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Author Topic: Guzarjayenge – a poem in progress  (Read 156 times)
Bambi
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« on: June 23, 2009, 09:18:08 PM »
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Ek choti se siddi se guzarthen hain

Thehri hui cyclon se guzarthen hain

Chini mahtham se guzarthen hain

“Good morning aunty’ kehke guzarthen hain

Jay walk karke guzarthe hain

Rukthe hue bus no.147 se guzarthen hain

Ek din guzra

Aur chauda din bache

Guzarthe -Guzarthe yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge

Do mare Ac bus main thake-thake logon sey guzarthe hain

Appne app ke saath anthakshri khelte guzarthe hain

Chalte hue t.v se guzarthe hain

Dhitt se anushasan se guzarthe hain

Azadi se sawaal -jawaab karthe guzarthen hain

Achanak kho-kar, vapsi se guzarthen hain

Lal line ke train ko pakadke guzarthen hain

Dusra din bhi

Guzargaya

Ab tera din bache, yeh bhi

Guzarjayengey

Pal-pal -pal guzarthen hain

Pal-pal -pal- jaldi guzarthen hain

Guzre sirf do din

Par pandri dino ki pareshane uthathen hain.

Theen baje doodh peeke se guzarthen hain

Khali pet ke khalipan se guzarthen hain

Challis ghaton ke khayal challis minute main guzarthen hain

Be-dor doston sey guzarthen hain

Phir sapno main khokar guzarthen hain

Kitabon ko awaz deke guzarthen hain

Yeh ja raha thisra din, yeh bhi

guzar jaye ga

Aur bache bara din , yeh bhi

Guzarjayengey.

Char dabbon main theen saal ki zindagi bharke guzarthen hain

Nach bhare raath ko paun kossthe guzarthen hain

Khule kale kaksha se hote guzarthe hain

Bugis street ke bhagam bhag se guzarthe hain

Gayatri main purane dost sey milte guzarthen hain

Jalebi, paan aur dheer saara bakwas chabathe guzarthen hain

Chauthe ka chautha bhi

guzarjayega

Ab gyara din bache, Yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge.

Kamre main band thi ek chidya,

Usse khula aasma mil gaya

Kamra sunehra tha

Par khulle aasma ka kya mol bhalla?

Paanch ghaton main dusri duniya sey guzarthen hain

Band darvazon sey guzarthen hain

Aasman main haathi-ghodon sey guzarthe hain

Bhatije ki muskaan sey guzarthe hain

Ek purane khel ko khel kar guzarthe hain

Ghar ke samne ghar ka sapna dekhte guzarthe hain

Arre, panchava bhi

Guzargaya?

Bache dus din, yeh bhi

Guzarjayengey.

Chidya phir bachchi ban gayi

Jaise ghar laut aayi

Didi, Jijaji, dono bhatije

Aur sabki pyari Opi ke pass chali aayi.

Chheh bhojan ke din sey guzarthe hain

Ganeshji ke nagri sey guzarthe hain

Uncle ke simple sapno sey guzarthe hain

Ghar main nilgiri sey guzarthen hain

Bachon ke saath bachcha, badon sey chota rehke guzarthen hain

Has-haske, tas-maske guzarthe hain.

Chatta din bhi

Guzargaya

Bachche nau din, yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge

Chidhya ne yunhi aapne

dil ki baat kahi

Didi ka dil itna bada

Ke dil ki baat ko sach kardi.

Sathve aaman main, Deewaron ke jungle ko chodke guzarthe hain

Chote-Chote pyaare kasbon se guzarthe hain

Bina Moh ke gharon sey guzarthen hain

Kampung ka popiah khake guzarthe hain

Ek khali station sey guzarthe hain

Chini mandir sey hoke guzarthe hain

Yeh lo! Satva din bhi

Guzargaya

Ab bachche aath din, yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge

Aatth kaidi phir se deewaron ke jungle ko chodke guzarthe hain

Ek badi choti se hoke guzarthe hain

Tute phute church sey guzarthe hain

Nnnya khanna khake guzarthe hain

Aasi feet ke unchayi sey duniya ko dekhke guzarthe hain

Aachanak se bahut saare naye doston sey milte guzarthe hain

Kaise bhag rahe hain din Attva bhi

Guzargaya

Ab bachche saath din, yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge

Nua mare ki moh ki duniya sey guzarthe hain

Ek-ek kapda dhundhte guzarthe hain

Paise kharch karte guzarthe hain

Uncle aur chiken little se milte guzarthe hain

Bholi ma ki bholi baatein baathetein guzarthe hain

Doston sey phir milne ki arzoo karte guzarthe hain

Nauva din bhi yunhi

Guzargaya

Baaki cheh din yunhi

Guzarjayengey.

