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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / dard ka tohfa
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on: August 30, 2007, 05:18:12 AM
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manav ji, akar kuch kehna asan hota hai aur karna utna hi mushkil, agar mai yaha pe is tara ki shayari karti hoon then on the other side maine bohot mayaus bhari shayari bhi ki hai. its not that i am "attacking" u personally. i just like the jugal bandi in shayari with anyone :D i am sorry agar maine kuch galat likha ho ya apko hurt hua ho, maine yeh soch kar reply nahin likha tha!
thanks dosto! u have written nice also!!
:D
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / yeh Dard ka silsila....
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on: August 30, 2007, 05:13:54 AM
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hi Manav ji...i am really sorry apko agar kuch bura laga ho  maine koi shikayat ya koi blame likhne ke liye nahin likha tha. mai to bas shayari kar rahi ti as i do it with everyone. i am really sorry if i hurt u, mera aisa kuch bhi kehne ka matlab nahin tha. |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / dard ka tohfa
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on: August 29, 2007, 11:07:18 AM
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wah wah manav ji... simple and very nice!!!
tumne diya hai to hume yeh tofa bhi kabool hai,
kya paya kya khoya, yeh sochna ab fazool hai,
dil diya hai, to koi hisab nahi rakhte hum,
humara to pyar me to bas yehi ek asool hai!
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: - Muskura Nahin Rahe -
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on: August 29, 2007, 07:16:59 AM
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waah Meena -Ji mind blowing .... as usual .... bahut der baad aapki poem pe reply dene ke liye hum muafi chahte hain ... actually ..... baad mud'dat ke iss mehfil mein aana hua ...... zindgi ki uljano mein thoda ulje rhe aur kucch karne ka mouka nhi mila ..... khiar yeh sab to chalta hi rhega ... aap ki tehreer bahut pasand aayi .... kucch hamari taraf se bhi!!
Samjate hai tere jazbatoon ko 'e mere humkadam
Afsoos, tere ansoon apni ankhon se bha nahin sakte
Yeh to majboriyon ne rok diye panv hamare, warna
kiski kasam hai humko ke tere paas aa nahin sakte
Milne ko to aur kya kya na mila hai humko phir bhi
Ranj yhi hai kismat se apna ke tumko pa nahin sakte
Kyunkar na uthegi lash hamari tere janaze ke sath
Tere bina ik saans bhi iss jism mein laa nahin sakte !!
HumTum
chalo der se hi sahi par likha to hai na...shukriya janab...apne bhi bohot khoob likha hai!!! |
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / - Vida Karo Hume -
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on: August 29, 2007, 07:12:24 AM
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thanks Shika, Ranjana ji, Fahi ji and Nidhi sis
bohot khoob Fahi ji...very touching!! first two lines are very gud!!
nice oen as well nidhi!!
zindagi me kya rakha hai hume jane do,
rote rahe humesha, aab kushi hume pane do,
jab rooh hi bejaan hai to jism ka kya karna,
duniya walo ko humare jism ko bhi aab jalane do!
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