe phir se
tarse hain yeh khaan teri pukar se...
hasa de mujhe aaj phir se
woh muskan lauta de mujhe babul
apna seene se lagha le mujhe appne paas bhula le

khila do woh nawala phir se appne haath se
keh do woh pyar ki do baatein mujhe se
pohnch do aaj yeh ansu meri ankhoin se
mujhe phir se apna bana lo babulll
mujhe apne paas bhula le!!!!!!!! :D


yeh likha hai :twisted:
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«Reply #52 on: December 17, 2006, 12:12:57 AM »
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sansein phirse aikh baar tham gayi
ankhoin mein ansu chalak gaye
maine socha tha doorh kabhi na jaonghi
rahoongi tere paas mein,,,,
kheloingi appke anghaan mein...
soya karoonghi appki jholi mein...
lauta de woh sapna mera babul
aikh baar phir se mujhe bhula le

lagha le apne seene se mujhe phir se
suna de woh lori aur sula de mujhe phir se
tarse hain yeh khaan teri pukar se...
hasa de mujhe aaj phir se
woh muskan lauta de mujhe babul
apna seene se lagha le mujhe appne paas bhula le

khila do woh nawala phir se appne haath se
keh do woh pyar ki do baatein mujhe se
pohnch do aaj yeh ansu meri ankhoin se
mujhe phir se apna bana lo babulll
mujhe apne paas bhula le!!!!!!!! :D


yeh likha hai :twisted:


o sry....tongue3
teinku teinku
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«Reply #53 on: December 17, 2006, 12:37:42 AM »
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hehehe..............very  nice  Naani....  :lol:
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anjani_si
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«Reply #54 on: December 17, 2006, 06:18:01 AM »
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teinku :oops:
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«Reply #55 on: December 17, 2006, 08:02:26 AM »
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marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare
ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare


jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne
jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare


jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii
ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare


duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko
duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare
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«Reply #56 on: December 18, 2006, 12:20:47 AM »
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Hi Faree

Aap jab koi cheez post karain to dubar padh liya karain
Agar main ghalat nahin hun
to woh shair is tarah hai
Jab kashtii sabit-o-salim thee
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Tosha
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«Reply #57 on: December 18, 2006, 02:32:07 AM »
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Copy paste Puzzled !
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«Reply #58 on: December 18, 2006, 04:12:34 AM »
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your most welcoem Sikha ji.. bahut khoob shika bahut acha likha hia i don't have words to say... mey tumahri post ka jald hi reply dungi.... yeo hi likhti rahi...

Quote from: "Shikha12"
Thanks a lot Vicky, Sonu ji, Nidhi, Tosha...

Sonu ji nice songs... Thanks a lot for sharing here...
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«Reply #59 on: December 21, 2006, 12:40:39 PM »
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Yaad hai mujhey ab bhi, Raat woh kayamat waali,
Bhojhil mann sey tuney, mujhey itnaa batayaa tha…
Paraya tera baabul hua… Paraya yeh aangan hua,
Rotti apni aankhon ko, Mujhsey lakh chuppaya tha…

Maine dekha tha Baabul, woh bheega mann tera…
Gumsum apni ladlii ko, jab doli mey bithaaya tha…
Mere sang sang chala thaa tu, bahut door galiyare tak,
Haule sey phir mujhsey apnaa haath chhudaya tha…

Naa jaane kyon ab bhi terii galiyaan yaad aati hai,
Jaane kyon har dhadkan meri tujhko he bulaati hai…
Kaise karun khaamosh khud apni dhadkan ko batao,
Mujhko bulaa lo apne paas, yaa mujhse milne tum aao…

Main jeeti hoon yaadon mey teri par ek baat rulaati hai, sad5
Reh reh kar mujhko duniyaa ki bus yeh reet sataatii hai..
Duniya aisa kehti hai kyon, Kyon sabko aisa sikhaati hai…
Beti doli mey nikle ghar sey, Toh wapas arthii pe aati hai… sad5 sad5
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Shikha

Tumhari yeh poem padh kar kuch guzra hua zamaana yaad aa gaya aur saath mein he kuch aage ki soch kar aankhein bhar aayi :cry: :cry: :cry:

Bahut he jazbaati izhar hai baap-beti ke rishte ka tumhari is thread mein !

Keep it up ! =D>



Rajbir ji, Talat, Jagdish, Nidhi, Tosha, Anjani -  Thanks a lot for so nice words....
Faree... Good Effort... Thanks
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