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46	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram	on: July 20, 2008, 04:52:09 AM
Quote from: bekarar on July 20, 2008, 02:52:58 AM wah prateek ji...........ek ek ashar kissi had tak hum sabhi ki manosthiti ka chitran sa prateet hota hai......bakhubi shabdon me dhala hai apne.......... ek behtareen peshkash.... bekarar ji, aapse saraahna mil jaati he to apni kalam pur kuch garv ho jaata he...prashansa ka dheron shukriya. (aapki manosthithi pur hi likha he! badi naazuk he ji!) Prateek

47	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: Paigaam...	on: July 20, 2008, 04:36:25 AM
mahiya ji, aaj shukruguzaar hu mein sabse pehle waqt ka--kyonki sami samay pur yahan vicharan kur raha thaa tabhee pahuch saka itni sashakt kavita se rubaru hone. shabdon ka sahi chayan aur hakeeqat ke kitni kareeb he yeh kavita!aap daad kabool farmaye...is behtareen kavita ke liye. celmira ji, aapne bhee khoob saath diya he.aapka prayas aur peshkush pukhta he,isey nazarandaaz nahi kar sakta koi bhee.dhnyawaad. Prateek

48	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe	on: July 20, 2008, 03:51:28 AM
sub kuch likha sabne yahan pur nahi un shaam ke kisse kyon kuch nahi aata kabhi meri jaam ke hisse.... abhi woh saaki he baaki jo seene se lipat jaaye abhi woh pyaala bhee to he jo adhron se na hut paaye abhi woh madira ki boondein jinhe pee ke pyaas budh jaaye madhushaala ke woh naaz aur nakhre rindo ko jo behlaaye...... abhi woh sekadon raaten ke jub hum ghur nahi aaye.... woh hur subah ko roothna tera... hum kis -kis ko samjhaaye! Prateek

49	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: wo sab likhna hai mujhe	on: July 20, 2008, 03:23:21 AM
bekarar ji, bahut sundar rachna se awagat karaane ka shukriya.Aapne bhee khoob likha he aage. Mahiya ji,k.sheelji,bhawna ji, chal rahi tarz aur tarannum ka khoob saath nibhaaya he appne yahan. behtaraeen panne bun gaye. Prateek

50	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram	on: July 20, 2008, 02:32:26 AM
Quote from: sarthika on July 19, 2008, 07:16:33 PM wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Prateek ji..bahoot he acha likha hai... shkriya saarthika ji jo aapne kavita ko saraaha aur apne hastaakshar bhee kiye apni rachna dwaara. Aabhari. Prateek

51	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai / Re: mere geet meri haar he	on: July 19, 2008, 03:47:32 PM
Quote from: Sonia01 on April 20, 2008, 07:30:17 PM kya zabardast hindi ka milap hai. (mujhe poore 20 min laage... samajne main todi katinayiyan huyi. waise mere bhai Prateek Mardia jee ne behat kubsurati se likha hai.) shukriya sonia ji--aapne itna waqt yahan kharh kiya aur tareef ki.aabhar. Prateek

52	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: haal-e-tabahi	on: July 19, 2008, 10:36:12 AM
Quote from: Mahiya on June 11, 2008, 10:01:54 AM Bahut sahi kaha aapne.. Woh jo apne haal-e-tabaahi par bhi muskuraa raha tha, Asliyat ko dikhaawe ke mukhoton mein chuppa raha tha, Tufaan baandh rakha tha usne apni nigaahon mein kahin, Jazbaat ke sailaab mein se anmol motiyan churaa raha tha... ps: Kuch sahi nahin likha gaya shayad, Phir bhi jo dil mein aaya, likh diya! Bhool chook maaf kar dijiyega... shukriya mahiya ji. aapki chauthi pankti shaayad pehli teen panktiyon ke paksh mein nahi judi,(shaayad aap yeh jaanti he),pur kayi baar shabd dhoka de jaate he...(lagta he shbdon ko insaano ka asar hone laga he...).aapne jo prayas kiya -uskey liye shukriya. jawaab mein kuch pankti likh raha hu-shaayad kisi aur thread pur bhee likhi he maine--pur yahaan unka shareek hona anivarya sa lagta he.... hur roz mukhota padta chota main to thuk gaya dhota-dhota pehan inhe ye haal mera to bud se budtar ho gaya.... mera apna chehra,na jaane kahaan kho gaya! in mukhoton ki koi dor nahi he aur dor bhee ho to chhor nahi he! ek baar pehan lo dhuns jaata he aur poora chera fus jaata he... kya dikhalu-haal-e-tabaahi gehra kitna zakhm ho gaya.... mera apna chehra na jaane kahaan kho gaya! toofaan nigaho ka baha banke neer muh pe mukhhota,adhron pe janzeer dil pe chaltey ,na jaane kitne teer suni daastan jisney meri meri aankh ke aanso woh bhee ro gaya.... mera apna chehra,na jaane kahaan kho gaya! Prateek

