Very very heart touching,bahut khub likha he aapne Sammual ji.

Hamesha ki tarah aapki shayiri bahut hi acchi hoti he k.shael ji,seedhe dil ko choo jaati he...
ek choti si koshish meri taraf se:


Chod diya beech raah saath usne
hum shikwa tak na kar paaye,
manzil do kadam aage thi,
uske bin hum aage bhi na chal paaye,
bewaafi ki usne is kadar
ki na use bhul
na kisi aur ko pyar kar paaye.

It's so heart touching k.shael ji,aisa laga jaise mere hi dard ko aapni lafzon mein piro diya ho..."PAL PAL NIHARA TERI TASVEER KO JAISE
WO BHI HASS RAHI
THI MERI KISMAT PE USS RAAT,SAB SAPNE
MERE TOOT GAYE KAANCH KI TARAH USS
RAAT" these line are so touching.

Too good bhawna di,these lines i liked most
"haq tha ye tera jo tune dil ko tod dia
warna is dil ko tere bina dhadakne ki aarzoo kab hai"

Bahut hi accha likha he aapne NiCkkkDoN ji,and the picture represents it so well...really very nice.

Bilkul sahi kaha Diya ji aapne,dard ka ehsaas hi shayer bana deta he aur mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua he...kuch lafzon me apni feelings beyan karne ki koshish karti hoon bas..thanks for liking it.

thanks for appreciation Roji ji.

I like this poem very much,it reflects life of maybe each of us,so it thought to share with u all.






Har khushi Hai Logon Ke Daman Mein,
Par Ek Hansi Ke Liye Waqt Nahi.
Din Raat Daudti Duniya Mein,
Zindagi Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.

Saare Naam Mobile Mein Hain,
Par Dosti Ke Lye Waqt Nahi.
Gairon Ki Kya Baat Karen,
Jab Apno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.

Aankhon Me Hai Neend Badee,
Par Sone Ka Waqt Nahi.
Dil Hai Ghamon Se Bhara Hua,
Par Rone Ka Bhi Waqt Nahi.

Paison ki Daud Me Aise Daude,
Ki Thakne ka Bhi Waqt Nahi.
Paraye Ehsason Ki Kya Kadr Karein,
Jab Apane Sapno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.

Tu Hi Bata E Zindagi,
Iss Zindagi Ka Kya Hoga,
Ki Har Pal Marne Walon Ko,
Jeene Ke Liye Bhi Waqt Nahi.


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Ishq wale ankhon ki baat samajh lete hain,
Sapno mein mil jaye to mulaqat samajh lete hain.
Yun to Rota he asman bhi Dharti se Bichad kar,
Par log use barsaat samajh lete hain.


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Hum Nazuk Nazuk Dil wale Bus aise hi to hote hain
Kabi Hanste hain Kabi Rote hain Kabi Dil mai Khuwab pirotey hain,

Kabi Mehfil Mehfil phirtey hian, Kabi Zaat mai Tanha hote hain
Kabi Chup ki Mohrr lagate hain, Kabi Geet Labon per latey hian,

Kabi Sab ka Dil Behlatey hain, Kabi Khud mai Tanha hote hain
Kabi Shab-Bhar Jagte rehte hain, Kabi Lambi Taan ker sotey hain,

Hum Nazuk Nazuk Dil wale Bus aise hi to hote hain
Kabi Hanste hain Kabi Rote hain Kabi Dil mai Khuwab pirotey hain.



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Maree nahi tujse bichad kar
bas itna hi hai ki humse jiya nahi jaata,

nafrat bhi nahi karte tujse
par pyar bhi ab kiya nahi jaata,

bhule bhi nahi tujko
par yaad bhi ab kiya nahi jaata,
 

kaise kahein kitna toot gaye hein hum
ki pyar dene waalon se pyar bhi ab liya nahi jaata,

mare nahi tujse bichad kar
bas itna hi hai ki humse jiya nahi jaata...

Kis tarah bikhar gaye he hum
kisi aaine pe paathar gira ke dekho,

dil ro raha ho jab
tab muskura kar dekho,

kaise hota he dard ka ehsaas
kabhi phool pe kaanta chuba kar dekho,

dil dhadkana band kar de
tab zindagi ko azmaa kar dekho,

kitne sailaab chupe hote hein aankhon mein
kabhi samandar ki gehraai mein ja kar dekho,

jab saare sapne toot gaye hon
tab naye sapne sajaane ki himmat laa kar dekho,

dekho kaisi hoti hai bewafai ki chubhan
parchai bhi saath chod de jab
tab andheron mein kadam badhaa kar dekho.

thank u so much for your encouragement muhammed ji,it feels really very good when someone appreciate your work.Appne hamesha encourage kiya he iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.

>>>>>>>Bhrose ne bhi dokha de diya hume
to wafa se aasra kaise karein,

jab dhadkan ne hi dil ka saath chod diya
to saanson ki aarzu kaise karein,

palkon pe saja gaya wo hamaare diye judaai ke
ab aandhi se shikwa kaise karein,

kaha tha usne ki ek din laut ke aunga
ab waqt se gila kaise karein,

zindagi ki kashti beech samandar ataq gayi
jiyein bhi to kaise aur kaise hum marien.<<<<<<<<

Khud ko bhula bethoon itna Pyaar de
Mujhe Chahaton ka khumaar  de
Bahek na jaoon kahin bhatak na jaoon
Meri beqaraariyon ko qaraar de
Khojaoon kahin gum na hojaoon main
Mujhe Chahaten beshumaar de.


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