if ever i cared
to feel so scared

then these feelings would i have  never excepted
alas,then true love would i have rejected

but then i would have never known
how empowered a king feels upon his thrown

nor like a bird who takes flight
the elation of there blessed plight

so my love for you i declare
without it my soul would be bare

Angels fear to thread where love no longer lives,like a single flame diminishes darkness,a heart
filled with love only begets more love:-keep writing keep loving(some or maybe all of these words are borrowed and mdified for the reply)
GOOD WORK TAMANNA

i made two typing errors's(last=lust)(so your bodies=so there bodies)i guess i never spend enough time proof reading,i love your addition maybe i shoul edit it in,and give you part credit.Thanks Alot for taking the time

i miss the many ways of telling someone you love them,good work,good emotion

very heavy,

no comment I'm like that too

A dark thunderous sky
no lightning?i wonder why

through the darkness i feel his reach
the sound of tortured souls in the distance screach

IS IT THE ENDING?
IS MY DEATH PENDING?

all those years to your last you adhered
all those countless women,for your love they teared

so precise in you attack
laying down the charm,you never held back

so your bodies you could use
and there innocence did you abuse

with lavish gifts were you too kind
to your ulteria motives,were they so blind

yet you never took the time to repent
to late now the devils been sent

show some remorse,your soul he'll spare
your heart so cold,you just couldn't care

can you smell hells rotting flesh
hells serpernts will welcome something fresh

for eternity your bed a pyre
your damned soul,the devils offspring you'll sire

from religious fervour did you fend
so welcome the devil YOUR NEW FRIEND

i think we all need to live on the lighter side of life

Good fun,worth the prize

loved it

very very very witty and nice

that was really goo,short,and to the point,one of the best i've read,really liked it

a little late but Ramadaan Mubarak from all the people in South Africa,may all muslims realise the object of this month and derive full benefit from it

I,m bowled over

Shaiba, Roja once again,thanks,Your'll are to kind thanks a mill