ये शाम होने को आई है

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ये शाम होने को आई है
या तेरी जुल्फ़ लहराई है
ये हवा ही नम सी है
या बेरूखी तेरे होठों पे छाई है ।

अस्ताचल पर खड़ा ये सूर्य है
या तू माथे की बिंदिया धोकर आई है
ये जो अंधियारा भरने को आता है
शायद तेरे काजल की परछाई है।

ये जो नव चाँदनी की तरूणाई है
तेरे यौवन की अंगड़ाई है
ये हल्की सितारों की महफिल या
तेरे ओढ़न की बुनाई है।


ये जो बहती पुरवाई है
तेरे बदन को छूकर आई है,
यह जो छन्द बन पड़ा है
तेरे अधरों की ही रूबाई है ।

शायद तेरी छवि ही
मस्तिष्क पटल पर छाई है
या फिर तू सचमुच शायद
निशा बन निशा मे आई है।

फ्लापस्टार
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2013, 06:05:05 AM »
ये शाम होने को आई है
या तेरी जुल्फ़ लहराई है
ये हवा ही नम सी है
या बेरूखी तेरे होठों पे छाई है ।

अस्ताचल पर खड़ा ये सूर्य है
या तू माथे की बिंदिया धोकर आई है
ये जो अंधियारा भरने को आता है
शायद तेरे काजल की परछाई है।

ये जो नव चाँदनी की तरूणाई है
तेरे यौवन की अंगड़ाई है
ये हल्की सितारों की महफिल या
तेरे ओढ़न की बुनाई है।


ये जो बहती पुरवाई है
तेरे बदन को छूकर आई है,
यह जो छन्द बन पड़ा है
तेरे अधरों की ही रूबाई है ।

शायद तेरी छवि ही
मस्तिष्क पटल पर छाई है
या फिर तू सचमुच शायद
निशा बन निशा मे आई है।

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good,sir
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2013, 06:28:27 AM »
good,sir
thank u sir
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2013, 08:25:28 AM »
gud one atul jee..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2013, 08:25:52 AM »
WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2013, 08:54:11 AM »
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gud one atul jee..happy9 happy9

THANKS NASHWANI JEE  happy9
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2013, 08:54:54 AM »
WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob

BHUPINDER jee  icon_salut.. BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAVAAD..AAPKAA    happy3
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2013, 10:28:41 AM »
Wah  wah  kya  baat  hai  Flopstar  ji  baddiya peskash  . Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2013, 11:45:52 AM »
 happy3 shukriyaa apkaa madhuwesh jee
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2013, 11:47:09 AM »
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2013, 12:27:46 PM »
bahut shukriyaa saagar sahab...yuhi saath dete rahiye!
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2013, 02:35:51 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2013, 02:40:25 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanx
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2013, 04:51:32 PM »
 Wellcome to Yoindia !
 
 You have matched yhenature with our feelings , thats Great Sir.
 
Aapne pehle kabita mein apna Srijan Shaily ko humare samne leaye .

Aap aage bhi aise likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #14 on: June 23, 2013, 05:40:20 PM »
waaaaaaaaaah. bahut khoob.
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