छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?:Other Languages

champak

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धन्य-धन्य है मेरा मन देख के तेरा स्पंदन,
बहक रहे मेरे अंजन,छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन..?

मचल रहा मेरा यौवन कहो लुटा दूं तन-मन-धन,
तेरे साँसों की खुशबु से ये पवन गूंजती है सन-सन..!

निशा नशे में झूम-झूमती चंदा की बाहों में झन -झन,
नरम अधर के ही पराग में डूब भ्रमर करता रस-गुंजन..!

नैन-नशीले गाल-गुलाबी होठों पे प्रियतम का चन्दन,
रति-प्रिया के अंग-अंग में झलक रहा मद-यौवन छन-छन..!

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@चंपक


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sarfira

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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2013, 01:19:38 AM »

kamaal hai bhai
bht hi khubsurat abhivyakti prem ka
lajawaab


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2013, 01:27:24 AM »

Quote from: champak on April 08, 2013, 12:52:28 AM

naaaaaaaice


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mkv

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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2013, 01:30:32 AM »

Bahut khoob Champak jee
aapke likhe gaye shabda dil me utar gaye..
likhte rahiye.


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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2013, 11:53:42 AM »

Good.


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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2013, 11:58:43 AM »

Bahut khoob champak ji...dheron daad or sath m ek rau bhi...


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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2013, 12:14:22 PM »

atisunder


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ParwaaZ

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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2013, 04:18:15 PM »

Champak Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob badi hi pyaari kalaam kahi hai ... bade hi manbhavak shabdoN ka prog kiya hai...

Is khoobsurat rachna par humari dili mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..


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champak

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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2013, 11:34:05 PM »

aap sabhon ka tahedil se shukriya..aise hi hamare dil ka hausla buland karte rahiye...dhanyavaad fir se!


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Re: छू लूं क्या ये तन-चन्दन....?

«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2013, 12:09:31 AM »

Quote from: champak on April 08, 2013, 12:52:28 AM

nice poem,sir


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