good sms es read this one....


four roses for you....

1st for health
2nd for wealth
3rd for happiness

and 4th one....
kaan key upar lagana mast lageyga.

sakhi1909  kafi umda nazm hai balkey yoon kahey keh aajkal ki shaadiyon key haal ka ek manzar hai.mujhey khud soch kar dukh hota key log mangtey hai ghalat hain woh sub. aaj kal ki larhkiya self depend hain phir pata nahin kyon dahej mangney ki logon ki hammat hoti hai.mera ek khayal aur hai agar log chahtey hain key yeh dahej pratha band ho to larhkon ko khud aagey aana hoga larhkiyon ka haath thaam kar apni behnon key liyeh neik larhkey dhoond kar na key ammer log dhoond kar.

 ek dard yahan hai ek dard wahan hai
merey yaar kahan hai dildaar kahan hai

rota hoon idhar main udhar tu bhi hai rota
yeh ishq ka zakham hai, hamein chain kahan hai 

kabhi khush hoon main bhi hansta hai kabhi tu
yeh ishq hai logon deevana jahaan hai :D

kehtey hain kabhi hum kehtey hain kabhi sab
kabhi ishq na karna ismein raain kahan hai.


by... Mudassir ali

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

laagey hai tujhko birha kaaa koi dukh tarhpaayey
jaaisey kati ho nanhi si ungli honton mein usko aapney chupayey
neend naa aayey raat naa jaayeey
piya ki tujhko yaad saataey

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?

do din tujhko baaras lageey hain ankhiya kyon tapkati hai
khud roti hai apney sang mein sakhiyon ko tu rulaati hai
sakhiyan hasaaein hans na paayey
sakhiyaa hansey to ro ro jayey

naina pagal hain badra key jaisey neer giraein
palkein uthein to piya ko sochein, aas laagaein

torey baavrey, sey nainon mein aaj neer sa kahey bhara hai
tori baavri kaali aankhiyaan aaj itni geeli kyon hain?


BY (mudassir)

unsey poochlo

why do i

shikha ji aapney kafi umdaa tariqey sey meri likhi hui ghazal ko pesh kiya hai, balkey ya yoon kahein key ghazal ko sahi kar key pesh kiya hai. shukriya

dil ki gali mein aaj phir pey chal si sunaii di hai
merey dil ney phir se mujhey ishq ki duhaii di hai

karvat badal kar kal meri puri raat kati jab
subha honey par mujhey ishq ki razaaii di hai

kal jab mujh ko na chain tha need bhi koson duur thi
aawaz azaan ki thi ajab gunah kiya lori sunaii di hai

maaf karna merey dost dil ki aawaz nahin yeh
mainney hamesha har gunah ki kya safaii di hai

ronaq hai merey chehrey par sach ka bhi noor hai
sach ki seekh mujh ko meri maa sey sunai di hai

kehta hai "mahak" tumsey gar ghalat kabhi tum ho
sach kehnay pey allah ney bhi to mithaii di hai.



doston assalamalaikum ek ghazal pesh kari hai alag andaz mein likhney ki koshish dil mein kuch baat thi lafzon sey bayan kardi ummed hai ghazal pasand aaye ya na aaye baat zuroor pasand aaeygi.agar is ghazal ko koi sahab kisi achchey andaaz mein likhdein to mein unka bohot shukr guzar rahoonga. allah hafiz.
(Mudassir ali "Mahak")

princess sahiba ghazal achchi hai, par merey khyal sey yeh ghulam ali sahab ki gayi hui kaafi purani ghazal hai.

mujhko bata do main bechain hoon yaaron
jisney likhi thi yah ghazal aakhir woh naam kiska tha.

Assalam-alaikum, ummeed hai aap sab khiriyat sey hongey.aaj bohot din baad ek nazm pst kar raha hoon.koi ghalti please bata dein.

merey dil mein ek gham jo tha, na hota to achcha tha
gham mein bhi mujh ko pyar tha, na hota to achcha tha

mainey jigar ko chaak kiya, lahu tapka key dikhlaya
yeh lahu ka bhi ek waar tha, rang koi bhi na ban paya

yeh lahu kya mera yaar tha? na hota to achcha tha

har parchaai mujh pey hasti thi,bas ek badli thi jo roti thi
main rota tha bahaaroon mein, tu patjhad mein bhi hansti thi

yeh patjhad kya mera yaar tha? na hota to achcha tha

ummeed hi kho chuka hoon main,bas maut ka intizaar hai
par maut bhi aati nahin, teri us dua ka kamaal hai

teri dua thi woh aur pyar tha? na hota to achcha tha.


mudassir.

very good

Assalamalikum, doston merey sath kal ek waqya hua balkey yoon kahiye ki waqye ki shuruaat to kaafi pehley ho gayi thi par sabaq kal mila.Aur us key foram baad merey zehen mein ek sheyr paeda hua,phir socha woh aap sey bhi share karoon aap log isey parhiyey aur isi moozoo par apney khayalat ka izhaar shairi key zariye karein takey ek poori nazm tayyar ho. to sheyr arz hai....

dushman ko manaa sakta hoon main aik hi pal mein

Apno ko mananey mein ek umr guzarti hai.

aap sab ka bohot bohot shukriya

assalamalaikum dear friends eid mubarak, pls read

assalamalikum please please read it again, aur kuch comments kariyeh achchi lagi ya buri.allah hafiz