thanks pooja

how dare you ask why my hearts so cold
and why my words are suddenly so bold

is it no you who walked out of my life
burying deep in my heart a deceptive knife

everyday i begged for your return
but for your new love were you to smitten

so leave my life and never return
as i hope one day you'll get your turn

BRILLIANT

mashallah,how true and how short life is,May Allah give me and us all the the true realisation of our existence,and our duties unto HIM.AMEEN

I am sinner
 yet OH LORD you forgive me
I am a liar
 yet OH LORD you honor me
I am ungratefull
 yet OH LORD you sustain me
I am an oppressor
 yet OH LORD you liberate me

Lets retrospect on our condition and our relations with other's
God in his infinite mercy has honoured us with numerous,bounties,should we then not repay this kindness on those less fortunate then us?

A very well described journey,you have a good command if the english language,really good

As my eyes close I'm drifting away
Oh God,to you did i not daily pray
I never wished to go astray
Nor my beloved did I want to betray

To mislead men was she created
Her body was so exquisite,my desires were elated
And so my soul to doom was fated
Is it she or I whom should be hated?

But to her i was but just a toy
Her ravenous beauty,just a ploy
No wonder she was never coy
Nor could she care to remember,if my name was Jack,James or Roy

For my beloved's forgiveness did i ask
Yet in the glory of my betrayal did I bask
For punsihment did I beg,Not ask
It was now my beloved's time take me to task

In this pool of blood I now lay
My beloved's bullet from my heart did not stray
Why with her heart did I play?
Now for my sins i hefty price I pay

well put,well said,loved your qoute

Said but true,like they say 'thats how the cookie crumbles'.Very well done

Thank you

Thanks a million,Sahiba and Sanya,at times words cannot fully express the appreciation for the encouragement given.Your'll have fanned the ambers of a dying flame,I trully hope that i could produce better,and excell in fostering greater efforts with wide spread appeal.Sorry for the poor spelling,i may love words but my spelling is pythetic,also it takes me a few minutes to write,its a spur of the moment thing,and generally reflects the mood i'm in.i seldom check my spelling,but really the appreciation is really,really,really overwhelming

on word, brilliant!!!!

sweet and short,but the words linger on

is it wealth for which you yearn?
then all the money in the world for you i would earn

from dawn to dusk,from dusk till dawn
my soul to the devil would i pawn

to compliment your beauty so rare
with gold and diamonds to match your skin so fare

my back i would break
for u a palace i would make

in hell i would rest
at least i died knowing i gave you the very best

But if its love for which you want?
then you'd have no reason to hunt

my life for you would i sacrifice
for some this would suffice

your day's i'd fill with colour and joy
my love for you would never be coy

from every hill top you name i would scream
and i promise of only you will i dream

and to every soul would i declare
that i have found true love,thats very rare

Oh how my heart aches
no one knows how it breaks
the many turns life had to take
so many tears shed,enough to fill a lake
i so wish i was so great
the hands of time would i religate
to the point where you could make
a more informed decision about your future fate

alas your hands i would never have to hold
not "i love you" to you could i have told
nor love would we have ever made
alas such a life would i hate
but at least your heart i would never have had to break