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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayri-E-Dard / Re: Dar Lagta Hai.....
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on: July 23, 2008, 01:42:13 PM
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Yaaron Se Ab Haath Milate Dar Lagta Hai, Aur Ek Naya Dhoka Khate Hue Dar Lagta Hai,
Jab Koi Raag Hi Naye Chhed Raha Ho, Bhola Sa Ek Nagma Gaate Hue Dar Lagta Hai,
Wo To Chhod Gaya Ek Mod Pe Laa Ke Lekin, Humko Tanha Aage Jaate Hue Dar Lagta Hai,
Ye Bhi Nahi Ke Raasta Bhul Gaye Hai, Der Hui Hai Itni Ke Jaate Hue Dar Lagta Hai,
Ye To Sach Hai Ke Dhoka Kha Baithe Hai, Par Dilko Ye Samjhate Hue Dar Lagta Hai...
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acchi shaayri share karne ka shukriya angel ji. Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe
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on: July 22, 2008, 02:39:16 PM
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abhi woh aah hey baaki halak me jo kub se thee atkaayi!
abhi woh chaah he baaki jo charche bun nahi paayi!
abhi woh raah bhee to hey roshan jo na ho paayi!
abhi woh 'waah' likhni he jisey tu sun ke itraayi!
likhtey rahe itna to jaane kya-kya na kehdenge mujhe dur he bus zara itna sach ki ho jaaye na ruswaai!
Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe
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on: July 22, 2008, 12:34:49 AM
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wah prateek ji....sama bhandh diya aapne to ...........
abhi wo ghav baaqi hai, jo bus riste hi jaaye,
abhi wo daav baaqi hai, jise hum jeet na paaye,
abhi wo naav baaqi hai, jo majhdaare ki ho jaaye,
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bekarar ji, sama t aap hi ne baandha thaa,hum to matr shareek ho gaye...
Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai / Re: MOHABBAT KO DIKHANA BHI NAHI HAI
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on: July 21, 2008, 04:58:07 PM
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mohabbt ko dikhana bhi nahi hai ghm e ulfat chhupana bhi nahi hai
teri tareef mai likhta hu,n naghmay magr tum ko sunana bhi nahi hai
mai qurbat kay jo lamhay sochta hu,n tumhare sung bitana bhi nahi hai
hai dolat pyar ki tere liye hee magr tujh pay lutana bhi nahi hai
mai dunya ko bata du,n pyar apna magr achha zamana bhi nahi hai
yeh sub mai kr nahi sakta hu,n ahsan mujhe tum ko satana bhi nahi hai
POETRY-AHSAN CHANGEZI
nice sharing.shukriya
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe
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on: July 21, 2008, 04:54:42 PM
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prateek ji..... kamal kar rahe hain aap to janab.......likhate rahiye ...
Aapne dhun hi aisi chedi he....ki geet khud gunguna rahe he.sub aapka kiya dhara he...jhaltey rahiyega..... abhi woh aas hey likhni jo kabhi tumne thee baandhi abhi woh saans hey likhni ho jismey poori azaadi abhi woh raaz likhne he jo laaye they kabhi aandhi abhi woh gaaz he likhni jinsey aayi thee barbaadi! Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: haal-e-tabahi
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on: July 21, 2008, 03:56:43 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya prateekji aapka...bahut kam log hote hai jo kisi ki tareef mein shabdo ki koi kami nahi karte...aap unme se ek ho... aapka Kotaan kot Dhanyawaad
khwaish jee, aapki taaref ke shabd dil se nikaltey he ,kalam se nahi.aapke jo-jo kaayal hein jaante he bakhoobi. Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: haal-e-tabahi
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on: July 21, 2008, 03:50:41 PM
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Ptatek ji aadaab!!! Achhi cheez achhi hi hoti he, chaahe koi taarif kare yaa n kare, "bohot achhaa likha he" aysaa aap ko likhnaa kaafi nahi samajhtaa balke ye bhi likhnaa zaruri samjhaa ke ye ash'ar meri taarif ke to mohtaaj nahi magar jee chahta he waah waah karne ko.
randeri sahhab--aadab mera bhee! arey sahaab aap to sanjeeda ho gaye...hume bto aadat he maskhari karne ki....aapka sneh milta rahe....taareef mile na mile.shukriya hazoor! Prateek
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Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe
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on: July 21, 2008, 03:25:25 PM
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pata nahi kyon pur yeh dhun hothon se juda hi nahi ho rahi...kya jaado he aapke thread mein...bekararji.
abhi woh farz likhna hain nibha jo main nahi paaya!
abhi woh karz likhna hain jo chuka main nahi paaya!
abhi woh tarz bhee to hain geet jispe bun nahi paaya!
abhi woh marz bhee baaki jisko dawa ne nahi khaaya!
abhi to aur bhee kitna main kuch bhee de nahi paaya!
Prateek
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