Update

Added Point No.9 today.

Welcome Baadshah to Yoindia Shayariadab.

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Welcome to Yoindia Shayariadab to hituisrg8 as well as Sunita !

Diwakar .. Accept a warm welcome from my side too.

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Thankyou Pooja and Honeyrose.

Thankyou Roja, well, I thought its better to be small, let people read it in no time and get reminded about importance of sleep.

Thankyou Syednami ji for your kind words !

Few lines talking about the sleep.

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Chalo so jayen,
Chalo kho jayen,
Bhool jayen Zindagi ki jaddhojahad,
Ankhen band kar,
Kuch derr k liye hi sahi,
Dooor dushwarion se,
Khwabon ki duniya mein,
Gum ho jayen,
Chalo So jayen
Chalo kho Jayen !!

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I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!

Thankyou !
Shall try write something more off-track like this

Anyone !

There you got a nice point but I believe that Urdu / Hindi looks better when they written in their own script. So it is not really a  choice to learn ROMAN when we are doing without learning.

I highly doubt that such standardization on Roman Urdu / Hindi are doing to be popular ever.

What you write is what you get do not fit to English scripting. It is incapable of properly making different words. For Hindi / urdu word there is no definitive spellings.

But I am glad that you corrected me for "Lafzon". About "sae", I use it intentionally instead of "se", just like we use "toh", though "to" is better, we use "h" in order to distinguish from english "to" .Shukriya for you concern, but I feel in english scripting for Hindi / Urdu words, there can't be definitive spellings.

But if it is Hindi/urdu there what you write is what you get really matters.

Shukriya for appreciating my Nazm. Your comments are valuable.

As I said in previous post.. there is two version of same poem. Rather I have two poems on same theme. So here is the second one.

The first one can be found at : "Gumshuda ho Jaun"

    Khamosh rakhna chahte hain
    Inn lavzon ko duniya sae dur rakhna chahte hain,
    Naa jane kya ye kehde,isliye inko..
    Kaghaz sae durr, be arayish rakhna chahte hain !

    Koi pooch naa le aake humse sabab..
    Aur hum ab gumshuda hona chahte hain..

    Shayad kamyab ho jayen iss justuju..
    Wajah yahi ki makaam apna badalna chahte hain…

    Dayera bamushkil itna ho,
    Jee sake bass aur kuch nahi….
    Wo makaan ab aisa chahte hain,

    Naa aaye koi khat naa paigham,
    Anjane shehar mein anjaana ho thikana…
    Bass aisa ab jahaan chahte hain,

    Khuda jaane kab kare manzoor ye dua
    Jald se jald ho pura vayeda…
    Aur fir hum gum hona chahte hain …!!

As I said before.. feel free to comment / criticize.

आप लोगों में से कोई क्या उर्दू टंकण(typing) विधि भी जानता है? जो विधि सबसे ज्यादा प्रचलन में हो ?

No one likes Hindi ?