~~~~ungliyan~~~~~

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 31, 2008, 11:58:22 AM
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aaj b tere sparsh ki khushbu se mehkti hain ungliya
tu aayega laut kar keh gaya tha jo ek roz
din gujar gaye hain kitne ginti hain ungliya

teri baahon k saaye mei lipati thi jo ungliya
tere hi masum chehre ko kagaz par banati hain ungliya

kisse kahu mein bebasi kise sunau kahaniya
bas hale dil mera shayri mei likhti hain ungliyan

dil mei uthe jo tufan to jamane mei hota hai jikra
kaise kahu kis-kis ki mujhpar uthti hain ungliyan

thak gyi hain likhte likhte jo ek sadi se likh rahi hain dastan
aa jao ab to sanam ki ab to budhi ho chali hain ungliyan
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2008, 12:06:52 PM »
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bahut khub janab


teri ungliyon se jo lapti thi ungliyan
woh lamhe pal pal yaad kerti hai ungliyan


jab kabhi tera deedar chaha hai dilne humdum
tere chere ko khagaz pe masumiyat se banati hai ungliyan
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2008, 12:21:27 PM »
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Quote from: CoolGirl on May 31, 2008, 12:06:52 PM
bahut khub janab


teri ungliyon se jo lapti thi ungliyan
woh lamhe pal pal yaad kerti hai ungliyan


jab kabhi tera deedar chaha hai dilne humdum
tere chere ko khagaz pe masumiyat se banati hai ungliyan

shukriya coolgirl ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2008, 12:28:12 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 31, 2008, 11:58:22 AM
aaj b tere sparsh ki khushbu se mehkti hain ungliya
tu aayega laut kar keh gaya tha jo ek roz
din gujar gaye hain kitne ginti hain ungliya

teri baahon k saaye mei lipati thi jo ungliya
tere hi masum chehre ko kagaz par banati hain ungliya

kisse kahu mein bebasi kise sunau kahaniya
bas hale dil mera shayri mei likhti hain ungliyan

dil mei uthe jo tufan to jamane mei hota hai jikra
kaise kahu kis-kis ki mujhpar uthti hain ungliyan

thak gyi hain likhte likhte jo ek sadi se likh rahi hain dastan
aa jao ab to sanam ki ab to budhi ho chali hain ungliyan

Bahut Khoob.. Applause
Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Kaushikbhawna
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2008, 12:30:36 PM »
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EXCELLENT WORK, Applause
KAUSHIK JI....
BY. K.SHAEL

THAMI THI JO EK ROZ TERI UNGLIYAAN,
APNE HAATHOON MEIN,DUA YAHI THI DIL
MEIN INKA SAATH ZINDAGI BHAR KE LIYE
NASEEB HO JAYE,PAR YE NA MALOOM THA
KI TERI UNGLIYAAN PHIR THAMNI PADENGI
EK DIN TUJHSE CHOOTEE WAQT....
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2008, 12:35:37 PM »
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shukriya mahiya ji and k.shael ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2008, 06:36:14 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Kaushikbhawna !
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2008, 10:23:46 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 31, 2008, 11:58:22 AM
aaj b tere sparsh ki khushbu se mehkti hain ungliya
tu aayega laut kar keh gaya tha jo ek roz
din gujar gaye hain kitne ginti hain ungliya

teri baahon k saaye mei lipati thi jo ungliya
tere hi masum chehre ko kagaz par banati hain ungliya

kisse kahu mein bebasi kise sunau kahaniya
bas hale dil mera shayri mei likhti hain ungliyan

dil mei uthe jo tufan to jamane mei hota hai jikra
kaise kahu kis-kis ki mujhpar uthti hain ungliyan

thak gyi hain likhte likhte jo ek sadi se likh rahi hain dastan
aa jao ab to sanam ki ab to budhi ho chali hain ungliyan

nice creation bhawna ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2008, 10:45:09 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 31, 2008, 11:58:22 AM
aaj b tere sparsh ki khushbu se mehkti hain ungliya
tu aayega laut kar keh gaya tha jo ek roz
din gujar gaye hain kitne ginti hain ungliya

teri baahon k saaye mei lipati thi jo ungliya
tere hi masum chehre ko kagaz par banati hain ungliya

kisse kahu mein bebasi kise sunau kahaniya
bas hale dil mera shayri mei likhti hain ungliyan

dil mei uthe jo tufan to jamane mei hota hai jikra
kaise kahu kis-kis ki mujhpar uthti hain ungliyan

thak gyi hain likhte likhte jo ek sadi se likh rahi hain dastan
aa jao ab to sanam ki ab to budhi ho chali hain ungliyan

bahoot khoob likha hai aapne bhawana ji

netra....
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2008, 03:05:27 PM »
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shukriya celmira, bekarar and netrapal ji

ungliyon ka to bas ek bahana tha
hamein to apna dard bayan karna tha
dekhna chahte the ki kitni himmat hai aaj b inme
likhkar naam unka ungliyon ko apni aajmana tha
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2008, 07:03:02 PM »
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Very good Bhawna jee and Shael sis Applause  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2008, 03:58:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on June 05, 2008, 07:03:02 PM
Very good Bhawna jee and Shael sis Applause  Applause

naam likhte hi unka kalam kuch mehak c jaati hai
sidhi saadhi chalte chalte machal c jaati hai
log kehte hain hamein ki bohut acha likhte hain
par sach to ye hai ki kalam likhte likhte hamein hazaron aasu rulati hai
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2012, 02:35:43 PM »
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That is so cool! I'm actually quite photo-challenged   my vaiusl cortex doesn't register the coolness factor of pictures or color. In fact I have to ask my hubby if I match, and I have a photo guru who tells me what pictures I should put in my mags. And even I thought this was a waaaaay cool picture! Great job Steph! You managed to impress a photo-blind person  So, you going to submit this to the New Yorker?
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2012, 11:45:14 PM »
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bahoot hai khoob aisi ungliyan
jo rachti behatareeen kalaam hai.
pesh-e-khidmat kaushik bhavana jee
aapko mera daad aur salaam hai.
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