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General / User Support and Suggestion Forum / Re: Why poetry is secondary over Yoindia ?Who is at fault ?
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on: November 08, 2008, 01:17:44 PM
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Sabse Pehle To Yeh baat kehna zaroori hai ki
yoindia ki yehi khaas baat hai ki yahan har ek poetry jo post hoti hai,
padhi jaati hai..
varna aise kai sites hai jahan par poetries post bhi hoti hai to padhne wale
bahut kam hote hai.. Aur baat rahi replies ki yeh baat to natural hai ki agar poetry pasand aaye to uss poetry ko reply to zaroor milegi..
Ricky ji aapne jo sawaal uthaya hai, main aapko sirf itna keh sakta hoon, ke kai baar aisa hota hai ke hum kuch likhte hai par humein uss par bahut kam replies aate hai..iss baat par niraash ho jaana, Galat hoga!!!
Baaki maine har ek ko yahan par regularly ek dusre ko reply karte dekha hai...
isliye mujhe to personally yoindia ya yoindia ke members se koi shikayat nahi.. 
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq / Re: %%%Bekarar %%%
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on: November 08, 2008, 12:09:11 PM
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 Dil aaj fir bekarar hua jaata hai,
Tumhe gale lagane ko betaab hua jaata hai,
Jaise hi chu.ti hai badalte mausam ki thandak,
Tumhara wo hum se lipat jaana yaad aata hai,
Garam saanse wo tumhari jab chu.ti the galo ko,
Fir wo dhire se kaano main gunguna.na yaad aata hai,
Laga ke kaajal aankho main, aaine ko dekhna,
Fir dhire se palkhe jhookana yaad aata hai,
Laut aao jaldi aur dikha do surat-e-yaar,
Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai,
Aab ye sine ka tufan roka nahi jaata hai...........Baadal
Bahut Bahut Khoob Baadalji..Bahut Acha likha hai aapne  |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: ek tootta rishta
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on: November 07, 2008, 10:37:06 AM
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil ji...
aapne dard bhari nazm likhi hai..bahut ache..
Khamosh rehte ho yuh,
Apne Ansuo se bhagawat kyon nahi karte??
Bechain se dikhte ho,
Shikayat kyon nahi karte??
Maana humne ke yuh zindagi jeena asaan Nahi,
Par apne mehboob se juda hokar
jeena bhi to jeena nahi!!!
apne dil mein phir woh mohabbat zinda karke,
pahunch jaana unke dar par,
Phir kehna unse,khade hai dar par tere,
Ab Inaayat kyon nahi karte...."
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