ki kariyee' ? :Poetry of seperation in Punjabi

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ki kariyee' ?

« on: January 15, 2008, 02:38:21 PM »

Rog avalle dil nu hon ta ki kariye,..?
Chup chapeete akhiyaan ron ta ki kariye,..?
Rehndi aa sajjna di udheek ihna akhiyaan nu,..?
sajjan je bhul jaan ta ki kariye?


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Re: ki kariyee' ?

« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2008, 02:46:51 PM »

Nonia ji kaya app apni shayri likh rahe hai? Huh?

Nice lines


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Re: ki kariyee' ?

« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2008, 02:53:07 PM »

jii, pooja ji,. some lines are my own and some by my frnd..

and it's really nice to hear that u like the shairy


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Re: ki kariyee' ?

« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2008, 02:59:42 PM »

nonia ji agar app apni shayri nahi likh rajhe then pls shayri likhne ke baad (NM) Not mine jaroor likhe..


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