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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / ~~"Tu Door Jaane Laga"~~by Sophi.
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on: Today at 08:08:03 AM
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 Zindagi ka arth samja aane laga,
jab tanhaiyon mein tera ehsaas satane laga..
chut gaye, tut gaye. sare bandan..
jab tera jUdai k dard yea Ash batane laga..
Socha laut aau tere paas
par aab kyun mujhse tu door jaane laga..
Sitama daaye hai Duniyan ne hum par..
Ab kyun tu is Dard de dil ka ghav badane laga...
Sophi dear, aapki likhi hui purani kaafi lines padi, par ye lines jo aapne dard me likhi hai sach me dil ko choo gayi, aur aankhein namm ho gayi..to ise design karke post kar diya..umeed karti ho meri hi tarah ye aapko aur baaki members ko bhi pasandh aayengi,..
Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq / Re: ~~"Kyun Itna Tadpati Ho"~~by Mann
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on: Today at 06:52:37 AM
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Beautifully written Mann.. Tum to hamesha hi achha likhte ho, par tumhare alfazon mein jaise shally ne jaan daal di ho...
Really very beautiful gift.. God bless...
Thanx didi, sach kaha aapne Mann ji khumar-e-ishq me bahut hi khoob likhte hai, didi jaan maine nahi Mann Ji ke alfaazo ne uss dulhan ki tasveer me daal di hai..!! Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq / Re: ~~"Kyun Itna Tadpati Ho"~~by Mann
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on: Today at 05:54:27 AM
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so sweet! kya baat hai!
rub aap dono ki dosti yunhi barkaraar rahkke, sada! ameen
waise, shally aur mann bhai, aap dono yoindia k subse pyaare members hain! ek mera bahot kareebi bhai, ek bahot pyaari behan.... I love you both with all my heart!
yunhi rehna, ka b mat badalna, plz!
luv u guys
Shukriya Anjaani Friend, Aapne hamare kaam ko saraha aur dua di bahut hi aacha laga, aur aap bhi hamare liye bahut aziz dost ho,, Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq / ~~"Muskuraye Jaati Hoo.n"~~by Pooja
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on: Today at 04:52:49 AM
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These lines are written by Pooja Didi & Only Design by me..
Hatho mai tasveer teri, ankhon mai khawab hai Din-raat,
subah-sham, bas ek tera hi khayal hai Miloge jab
tab tumse kaya kuch kahugi main!!
Samne tere atty hi sare hosh, bad-hawas hai
khawabo mai akar satate ho
khumar ban baras jaate ho
sath tera, dil ko bahoot bhata hai
ek masoom chehra najar ke samne atta hai
bhar kar tasveer teri ankhon mai
sapne kai sajati hu
kahu juban se kaya main tujko
teri tasveer ke samne muskuraye jaati hu
Pooja Didi, Aapki ye lines bahut doodne par mili, par kehte hai na mehnat ka phal aacha hota hai, itni pyaari lines sach me dil me utar gayi..bahut hi meethe alfaaz hai inn lines ke..
Hope u liked the design..
Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)
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on: Today at 12:50:44 AM
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Really beautifully written by Talat and presented by Shally...
Talat its always a pleasure to read you, thanks to Shally that she has made such efforts and presented it beautifully...
Thanx a lott Angel didi, sach me bahut bahut khushi hui ki aapne iss thread ko sarha..didi, ye sab Talat dear ki shayri ka kamal hai ki aap log mujhe sarah rahe hai, warna to maine aisa kuch khaas nahi kiya.. Shukriya didi, Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)
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on: Today at 12:42:26 AM
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Waah...! Bohot hi khoob ashaar hain Celmira ji, pehle kabhi nazar se nahi guzre magar shukriya Shally ji ka jinhon ne hame isse rubru karwaya, or khoobsurat andaaz main pesh kiya, khas kar "Akela kar gaya koi" me bohot soch samajh kar or zabardast beckground image ka istemaal kiya hai...
Celmira ji shally ji or wo tamam members jo kaafi waqt se yoindia par likh rahe hain un se main ek darkhast karunga ke wo agar apna ek thread aysa banae ke jis me apni purani peshkash ko dobara pesh karen to ek baar phir wo manzr-e-aam par aaye or kama-haqqahu daad-o-tahseen paye.
Aaj shally ji ne umda kaam kiya to ye khayaal aaya, celmira ji shally ji khwaish ji pooja ji roja ji angel ji wagaira bohot se sathiyon ke kain ash'ar ayse hain jo ab nai rachnaon ke boj tale dab chuke hain, to dosto apne hi kalaam ke saath insaaf kijiye, ham use padhne ko bechain hain.
Is me koi sharm ki baat nahi badaai ki baat nahi apna waqt nikaal kar dili jazbaat ke saath likhe gaye ash'ar se insaaf karna hi chahiye...
Kisi ka ek behtareen sher yaad aagaya:....
Kavita likhna khel nahi he, puchho in fankaaron se
Ye sab loha kaat rahe hain, Qalamo'n ki talwaaron se
Allah kare yoindia par wahi ho jo sabke liye faidemand ho.
Aap ka mukhlis: Sayyid Randeri
Shukriya Syeed Ji, ye shayad pehli baar hai ki aapne mere kisi kaam ko saraha,aur sach maniye behad khushi hui, aapko iss thread me dekhkar..waise bhi Talat dear ke alfaazo ne na sirf mera har kisi ka dil choo liya hai.. aur aap baat kar rahe hai apne khud ki shayries ke thread open karne ki maine apna aisa hi thread pehle hi khol rakha hai, par kaam ke bojh aur waqt ki kami ke karan use aur nahi bada paa rahi hoo.n par waqt milte hi jaroor usme purane panno ke alfaazo ko likhongi.. aur sabhi se guzarish hai ki wo bhi aisa hi kare taaki hame behad khoobsurat alfaazo ko padne ka mouka milta rahe.. shukriya Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)
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on: Today at 12:36:29 AM
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Thanks a lot Madhu....Now the credit really goes to Shally, who brought out this lost work of mine, and that too in such a beautiful way.
Celmira dear, beshak maine inn poems ko sajaya ho par inhe banaya to aapne hi hai na, mehnat to aapki hi thi..aur maine to sirf ise kuch purane panno se utha kar aaj mein le aayi hoo.n bass.. aur credit hamesha aapka hi rahega, agar mujhe kuch de sakti hai aap to sirf dua aur pyaar dijiyega..Shally ko inn 2 cheezo se jyada pyaari cheez koi bhi nahi hai.. Shally. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)
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on: Today at 12:34:06 AM
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OMG !!! I am just speechless to see these poems of mine....!!
Thanks so much for giving me this pleasure of seeing my work in such a beautiful presentation......Thanks so much Shally dear for designing this.........You really have a made a beautiful presentation.....both of them ...Thanks so much dear  Celmira dear, ye mere liye khushi ki baat hai ki mein inn purani aur aziz lines ko na sirf pad payi, balki inhe design karne ka mouka bhi mila..aur sabse badi baat maine ya kaam aapse pooce begair kiya, aur aapne bura nahi maana..thanx so much dear.. aapke alfaaz the hi itne khoobsurat ki presentation bhi khoobsurat lagne lagi hai.. Shally. |
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