Dus doston sey “See you soon” kehte guzarthe hain

Ek hazaar ek kahaniyon sey guzarthe hain

Bade bhai aur chiti behen ki khati-mithi ladayi sey guzarthen hain

Berang sapno main dubne ki koshish karthe guzarthe hain

Coca-cola ke alishan factory se guzarthe hain

Saheliyon ko kampung ki duniya batate guzarthe hain

Dusva din aaram sey

Guzargaya

Ab bachce panch din, yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge

Chidhiya phir badi ho gayi

Chidhiya phir sunehre kamre main kaid ho gayi

Ab sunehre pan ko ek-ek karke jothi hai

Ab sunehrepan se ek-ek karke be-moh hoti hai

Gyara dabon se bhara ghar sey guzarthen hai

Gulabi deewaron sey tasveeren sameeth the guzarthe hai

Mamuli sa benaam din sey guzarthe hain

Saal bhar ke saathi ko bechthe guzarthe hai

Didi ki haasthi awaaz sunke guzarthe hain

Kamre main gunjthi khayalon sey guzarthe hai

Gyarva din bhi

Guzargaya

Bus Char din bachche

Bus char din !

Yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge.

Bara dabbom ki bidayi karte guzarte hain

taufe kharidthe guzarthe hain

Ek aakhri baar kali kaksha sey guzarthe hain

Char saheliyon ki kahaniyon sey guzarthe hain

Chat pate Sri Lankanon ke chat pate kahaniyon se guzarthe hain

Akhri baar peeli ko ‘Good Night’ kahte guzarthe hain.

Pata hai barwa din bhi

Guzargaya ?

Theen hi din bachche hain

Yeh bhi … yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge.

Teera kapde washing machine main dalthe guzarthe hain.

Peeli ko changi airport par bida karte guzarthe hain

Taufe phir se kharidthe  guzarthe hain

Aachanak kovan station pe ek banglori dost sey milte guzarthe hain

theen dakaithi aur ek saheli ke saath baatein-raatein guzarthe hain

Bahut sara pyar saameth the guzarthe hain.

Chidhya ko abb subah

dikhayi de raha hain

Par Aakhen aadhi khuli

Aadhi band…

Ia pal main,

Dhudli hai kavita

Kavita ek dhundh.

Chaudhve ghante par Uncle, Aunty aur Chicken Little sey milte guzarthe hain.

Neeli, narangi, aur berang ke saath ghar saaf karthe guzarthe hain

Neeli, narangi, aur berang ke saath ghar saaf karthe karthe guzarthe hain

Neeli, narangi, aur berang ke saath ghar saaf karthe karthe karthe guzarthe hain

Neeli, narangi, aur berang  ke saath ghar saaf karthe karthe karthe karthe guzarthe hain

Bara baje hong kong cafe main khanna khate haaste haaste maarthe haasthe haasthe guzarthe hain.

Ajeeb sa sahi Chaudhva din bhi

Guzargaya

Baaki bachcha ek din,

Baaki bacche satra ghate, yeh bhi

Guzarjayenge.

Chidhiya ki ek aank khuli

Dus ghanton main chidhya udd jayegi

Chidya ki dusri aankh khuli

Dus ghatin main chidhya ki zindagi badal jayegi

Pandra kapde haathi sey suicase main bharthe guzarthe hain

Bus no. 74 main Ang Mo Kio ki sair karthe guzarthe hain

Taxiwali sey ladthe, bigadthe, darthe, haste, hasathe guzarthe hain

Pachon dakaithi, neeli, berang aur lakad ke kaganwale sey Mc d’s main bida lethe guzarthe hain.

Neeli aur Jamuni dakaith ke shararthe sey guzarthe hain

Narangi ke saath check -in karke udthe guzargaye!

Aakhir sa aakhri din bhi

Guzargaya

Ab toh bus,

Jab yaad aayengey

Toh inn Pandra dino ki yaadon sey

Guzarjayenge.

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« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2009, 10:53:17 PM »
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too lengthy but too gud..
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Very nice poem
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« Reply #3 on: June 24, 2009, 04:01:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob Bambi ji. Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2009, 12:43:39 PM »
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Hi thanks for the appreciation.
@Panditji- This poem was written over a period of 15 days. Six lines for each day and a small story that was created in the process. Thats why the length.
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