53	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Shairi - E - Zindagi / Re: Pareshaaniyon ka aashram	on: July 19, 2008, 09:54:33 AM
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 05:05:43 PM Nice Charu and Prateek ji!! shukriya pooja ji.aapke dasthkat ka intzaar thaa. Prateek

54	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari) / Re: priy patni ka aabhar	on: July 19, 2008, 07:34:03 AM
Quote from: Mahiya on July 19, 2008, 05:22:35 AM Lolzzz... Bahut Bahut khoob Prateek, Sanjeev and Pooja di... Prateek, Aap to maar kha ke bhi bahut khush nazar aa rahe hai... Kya Parvati ke saath ab bhi pastry, chocolate udda rahe hai... Badi himmat se Sanjeev ne bhi kya khoob pol-khol ka kaam kiya... Yun lagta hai shaam se pehle inhone glass haath mein thaam liya... shukriya mahiya ji. pastry,choclate aaj nahi udda rahe he, saturday ko biwiji ne di jo chutti he bus usi ki khushi mana rahe he cinema hall mein baithey he ek kone me bus pop-corn se kaam chala rahe he! sanjeev ji ne nahi kiya koi pol-khol ka kaam insaani fitrat he yeh,jealosy jiska naam isi dukh mein baithey honge, khole botal tanhai mein dost bani hogi bus jaam! Prateek

55	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari) / Re: priy patni ka aabhar	on: July 19, 2008, 07:27:00 AM
Quote from: Celmira on July 19, 2008, 05:12:18 AM bohot khoob Prateek Ji, Pooja, Bekarar shukriya celmira ji.

56	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: Dhram (Ek Vichaar)	on: July 17, 2008, 12:35:46 AM
netrapal ji, sashakt kavita,sacchi kavita,sampoorn kavita.dhanywaad. Prateek

57	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: tum sitam aur karo	on: July 17, 2008, 12:32:26 AM
Quote from: bekarar on June 30, 2008, 10:37:51 AM ye saaz ka nahi saazinde ka kasoor hai, kisi ne samn bandha isi saaz se, kisi ne mahfilen barbaad kee..... main woh jaam hu,nahi jo teri aankhon se tapatka haan barbaad hu,jo raha tere pyale se sada chalakta tera hriday thaa meri manzil,kaash main waha mehkta pahucha nahi adhron tuk bhee tere,seene mein kya utarta! Prateek

58	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: tum sitam aur karo	on: July 17, 2008, 12:16:25 AM
bekarar ji, aapki jama-poonji kahan kahan chupi hui he....aapke chupaye khajaano ki raahe dikhaate rahiye...lootaron ko aur kya chaiye! jo nivesh aap ne kuch varsh purv kiya thaa...aaj bhee rasiley ful de rahe ha...sochiye..neev kitni majboot hein! behtareen. Prateek

59	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari) / Re: priy patni ka aabhar	on: July 14, 2008, 11:00:01 PM
na kehna ki parvati koi kissa he woh to is jeevan ka hissa he kyon jalte ho, kyon karte aitraaz hum jeevan mein nahi rakhte raaz nahi hota agar parvati ka sahaara kisko sunaata main dukhda saara ghur ke saare kaam kya akela karta aise khayaalon se main to darta dil apna kuch tum bhee pighlao meri baat ub samajh bhee jao bund karo ub jalna,kuch tarkeeb lagao ek kaam wali bai,tum bhee lao!

60	Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari / Miscellaneous Shayri / Re: Bhoole se bhi milne milaane nahiN aate	on: July 14, 2008, 03:35:55 AM
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on July 10, 2008, 02:34:18 AM Bhoole se bhi milne milaane nahiN aate jab waqt pada dost syaane nahiN aate. Sach kehne ka anjaam toh maloom tha lekin, Sach baat ye hai mujh ko bahaane nahiN aate. Kis aas maiN kya soch ke kis baat pe jaane, Hum rroothh gaye our woh manaane nahiN aate. Inko tire aane ki khabar ho gayee hogi, Warna kabhi mousam ye suhaane nahiN aate. Jaati nahiN duniyaa se mahek jinke sukhan ki, Aksar toh yakeen aise dewaane nahiN aate. harsh ji, bahut hi umda peshkash,taakatvar panktiyaan. Prateek

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